Date: 01/06/08 08:24 am Title: Chapter 3
This was so great! And it was a really good idea to let us help you with the ideas.
Date: 01/06/08 07:54 am Title: Chapter 3
omg
this really is the perfect fanfic o_o
:D
yes it was a really good idea to ask questions to the reviewers :)
I cant wait for you to write more fanfics!
Author's Response: the perfect fanific...that is like holy...thanks love :) *wipes away tear in eye*
Date: 01/06/08 07:39 am Title: Chapter 3
lol, this was funny( and HOT)
and yeah, it's a good idea
Date: 01/06/08 06:21 am Title: Chapter 3
Wow, this chapter was amazing ! *drools* you write really good and you make the story just perfect ^.^ Asking questions after each chapter would be cool! :D
Author's Response: Ok now I have an idea for a question fanfic in my head...I'm going to go write it down thanks for rewieving (:
Date: 01/06/08 05:55 am Title: Chapter 3
wow i thought this was seriously good!!! and i think your idea is good...... =)
Date: 01/06/08 05:35 am Title: Chapter 3
Mae de Deus! Isso foi brutal!!! - sorry, but I love my language.xD what I said was: Holy mother of God! That was fantastic!
gosh...! you just made my dreams come true! this is like imaginating them doing it in the REAL life. (perv mode is on)
I dont think you need a chapter 4. (Im not saying that I didnt like it, I LOVED it) but it was a GOOD ending! x)
It looks like the ending of a movie! Its great! now..you should make us another story and please do it soon! =)
you're a really good writter! (envy) lol
adeus!!! (bye!!!)
Author's Response: oh my God that was like one of the best rewievs I have ever gotten thank you so much. I am so glad you liked the ending cus I was afraid I went too fast. I am writing tons of fics now, but I use SFP (search, find, push) cus I am such a slow writer :) and bye the way what language is that "Mae de Deus" I loved that I'm so going to start saying that :P thanks again for exelent rewiev you are the kind of person who brings reason to my life (as pathetick as that might sound)
Date: 01/06/08 04:46 am Title: Chapter 3
that was great.... pleasse keep up the great work... i loved the "real" life interaction... please more?
Author's Response: well this fic is done, but I write alot of twincest so maybe you'll stumble upon something you like :)
Date: 01/06/08 04:38 am Title: Chapter 3
1. Holy mother of god. That was clever. Very, very clever, and damn sexy.
2. I loved it. I LOVE it. and i always will love it :)
3. I think that is a great idea. That helps you with your writing and it makes readers (like me) feel all special if you use a variation of their suggestion.
Author's Response: 1. thank you alot 2. I am very glad you liked it 3. I am so writing a fic like that now
Date: 01/06/08 03:46 am Title: Chapter 3
god, it seems like it really was reality XD, gosh , like omg.
that'd be totally hot if Tom'd write such stories and Bill'd review him.
gooooodddd, it really is so good, duh duh duh duh.
Author's Response: haaaa...thats so funny (creepy to think that they could actually now about this comunity for example though)
Date: 01/06/08 03:31 am Title: Chapter 3
Hey!!! that was great!!! it was a lot fun and hot too ^^...anyway...I am so up for the fiction you have in mind...so keep it up...I'll be waiting ^^!!
See ya
Author's Response: you are oh thats great so if I do make one I'm counting on you to rewiev ;)
Date: 01/06/08 03:20 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh my god!!
- It's kinda like watching "The matrix", with all those different dimensions, you know? I loved it, absolutely loved it.. and I think it's a good idea to bring the readers into the fic, by answering questions, you are a genius!!
Author's Response: haha I have never watched The Matrix, but I'm taking that as a compliment thank :)
Date: 01/06/08 03:16 am Title: Chapter 3
OMG!! that was so awesome! great job hun!
Date: 01/06/08 01:55 am Title: Chapter 2
Haha that was great !! :D
Author's Response: thank you hope you will like chapter three as well :)
Date: 01/05/08 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
wow. i love it. ^_^ though i'm sure you've been told this about 50 times already today, but great job. keep it upppp!
Author's Response: well I'm not actually counting but I am very very happy that you rewievd in order to tell me. lots of love :)
Date: 01/05/08 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is hilarious. I wasn't expecting Bill to out Tom that quickly. lol Great job.
Author's Response: ah well Bill was pissed and knows how to push Tom buttons (of course he was rash at the moment too)
Date: 01/05/08 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
omg! i absolutely love the end of this chapter. i actually giggled.
Author's Response: hihi...that was my intention yes...glad you liked it :)
Date: 01/05/08 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
omg! i absolutely love the end of this chapter. i actually giggled.
Date: 01/05/08 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
that last bit of conversation got me. you have to please update this soon.
Author's Response: thanks about the conversation thing cus I wasn't really sure it fitted in, but it looks like you guys liked it :D *happy face*
Date: 01/05/08 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
This was seriously great.. I totally had a great laugh,... Hhahahahahah.. OMG.. More please :P *puppy eyes*
Author's Response: there will be more...when the time is right..haha just kidding, but there will be more