Date: 07/14/11 09:05 am Title: Chapter 1
While the idea of Bill and Tom doing it in risky place is one that I've seen before, what brought it out of the ordinary was that you had Bill including the G's in his plan and making it into a dare. And it was funny to see them all thrwarted and still laughing about it after. Nicely done!
Date: 04/16/10 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
hm i seem to have taken it upon myself to read pretty much all your works o.O i hope you don't think that stalkerish behaviour, though i'd completely understand if you did xD this was utterly brilliant, it made me chuckle on several occasions, i thoroughly enjoyed it, all of it :D thanks for writing and also, on a side note, thank you for all your author responses, you must get a lot so i really appreciate it ^^ again, this was amazing, take care!
Author's Response: Lol, not stalkerish at all - I'm just thrilled you're enjoying so many of them! I don't get that many reviews, so it means a lot.
Date: 12/13/09 04:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Hahah oh wow I loved this. XD The idea of Bill being all kinky and wanting to do it in a Haunted House is just *_* wow
And they got caught. XDDD
I'd have loved to see them running around without shirts though. XDD
Great fic, I loved it. :D
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm really glad you enjoyed it ^_^
Date: 12/05/09 01:00 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm kind of working my way through your stories, and I have to say, if my roommate wasn't asleep right now, I'd be laughing my ass off :x
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you, lol! I really had fun writing this so I'm glad you found it funny XD
Date: 09/16/09 12:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay! I'm so happy to know you wrote this fic -- if I haven't said it enough, I love, love, LOVE your stories ^^ It sucks that they couldn't choose a winner, but since this fic definitely deserves some sort of special recognition, I wanted to let you know that I voted for it, and this is what I told the judges:
"God, this fic was great! Aside from being hilarious, well-written, extremely entertaining, and very, very hot (though frustratingly truncated right at the good part), it was also the only fic where the last line made complete sense and fit in absolutely *perfectly*. I love it, love it, love it!"
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much. I really appreciate you letting me know that and I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this fic - and others I write - so much ♥ You made my morning!
Date: 09/09/09 01:13 am Title: Chapter 1
This should win. This was amazing. It was hot, hilarious, and you used the line perfectly. I vote for you! *favorites*
Author's Response: Overdue, but thank you so very much for this ♥
Date: 08/27/09 04:16 am Title: Chapter 1
...sometimes Tom was sure that Bill was sin incarnate... - what a way to describe him =P
...and he’d never been quite so glad of his baggy style... - always knew there way a reason behind those ridiculously-sexy oversized jeans hehe
...Stefan and the rest of security were there to protect them from the crazy fans after all; Tom just had to concern himself with surviving Bill... - i imagine that's gonna be quite difficult, no?
...Hold on – I’m taking Gustav along?... - well, duh *naughty mind working*
...this wasn’t part of the plan... - damn! should kill whoever that is
...Perfect end to the day really, being stuck for an hour with a half-naked Bill and too much of an audience to act on it... - tough luck there mister
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it ^_^
Date: 08/23/09 09:05 am Title: Chapter 1
that was the best. so, so funny. i laught about a million times, and reading this off the computer got me some wierd looks from my cousin in the other room, lol.
Author's Response: Lol! I'm really pleased you enjoyed the humour!
Date: 08/21/09 10:06 am Title: Chapter 1
I thought they were naked? Now I'm confused, but I still love it!
Author's Response: They pulled their pants back on before legging it! Thank you!
Date: 08/20/09 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOL - totally believable and very hilarious (and frustratingly hot - damn fangirls!) Definitely the best I've read in the challenge ^^
Author's Response: Thank you so much ♥
Date: 08/16/09 09:45 am Title: Chapter 1
You caught a good balance between funny and smutty that made the whole fic really worthwhile reading. I’m really impressed with the relationship build-up you managed within the word limit and while still keeping the story engaging and moving forward at a good pace.
The only downside to this story is that I’m never going to be able to enter a haunted house with quite the same attitude and I’m also going to have to resist the urge to check for “goings on” behind the scenes.
I also loved your characterisation of Bill as the pushy, boss man to Tom’s more submissive character that goes along after one look. It was interesting to read a story that kept that dynamic without Bill fading into a damsel in distress.
Somehow he was sure that, no matter what Gustav had told Bill, this wouldn’t be the end.
I hope it’s not the end and maybe you might feel persuaded to continue this line of adventures come the completion of the challenge. =]
Author's Response: I'm so so thrilled you enjoyed Bill's characterisation; I do love writing him as bossy and demanding and not a damsel character. Thank you so much for the lovely review - it really made me smile at the time!
Date: 08/16/09 06:26 am Title: Chapter 1
Yeah, I pretty much loved this. Your Bill is naughty and fun and thumbs his nose at all the rules and Tom just goes right along because there's no way he's saying no to Bill. The sex was hot, the dialogue was wonderful and the plot was great. Fabulous job. :)
Author's Response: Much belated thanks for this Mel ♥ I was so pleased you enjoyed it!
Date: 08/15/09 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was really excellent!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 08/14/09 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
“Right,” Georg agreed, back on task. “Hold on – I’m taking Gustav along?”
“Well you aren’t having Tomi,”
Favorite line. =D It sums up what I loved about this too - it was funny and sexy too, and always with the twin dynamic. =) I loved Bill's crazy schemes, and how the Gs are in the minute he says 'dare.' Boys. =P I was so pleased to see all the little details you were able to fit in even with the word limit, like Bill and Tom liking mayo on their fries and Georg being disgusted. And I kind of loved the fans calling Georg and Gustav 'the Gs!' And of course, Tom being a scaredy in the haunted house. ;) Just loved it all around!
Author's Response: I miss you Jelly ♥ Thank you for your love and support on these early fics.
Date: 08/14/09 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
hehehe, yes, ripping off their shirts is probably a very plausible story. lol n_n sweet and kinky, and damn, they didn't finish.
Between the dildos, butt-plugs, nipple clamps and cock-rings that Bill had decided to try at varying times – not to mention the incident with the handcuffs and the paddle –
That was my favorite line, it was just such a great opening. lol... I will never be able to see a haunted house in the same way...
Author's Response: Haha! Thank you, and I'm glad that line struck you - it was quite fun to write ^_^
Date: 08/14/09 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
excellent job...the story was smotth and made me be able to picture it in my mind...i like the idea of the guys half naked in a haunted house...*drools*
Author's Response: Hee, so do I - thank you!
Date: 08/14/09 08:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my gosh, you really managed to make fangirls sound like monsters XD Though I guess some do act that way :/ But this was so hilarious :'D
Author's Response: Some of them do, sadly. I'm thrilled you found it funny anyway though!
Date: 08/13/09 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
HAHAHA the best. loved it xD funny and sexy.... everything a fanfic should be ;D
Author's Response: Thank you so much ♥
Date: 08/13/09 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
This must be the best entry so far! So original and fun, brilliant writing and just a pleasure to read! This story will make it very far in this challenge!
Author's Response: Thank you for much for this review; it really made me smile way back!
Date: 08/13/09 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
EPIC WIN. I love this story, it made me crack up SO HARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FAVORITE.
I think this is FIRST PLACE. SERIOUSLY.
Author's Response: This was such a gorgeous first review - thank you so much!