Date: 09/13/09 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 4
hee hee, i am excited for bill to get new clothes. =)
Author's Response:
Thanks, but sadly, I don't think I'll describe the shopping trip in detail. But the new clothes will be his attempt at hiding his lack of boobage problem. I'll go into it in more detail during the story.
As always, thanks for the review.
Date: 09/12/09 01:48 am Title: Chapter 4
The boob thing still makes me ponder...
Date: 09/07/09 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 3
plz update soon thx=]
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :)
Date: 09/06/09 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 3
OMG OMG OMG! Man I have to stop reading sooo fast! I'm soooo fucking happy you updated! I'm in love with this story.
Author's Response: Thank You so much! I appreciate the enthusiasm. Knowing that there are people who are so in love with my story makes me want to write 24/7! :)
Date: 09/04/09 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 3
How is Bill getting away with having no boobs?
Author's Response: I will definately target this in detail during the story, but there are women with boobs so small they're practically nonexistant. That coupled with all the layer's he's wearing are keeping him safe... for now. ;)
Date: 09/04/09 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love the way you write Bill. Please continue this soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm trying to dedicate more time to writing.
Date: 09/04/09 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 3
lol, this is an interesting story n_n I think I like it, it's different than anything I've read here. lol, I love the sessions and Tom seems like an ass, but a fun ass to write XD I wouldn't mind betaing for you darlin', if you'd like. One thing, just to think about (hope this is constructive critism) is you don't have to go day by day when you're writing. Sometimes you can skip a day or two, by just throwing in a little tag or something like, "Bill was bored out of his mind for the next four days. Nothing was happening." lol, crappy example, but that kind of thing. You can make it for periods or something to, just say "The day went by annoyingly/stupidly slowly. He wanted to gut his brains out."
Another thing, it was either in this chapter, or the last chapter (can't remember things by chapter because I'm impaired that way) but you changed to first person for just one sentence, which threw me off for just a bit, maybe go back and have a look at that? lol, other than that I think you're doing pretty good, and I want to know what happens next :D
Lol, I loved the peeing while standing up line, it just made me smiled and laugh for some reason XD
Author's Response:
Thank you for the constructive crit! And going day by day is gettin a bit annoying to me too but (for now) I need to do that. I'm hoping that after the next chapter or two I'll speed things up a bit. And 1st person!!! Oh God... I am going to read over everything to try and find that now, that is one of my worst pet peeves.
And I'm glad you liked the whole peeing standing up thing. I smiled stupidly while writing that.
And, if you'd really like to beta please email me. I have a few questions to ask but that's about all.
Thanks for the review and I hope I hear from you soon. :)
Date: 09/04/09 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 3
i'm enjoying this story immensley...tom seems like a jerk...
Author's Response:
Don't worry, Tom is supposed to seem like a jerk... for some reason I'm attracted to alot of those lately. lol
Tom will undergo immense character developement, :)
Thank you for the review,
Date: 08/28/09 02:33 am Title: Chapter 2
LOVE THIS STORY!!! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!! Tom gives me goosebumps in a bad way though... ugh.
Author's Response:
In a bad way? Uh-Oh... don't worry, that'll change. At least I hope so... >__>
And yes! I'll update asap! But, really truly, I'm writing as fast as possible. Sorry for missing the intended wednesday update.
Thank you for leaving a review! I love that you love this story.
Date: 08/28/09 02:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Niiice man! This story is already interesting. I love it!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing both chapters! That's very considerate. :)
Date: 08/22/09 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
I am very happy with Automatic! =) I am very happy with this story, too, keep up the good work! Its a cool twist on the boarding school plot.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm glad you like my little plot twist. :)
Date: 08/20/09 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
plz update soon..i loved the song also=]
plz hurry and update..make billa and tomi meet and lovey=]
Author's Response: I'm glad you like my story! But I am feeling ill and I'm trying to write as rapidly as possible. But, as of now, be expecting an update by wedsnesday!
Date: 08/20/09 07:17 am Title: Chapter 2
i like the fact that he's trying to blend in with the girls...although PE may prove to be difficult...
Author's Response:
PE sucks. Always. With no exceptions! ._.
But we all know that secrets never last... He can't blend in for long! Muahahahaha! >:)
Uhm, please excuse that. lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/19/09 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
Bill's high note in Love and Death both terrifies me and leaves me in awe, since you asked about Automatic and I haven't listened to it yet.
I loved the chapter, I can't imagine what it would be like for Bill. I would cry, wouldn't you? :P
Awww, feel better honey.
Author's Response:
I would also cry! But if I was in an all boys school I wouldn't cry for long! ;)
If I was in an all girl's school, however, I would cry for a very long time!
And thank you! I'm still pretty sick and I'm drinking tea out of the wazoo but all these reviews make me so happy!
Date: 08/19/09 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
i love this idea...this should definately be interesting...
Author's Response:
I would hope so! lol, Lets see what other cruel and unusual things I could do to my favorite band members! ;)
I feel a little sorry for Bill in this story. Thankies for the compliment!
Date: 08/19/09 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
i love it! :D
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad. :)
Date: 08/19/09 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
this fic is great! :D
and yes I died too, i love the german version :)
Author's Response:
I love both versions but as we all know, their songs sound better in their original language. I've marked september 18th on my calendar and I'm trying to see if I can speed up time with my mind! It's not working yet :(
lol, Thanks so much for the review. I write for your (and anyone else's) enjoyment! XD
Date: 08/14/09 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh cute story! Update soon!
What's Bill gonna do about the lack-of-boob problem? Wear one of those water bras?
Author's Response: A water bra is a good idea, but I have a small plot bunny about his boobless-ness. Thanks for the encouragement, I'll update asap.
Date: 08/13/09 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow, lol. This looks like it's going to be fun x]. I can't wait for the next update lol
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm having fun writing it so I hope everyone enjoys it.
Date: 08/12/09 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Haha...you know what? I have a masculine name, and when I was little I always used to accidentally get enrolled at the boy's summer camp. I always say that if I had been a little older, I probably wouldn't have minded!
Cute story concept, can't wait to see more.
Author's Response: lol Wow, that sounds intresting! There's nothing masculine about my name, in fact I think its to fluffy for me but there are things you can't change. =D I sure as hell wouldn't mind going to a boy's summer camp! Can you say SWIM TRUNKS! Just imagine! @_____@ That thought just made me very happy, indeed. Thank you for making laugh and inspiring a very lovely little day dream!