Date: 09/30/11 05:38 am Title: Chapter 1
lol funny!!
an a good story!
u should do a sequel to this!!
Date: 07/14/11 08:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Found this quite by random. The plot was very good, not a typical one and yet one that kind of lets us (that are girls) in on the strange mind of guys. The fic was funny and short enough for any errors to be ignored, and just enjoyed for what it was, a fun read. Thanks!
Date: 03/20/11 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
I wanna know how the hell you came up with something like this! LoL I laughed so hard I had tears in my eyes!
Date: 11/07/10 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hahaha, that was brilliant! You managed to get the last line to fit so well. But honesty, the teddy bit? Oh how I cringed. O.o Apart from that though, it was awesome! :DD
Date: 02/11/10 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Haha this is freaking funny! Why would anyone fuck a vaccum? Lol that's just too weird! :P
Date: 12/23/09 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
XD!!!
BAHAHAHAHHAHHA
I totally imagined that
:o
Fucking epic.
RESPEKT.
c:
Date: 12/22/09 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
I laughed so hard reading this story that my mother thinks I'm mentally deranged.
Date: 11/04/09 12:20 am Title: Chapter 1
dude that was funny
Date: 09/18/09 03:13 am Title: Chapter 1
lmfao! a vacuum!!!i would mever let that go! *dies in fits of laughter* good job on the story! :D
Date: 09/09/09 12:46 am Title: Chapter 1
roflmfao. This was amazing. Sadly, I could see Tom actually fucking all of those things *grins*. I'd love to see a sequel to this.
Date: 09/07/09 12:26 am Title: Chapter 1
MUWAHAHAHAH! Man.. dude! ... No word can explain how fucking awesome this story is and how much it made me laugh... GREAT JOB YO!
Date: 09/06/09 04:28 am Title: Chapter 1
...Your fucking a loaf of bread and you think I'm the one with the problem?... - *rolls eyes* he's impossible
...Sure, maybe a bad case of horny-desparate-fool-niousis!... - hehehe, rely on Georg to be the mature one
...Bill only looked like that when he was about to verbally abuse someone, that someone usually being him... - o0o0o0o, i can picture bill, huffing a bit, arms crossed, trying to keep a straight/serious face
...Tom, you're a fucked up inanimate-nymphomaniac, and I think you need counseling... - *cracks*
...Tom stood in his spot, alone and hurt. He whispered to himself, "Ouch.."... - *groans* yeah, OUCH!!!
...He needed to make a call... - poor tom! well let that be a lesson, dont do this at home, kids!!
...They still have to take him in for x-rays... - i dont think u can x-ray 'that' part of the human anatomy, no bones. but maybe with contrast its possible *needs to open back lecture notes*
...They kissed again softly, unaware of their remaining two band mates standing at the door, amused grins on their faces... - hehehe, very nice use of the last line.. "we" as in the Gs only =P
Date: 08/22/09 02:12 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG---laughed until I cried and my stomach hurt!!!!!!!!!
Date: 08/18/09 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Funniest thing I've read i a while :D xD
Date: 08/16/09 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Brilliant idea, the thought that people actually do that and the following consequences is probably enough to have me laughing all week – not to mention giggling every time I see a vacuum from now on. There were quite a few spelling errors so I would suggest getting a beta reader before posting. Also the final line was slightly changed. In the spirit of fairness I don’t think that should be allowed, simply because other people would probably have posted different material had they been allowed to change the line.
I must admit that the plot was hilarious and, overall, it was an excellent idea for a challenge entry. =]
P.S. Where was Gustav for most of the story? He seemed to materialise at the end along with David.
Date: 08/13/09 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh god, oh god this has to be the best one shot i've ever read! i laughed so hard, tom bad bad boy LOL!
Date: 08/13/09 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked it a lot. I thought it was funny, but there were a lot of spelling errors, which made it extremely hard to follow.
Date: 08/13/09 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, the last line doesn't seem to fit, biut to be honest I don't give a f**k because I laughed my ass off the whole time. Now I want to see the pictures....*is sickpuppy*