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Reviewer: JaneFallen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/09 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

LMAO!
The writing sounded serious, but the story was hilarious itself! I don't really know which one overtakes - the seriousness or the hilariousness. But of course, I laughed. Sometimes pain is sickly hilarious, right? And the end line went PERFECT! I didn't expect that line to go so good with this story.
Good job

Reviewer: ilovetomkaulitzzz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/09 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

okay, so who ever you are, I just want to let you know that I want to have your babies. and that this was actually cracking me up to no end. and i think i know a couple of people who may have done this. but in the end you never really know, do you? :D ;)

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