Date: 08/16/09 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story was perfect!! The last line fit in perfectly. All of this challenge fics are a riot. good job too n.n
Date: 08/15/09 09:14 am Title: Chapter 1
...The name-calling had gone from ‘sex doll’ to ‘cyborg’ and the most recent one had been ‘humanoid’... - teheee, never thought of that *suddenly has the urge to get on a plane to see the wax Bill*
...Yup, Gustav was just too cute, uhm smart to mess with... - brains and brawn he is ^__^
...Then we don't have to hide, let's go skinny dipping!... _ *squeals*
...Bill wasn't really known for his cooking skills... - hehe idc! can i have a slice for this review? pretty please with bill on top? =P
Date: 08/13/09 10:46 am Title: Chapter 1
hahaha XD i haven't read a story with Bushido in it for a LONG time so this was a nice surprise =]
Date: 08/12/09 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
dingoes, huh? this was interesting...and i understand about the whole revenge cycle...it's never ending...
Date: 08/12/09 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
The wax figure of Bill is simply stunning. Just as beautiful as the real thing. This was rather amusing.
Date: 08/12/09 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hahahaa, in Bushido's face! He thought totally wrong about his surpise. LOL, It's only apple pie. ;) Even though all the ending sentences are the same, I liked how this one turned out. Amazing! :)
Date: 08/12/09 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
lol n_n that was great. It was kind of random, and I would've liked better transitions, but it was the style of writing I think, so it worked
Although that could have been because she so obviously had no interest in them, other than the make up-tips Bill provided.
favorite line :D my favorite part had to be Bill with his apple pie and Bubu's (love that, laughed everytime I read it...) reaction.
Date: 08/12/09 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
I very much liked the different idea behind the Humanoid title - the ongoing rivals in the band were nicelt portrayed. Bushido's involvement made me laugh, too. Though now I totally want to see a pic of Bill in an apron making apple pie... *_*