Date: 07/24/12 05:28 am Title: Chapter 1 No Smoke Without Fire
No matter what, I totally think it was Gustav. I couldn't not imagine it as Gusti. Just the flirting and the cooking... I just get a distinct Gustav feel.
Date: 03/19/10 08:24 am Title: Chapter 1 No Smoke Without Fire
OMG hot hot hot hot!!!!! I loves it! Me hopes it was Bill...he can lick sauce of me anytime!!!!!!!
Date: 12/15/09 06:02 am Title: Chapter 1 No Smoke Without Fire
i think i'll go with bill? :] :
Author's Response: I think that's a great choice. Maybe it is....maybe it isn't. XD Thank you for your review!
Date: 11/27/09 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 1 No Smoke Without Fire
Awesome story loved it going in my favs for sure
Author's Response: Aww, that's so sweet, thanks so much! :D
Date: 11/06/09 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 1 No Smoke Without Fire
I think it sounded a lot like Tom :3 thank you for this amazing story
Author's Response: XD Tom would be pretty amazing wouldn't he? You're very welcome, and thank you for reviewing!
Date: 11/04/09 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 1 No Smoke Without Fire
i'm think tom was the guy, cause if it was one of the other guys, when they came back for dinner tom would've cracked a joke about the guy having no pants on :D
Author's Response: AHAHAHAHA! XD They are all pretty mean....but I so love your logic for this one! Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 08/19/09 11:04 am Title: Chapter 1 No Smoke Without Fire
At first, I thought maybe it was Gustav, because of the way he spoke and flirted and all that with the girl. Then I realized it couldn't be him, because you said dark hair. So, in my head, I shall play two visual tracks at the same time for this. One stars Bill, the other Georg.
Lovely het.
Author's Response: Not Gustav? Maybe you should check those photos of him.....I seem to remember him dying his hair black.........;) But Bill and Georg are also very nice fits! XD Thank you for your review!
Date: 08/17/09 05:47 am Title: Chapter 1 No Smoke Without Fire
...To kiss it better... - aaaawwwwww, can i have one? (dont matter who it's from hehe)
0_________0 byebye sauce
...I think it's fixable... - yeah right, byebye jeans
* well, the flirtatiousness makes me think of Tom first. but then he's such a playful sweetheart i couldn't help think of Bill. then again it could have been a very confident-of-his-cooking-skills Georg. or maybe when Gustav's not being so serious, we might just see the romantic in him..... =P
Author's Response: AHA! XD You've got all bases covered here! Bill and Tom and Georg and Gustav! Let's just have all four, shall we?! :D Thanks for your review!
Date: 08/16/09 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 1 No Smoke Without Fire
interesting concept...i have a feeling it's either Tom or Georg, but I really am just shooting in the dark. it was nice a short, but it got the main feeling. I liked it :)
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! Well, it could be Tom or Georg......;)
Date: 08/14/09 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 1 No Smoke Without Fire
lmfao. that was quite hilarious :]
for some reason i keep imaging georg being the guy o.O haha idk why :P
Author's Response: Why, thank you! Hmm, Georg could be quite a nice fit....;)
Date: 08/13/09 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 1 No Smoke Without Fire
funny...don't know who it's about but i liked it...it's amzing how sex can make you forget about everything...
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! Yeah, I get pretty easily distracted...;)
Date: 08/13/09 12:18 am Title: Chapter 1 No Smoke Without Fire
Okay... So I submitted a ridiculously long review completely sure of my analysis for this story. I read it again, and some of the stuff that I read this time seemed to pop out at me. What I said before was: It's Tom and some girl getting it on, forgetting the sauce on the stove and by the time the other three come back, it's a burnt kitchen in front of them with two bewildered people. The only change I got from my thoughts are that maybe this time it's Bill and a girl and not Tom. Sure, you'd think it's Tom at first with some of the character traits of being a jerk and flirty-like... But with the second read it's clear to me that it should be Bill. Some points were the LONG (not baggy) pants the girl used to put out the flames, the childlike playing with the sauce on letting her taste it, the implying of him not being a good cook (I don't think it's ever been noted that any of boys are, actually), and that he was distracted enough with the girl that he didn't noticed the burning sauce not too far away. I think all of that has Bill written all over it, but still, I could be wrong. I won't think to hard on this though... This story was great!
Author's Response: XD I really like your analysis of the story, it's very intelligent and well-thought out. I'll never tell who it's really about....I'm evil. Thank you for your reviews!
Date: 08/12/09 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 1 No Smoke Without Fire
*shakes head and taps desk* Where do I start with this story? I don't even know. I'll just go from the beginning to the end. That's seems to be the most simple. Okay, I was thinking maybe Tom was making himself some Kaulitz pasta sauce, but I'm guessing that maybe it's wrong. I'm not sure, it was never clear to me. Anyway as the story goes on, I like how that tension is being built between them from the slice of her thumb. Tom was a jerk about giving her a taste of the sauce, I expected that LOL. When it fell on her shirt, I knew then and there I was preparing for some sort of sexy scene. When you mentioned "bench" a few times during their sex scene, I thought of "park bench" and can't think of that being in a kitchen. Also, there were a couple of spelling mistakes (when so focused on a scene like that, it doesn't take alot to be thrown off LOL) which were small. When they put out the fire I was surprised that they didn't have a harder of a time. I didn't expect anyone to suffocate or anything, but that fire that was out of control seemed to be easily tamed. Once Bill and the others came in, I like how you didn't say their names. Kind of gave it a 'keep your focus on the couple that's naked in a burnt kitchen' effect. :) Sadly, I couldn't figure who the girl was and it doesn't bother me one bit. This story was really awesome!! Terrific job!
Author's Response: PARK BENCH! AHAHAHAHAHA! XD Oh my God, that's hilarious! And my approach to the fire was that it wasn't actually as bad as they thought. They were just exaggerating it because they were panicking. XD Thank you so much for your review!
Date: 08/12/09 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 1 No Smoke Without Fire
lol, the whole jeans thing was priceless n_n lol, lovely :)
Author's Response: XD Thank you very much!
Date: 08/12/09 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 1 No Smoke Without Fire
The first impressions I got was that it was Bill, and then that stuck in my mind all the way through the story. And the second character was Tom, but I guess that depends on the reader. I thought this story was lovely -- the build up wasn't too long, the sex was really sweet, and the ending with the fire was pretty amusing, and realistic. Nice job :)
Author's Response: Aww, what a nice reveiw, thank you! Maybe it was Bill AND Tom? XD
Date: 08/12/09 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 1 No Smoke Without Fire
Good use of the prompt although I felt the band as a whole could have been included a little more to really connect the story to the closing line. There were a few minor spelling mistakes but nothing that was noticeable until the second reading and I felt that the first few paragraphs should have been condensed together for continuity. I really liked the sense of ambiguity about the main character - leaving the identity debatable leaves the story open to a wider audience. I'm already considering reading it again with a different main pairing in mind. ;)
Author's Response: Yes, I noticed those mistakes after I submitted it at the last minute and could no longer change it. ;) Serves me right for waiting til the last minute. And you've hit the nail on the head, I purposely left it open so that pretty much anyone could enjoy it. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :D
Date: 08/12/09 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 1 No Smoke Without Fire
Somehow this seemed like Bill to me; probably the ditzy forgetting of the food. It was a nice way to do things, not identifying who it was, and a neat use of the prompt. I did find that I wasn't totally convinced by their relationship though, perhaps because of the lack of names. It took a moment for the lemon to really capture me - as if the first couple of paragraphs were going through the motions. You did pull it back though, and the fire breaking out along with sacrificing the jeans was a giggle. Nicely done!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! The prompt was difficult, and I purposely wanted to keep this one a little anonymous, so hence the lack of names. It couldn't really be helped. XD
Date: 08/12/09 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 1 No Smoke Without Fire
lmfao.
that was good. :)
Author's Response: XD Thank you...........
Date: 08/12/09 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 1 No Smoke Without Fire
Hmmm. I'm thinking it was either Tom or Georg. *goes away to think `about it more*
Author's Response: XD Let me know what you come up with, hmmm?