Date: 11/03/10 07:19 am Title: Announcements and Memories
Loved it!
Date: 08/02/09 11:47 pm Title: Times Like These
OMFG PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEEEEEE UPDATE :3 AND i woulld luv to make u banner just let me know bout the details :3
Date: 10/19/08 08:21 am Title: Times Like These
First, sorry for not reading this when it went up. I havent been reading ANYTHING in like...two or three months. So, sorry for this belated review.
Second, thank you so much for the dedication :)Im glad I was able to help.
Third, you have improved tremendously, by writing style I mean. The chapter isnt just a wall of dialog, and the descriptions are pretty good :)
Now I'll get to the actual chapter :D
Its so sad that Nicole has to leave. But its so totally cool that Bill is being so supportive and sticking up for her :)
Good work! I hope you update soon:)
If I dont review again, its probably coz Im not reading fics or sth. If you want my feedback just let me know by mailing me or leaving a review etc. I'll get to it right away :)
Please update soon!
Date: 09/27/08 09:22 am Title: Times Like These
Woo go Bill! Tell him what's what!
Date: 08/31/08 01:54 am Title: Times Like These
Loved it cant wat for more.
Date: 07/21/08 08:16 pm Title: Times Like These
I love the new update!!!
~Emily
Date: 05/30/08 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love you story! I really really hope you continue, it's extrememly good!!! :)
And you are totally right about Tom, if he keeps playing around like that he could get a STD!! Great Job!
I want TOM as my review prize!! HAHAHA
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for your review (: Haha, it seems like everyone is wanting Tom as their prize 9: I wonder why ... O__o LoL .. I'm glad you like it, and HOPEFULLY, I will get the next chapter up soon (: _GivesYouTom; Now you behave kids...
Date: 05/15/08 03:31 am Title: Chapter 3
I really liked this :) Way to go with the more description thing, it made it much easier to read. Oooh,I wonder what the media will do ;D
Loved it :) Hope you update it soon :)
P.S: Couldn't help but notice; its "missed" not "misseded"
Author's Response: Lol, thanks :) Ohh, and i know that its "missed" but in real life, my friend Kaylea and I always say "misseded" its random, but whatever :p ; i didn't know if anyone would mind ;p .. And the media thinger was totally inspired by your last review :) , the next chapter is being dedicated to you i think, because you inspired mee :p Danke Sehr !
Date: 05/14/08 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 3
OMG..
Bill!! ♥
gummibears rock..8D
and you story does too...♥
UDPATE!!
Date: 05/14/08 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
Loved it I hope you update it soon. I want Bill
Date: 04/25/08 01:57 am Title: Announcements and Memories
gonnaa finish writing?
this was goood(:
Date: 04/23/08 07:35 pm Title: Announcements and Memories
i luv it.
add soon plz!
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Date: 04/12/08 07:56 pm Title: Announcements and Memories
oh so sweet! aww Billy's gonna be a daddy. haha. update soon? :) such a sweet story!!!
Date: 04/12/08 05:35 pm Title: I Have A Secret
I love it! I don't was reading through all of your previous reviews, and it occured to me that they needed more 'description' and that's fine, but some parts there is ok to not have so much, and rather let the reader fill the holes^^
-Like myself xD I've had the exact same daydreams like your ff, and have my own based on them ff (I haven't posted them though...>.>). So I know little detail and feeling very well, so I can just imagine to be -Nicole. And you're writing beautifully and the grammar is just great, so there's no bug letting down the reading experience for me^^
And there were some parts where I was literally melting, and just wanted to be in her position^^' -Like everyone else xD
But update, update!^^ -For me, please!:O I got hooked!
B.
Date: 04/12/08 03:35 pm Title: Announcements and Memories
FINALLY!!!! FINALLY!!!! FINALLY!!!! i was just in the car for 3 hrs and seeing your story updated made me soooo friggan happy!!! no jokes!!!
i hope u update again soon!!!!
Author's Response: i'm glad your happy :p and i'm working on the third chapter right now, hopefully i don't end up getting writers block again, but as of now, things are looking good ... thanks for the review ! ^_^
Date: 04/12/08 03:20 pm Title: Announcements and Memories
aww this is too good nehoo update i love it
and if u update u keep yo gummibears and i give u more ok
yey
ly
xx
Date: 04/12/08 03:18 pm Title: Announcements and Memories
Well, I must say that this is very interesting :) I mean, I don't think I've ever read a fic where Bill's girlfriend gets pregnant. It certainly IS intriguing :)
Overall, I think this is a great start. Your grammar is wonderful and that's a really good thing, because some writers have HORRIBLE grammar. But I do think you could add some more description. I think that description makes the reader actually "feel" that they are in the story. But maybe that's just me :)
One more thing, are the tabloids going to go insane over her getting pregnant and only being 15? Because he's 18 and technically an adult so he could be in danger of being arrested. Well, that would definitely call for some drama :P
I really think you should continue :) I'm very curious to find out what happens next :)
P.S: I hope you're not mad at me lol
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and no I'm not mad .. I think you've just given me total inspiration for the next few chapters (with the thing about the tabloids) and i've never really thought about the fact that he is technically considered an adult .. oops :p! lol .. I will try to do my best with the next chapter as far as the description goes,
rnrn again .. thank you so much for the review ! :)