Date: 08/12/09 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
omg!!!! come on, tom!!! make bill yours!!! continue !!! continue!!XD
Author's Response: :P i will dont worry :D
Date: 08/12/09 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 3
Awe...Bill's pissed and Tom's curious. Bad combination. Tom...lemme tell you, curiosity killed the cat.
Author's Response: we cant kill sparkles again xD?
Date: 08/12/09 11:22 am Title: Chapter 2
Aww, the ending of this chapter made me so happy ^_^ It's unbelievably cute! :)
Author's Response: hahah thanx :D
Date: 08/12/09 10:11 am Title: Chapter 2
Uh...*scratchs head* uh...what? Either this is going rather quickly or Tom likes Bill from a long time ago, or Tom was just doing that for show. Hope it's the last one, or the story will be short.
Apart from that, the quality of your writing is improving a lot :D Like more mature or something.
Author's Response: the story is long trust me.. ive wrote 12 chapters alread.d. it does slow down a bit.. but later on.. i think after chapter 12 i think.. it explains why tom pretty much jumped at Bill... the storry line may sound familure to you but meh XD
Date: 08/12/09 09:51 am Title: Chapter 1
well them update it all!
Author's Response: hah i will son :F
Date: 08/12/09 06:50 am Title: Chapter 2
what is 6th form?
Author's Response: here in the UK you finish school when you are 16... so you can either go find a job or go to what we call 6th form or Collage... in 6th form we get taught alot like we did in normall school.. where as in collage is may be a bit more relaxing becuase the teachers dont really care if you turn up there.. where as 6th form, you get paid to go there and studdy .. really hard..rnrnthough you dont have to go to either if you dont wanna.. but if you wanna go to Uni.. you have to go to one or the other. rnrn6th form is a better choice for those who needs someone to teach THEM step by step.. the classes are alot smaller like.. 5 or 6 pupils per class. where as collage.. you may have 300 people in one class.
Date: 08/12/09 04:02 am Title: Chapter 2
*dies* ZOMG! Too cute.
And Bill in the banner! Cutest pic ever.
Author's Response: DONT DIE -sticks naked georg infront of you- rnand thanx.. it hink its too rushed but it HAS to be. =/
Date: 08/12/09 01:33 am Title: Chapter 2
omg!!!!!! i love it!!!!! thanks!! XD
Date: 08/12/09 01:09 am Title: Chapter 2
AWWW!!! RACHEL. NEW ST0RY. YAYA
Author's Response: yerp time for me to write a story on my own lol XD
Date: 08/12/09 01:04 am Title: Chapter 2
ooooohhhhhmmmmmyyyyyyygggggooooossssshhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is absolutely AMAZING!!! update more chappies!! haha "narrator? bill asr you going crazy?" "probably, but shh!" pure genius!
Author's Response: hhah yes my fav lines too XD
Date: 08/12/09 12:33 am Title: Chapter 2
Lol i completly luv its so i dont know how to say but i luv it... and i like wen ppl update fast so i wont have to wait... im impatient wen it comes to reading hahaha
Author's Response: il probably update everyday,,, untill i run out of chapters and have to write more XD
Date: 08/11/09 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOL! i love how Bill talks to the narrator! its funny.
"Narrator? Bill are you going crazy?"
"Probably, but shh."
ahaha i cracked UP at that! more soon ja?
Author's Response: ive said those things in school once.. i could here these people talking about me.. and my friend was like.. rach... are you here or on another planet and i went.. sh im listening to a narator XD
Date: 08/11/09 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Uh...just one thing. Pay a bit more attention to the fact that defiantly and definitely are different words. Also punctuation is important. Apart from that, you did a better than usual job at spelling, your keyboard loves you now?
Also, you know what I told you about this story, but meh, I still want to know what happens next.
Author's Response: lol i just uploaded 2nd chapter :P