Date: 08/23/09 12:14 am Title: Chapter 8
hmm... I think we all know... **wiggles eyebrows**
haha ^_^ :P
Author's Response: haha yes
Date: 08/22/09 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 8
omg about time weeeeeeeee
Author's Response: i couldnt be mean no more
Date: 08/22/09 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 8
i want to finally happen... to them to admit it and finnaly happen
Author's Response: they will soonish
Date: 08/22/09 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 8
I loved it. I got so happy that they finally kissed and in front of everyone, wow. I loved how in their room they don't have to pretend to be together yet Tom pinned Bill to the bed kissing him, love it.
Author's Response: haha yess :D
Date: 08/22/09 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 8
plz update sooon thx soso much=]=]
Author's Response: will :D
Date: 08/22/09 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
:O LOVE IT!
Author's Response: yay :D
Date: 08/22/09 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey, I'm not wanting to sound mean or anything; but: I keep coming back to this story, trying to decide if I want to read it or not. What keeps throwing me off is the summery. The typos and errors in it makes me very hesitant to start reading this. I think if you cleaned up your summery (checked for spelling errors, etc.) it'd do you a lot of good. It'd make everything look nicer, and you might even get more reads! Just thought I'd lend some advice. xxAli
Author's Response: hay thanks.. i was meanng to change that actually cause when i first put the storry up it kept getting not accepted (couldnt thinkof the word) so i got annoyed with re writing it like 50 times... thanx for reminding me :D
Date: 08/22/09 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 8
uhh i want them to fuck
Date: 08/21/09 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 7
Damn right. Tom's dad should really stop being an ass and interrupting them ¬¬'
Author's Response: i don tthink hes noticing XD
Date: 08/21/09 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 7
I am going to kill that father of his. . .
Author's Response: il join you
Date: 08/21/09 06:16 am Title: Chapter 7
*new reader alert*
omg!! i love it!! squeeeee
awsomeness xD raelly cool fic so far! but i'm really starting to dislike tom's dad for constantly interrupting them >.<
pretty please update soon? (A) i'm LOVING this fic!!
Author's Response: lol most people hate toms dad XD but he doesnt know, remember he just thinks there acting :P
Date: 08/21/09 01:32 am Title: Chapter 7
OMG lol people need to stop interrupting them when they are about to kiss.
I'm glad Tom's nana isn't dying .
Author's Response: arent we all :D rnand yeah xD poor tom an dbill
Date: 08/21/09 01:16 am Title: Chapter 7
awwwww!!! i am so happy!!! his nana won´t die!!!! thanks the best thing ever!! XD
continue!!
again!!! his father is so inoportune!!! XD continue!! please!!
Author's Response: i will write hte next chapter tonight, though if i get it beta'd and up will be another story xD
Date: 08/21/09 12:45 am Title: Chapter 7
god damnit tom's dad is fucking annoying!!!! grr i want to poke him repeatedly. lol great story so far : D
Author's Response: same lets poke him togehter
Date: 08/20/09 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 7
hahaha... will they ever get to kiss
Author's Response: ohhh yes :P XD
Date: 08/20/09 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 7
Ahh people need to let them kiss! already! gosh!
Author's Response: they doo soon .. ish xd
Date: 08/20/09 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 7
aww yay :D Thats very good news :)
& Bill & Tom are just so cute together ^_^
Date: 08/20/09 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 7
so does this mean tom actually likes bill?
Date: 08/20/09 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 7
ys that always happen 2 them...plz update soon thx=]
Author's Response: you should like the next one.. if i like ever update XD still have to write it
Date: 08/20/09 07:51 am Title: Chapter 1
yes, billi is super cute
