Date: 11/04/09 09:36 am Title: Chapter 12: The Winner
-Eyes up Bill cookie- Amazing job on the cookies. -fidgets with hands- So the chapter, was adorable. I love their interaction :) -fidgets more and whispers- May I have a Bill cookie???
Author's Response: -pets- course you can have a bill cookie -hands bill cookie, or three- -skvishes- vi says "hi", btw. XD
Date: 11/04/09 08:06 am Title: Chapter 12: The Winner
*takes cookie* danke...so he finally freaked out...it's about time...and all because a girl touched him...kinda like in "Fries"...though not as bad...and he grandmother knows...go figure...
Date: 11/04/09 02:13 am Title: Chapter 12: The Winner
Aww the granny apporves...that's cool. I love a freaking out Tom too, it's hilarious.
Date: 11/04/09 12:20 am Title: Chapter 12: The Winner
i wanna Bill one! I loved this sweetie!!!!! you should update this one more often *gives you cupcakes*
Date: 11/03/09 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 12: The Winner
I'M A FAITHFUL REVIEWER, AND I LIKE COOKIES! I'LL TAKE ONE OF EACH, PLEASE. HELL, TWO, IF YOU CAN SPARE THEM!
I loved Tom's freak out. It was cute, with the spluttering and the unfinished sentences and the chickens.
Date: 10/31/09 01:55 am Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Confusion
Man, I love this story. I hope you update again soon.
“Who do you like, then?”
The younger boy stood up and stretched knowing that their mother and Gordon had probably gone to sleep already. “Doesn’t really matter. He doesn’t like me."
That's one of my favorite parts. So cute! Looking forward to future chapters. *Smiles*
Date: 10/28/09 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 11: A Kiss... Or Two
love it!
Date: 10/28/09 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 9: At the River
cute!! cute cute cute!! they are both just too cute in this story, i love it!
Date: 10/28/09 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 3: Twin Talk
oh god, this is soo cute!! quickly moving up on the list my fav stories of yours. you two are too much, and i mean that in the best possible way! =)
Date: 10/28/09 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Confusion
ooh, poor tomi, afraid ppl will laugh at him. being a teenager sucks in so many ways!
Date: 10/13/09 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 11: A Kiss... Or Two
i'm sure bill has a lot to say about it...
Date: 10/09/09 11:28 am Title: Chapter 11: A Kiss... Or Two
So... Can we vote ourselves, or no? XD
Date: 10/08/09 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 11: A Kiss... Or Two
LOVIN' IT!!!!!
I feel like I'm at McDonald's.
Date: 10/08/09 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 11: A Kiss... Or Two
You know -shifty eyes- you would think he would be so evil now that he has gotten his way ?! But nope, not Billa. That boy is just plain evil .. but oh so hot when he is... LOL XD
The kiss was so sweet and I am so proud of Tom for not having some form of meltdown in the process :)
-huggles Tomi and Billa-
Rachy
Date: 10/08/09 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 11: A Kiss... Or Two
awwwww! so sweet!!! do it again, Tom!!!
Date: 10/08/09 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 11: A Kiss... Or Two
Oh my gosh. What the hell possessed that girl to kiss Tom? Where was her brain? WHat a dork.
Ali and Vi, thanks for putting word out there about or awards ceremony. Word of mouth is one of the most effective means of advertising.
Date: 10/08/09 03:15 am Title: Chapter 11: A Kiss... Or Two
oh oh oh yay they kissed. =D
Date: 10/07/09 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 10: Questions
even at that age men can't tell anyone their feelings...it's a cute chapter...and i'm proud of tomi not freaking out...yet...
Date: 10/07/09 11:15 am Title: Chapter 10: Questions
Those twoare so cute to watch/read
Date: 10/06/09 01:27 am Title: Chapter 10: Questions
Awe so cute. xD and funny and all that other good stuff.