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Reviewer: THROX Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/09 12:39 am Title: A New Job and A New Home

That was interesting..

Author's Response: Is this a good interesting or a bad interesting?

Reviewer: makemesmile Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/09 12:24 am Title: A New Job and A New Home

ouh i like this!
when I was in German class my teacher said it was "Entschuldigen Sie Bitte" for Excuse me in the formal polite form. I'm not sure how translators work but iunno. :) more soon?!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'll file that away in my German folder. My German class just started and so I haven't learned much, so for now, it'll be online translators, idk how they work either, so I hope I don't butcher anything too bad. But glad you liked it and I plan to update as soon as I can.

Reviewer: thogje Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/15/09 12:19 pm Title: Gone Too Far

Aww poor Tom D: Can't wait till next chapter !

Author's Response: Just posted the 3rd chapter...and Tom's life gets better, I promise.

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 07:56 pm Title: Gone Too Far

plz update soon thx=]=]

Author's Response: Just posted the next chapter, it's simply waiting on approval.

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 05:59 pm Title: Gone Too Far

That was good...I liked it.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: THROX Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 10:28 am Title: Gone Too Far

oh wow this is getting better and better by the chapter..Can't wait till more..

Author's Response: Yayness! It's getting better! *does random dance* You just made my shitty day better! Anyways, glad you like it.

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 04:10 am Title: Gone Too Far

so far so good, i look forward to more!! =)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 01:09 am Title: Gone Too Far

awe.:(.

Author's Response: Why the sad face?

Reviewer: Ascuba Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/09 06:09 am Title: The Beginning

O.o ooo scary... We used to have Doc Holiday's place but the idiots tore it down here. >.> *grumbles* no appreciation for history at all. But I wouldn't blame you. Spalding County looks like the chicken leg in the center of GA. XD

Author's Response: I've actually heard of Spalding county! Lol, anyways, I can't believe they would tear down Doc Holiday's place...that sucks.

Reviewer: Ascuba Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/09 09:54 pm Title: The Beginning

I live down below Atl. In Griffin. It's between the ATL and Macon. Oh and we're known for the first black running lady XD

Author's Response: Hmmm...never really heard of Griffin, but I used to go to Macon all the time, so I've probably been through it. I "officially" live in Rock Spring...my area is known for the creamatory incident.

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/09 06:40 pm Title: The Beginning

plz udate sooon thx=]

Author's Response: I'll try, if not tomorrow, the next hopefully.

Reviewer: nekodark Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/09 03:11 pm Title: The Beginning

You have got to continue this, I beg you please!! *Hugs Tom*

Author's Response: Lol, I plan to, don't worry, I'm in the process of refining the second chapter to post.

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/09 03:04 pm Title: The Beginning

Awe.
I hate parents who act like that.
Just because things are shitty, their attitudes just make everything shittier.
If they would just own up to their fucking actions, maybe they'd get somewhere.
Their so fucking torn up with guilt, worry, and sorrow for their own fucking self's they don't notice what's going on around them.
Bastards.

Author's Response: Wow...quite a response, basically how I feel about the situation though.

Reviewer: Raiya Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/09 02:33 pm Title: The Beginning

Oh, wow.. =[. It's sad so far, but it looks like it's going to be good. I can't wait for the next update =]

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you like it.

Reviewer: AngelKisses Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/09 01:44 pm Title: The Beginning

i like it! Jorg is so awful though. I hope Tom and Bill meet soon. keep adding!

Author's Response: Glad you like it and they will, if not the next chapter, the third probably.

Reviewer: Ascuba Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/09 01:40 pm Title: The Beginning

*pokes* You're hosting the story in GA. I'm sooooo happy about that. I live like... 45 minutes away from Atlanta so its like... BILL LIVES IN ATL ZOMG. but ja... I'm curious as to how exactly this goes. :D

Author's Response: You're from GA? What city? I live up in the tri-state area near TN, but I go to school in Carrollton. But aside from this excitement =) I'm glad you like the story.

Reviewer: xxchelseao0xx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/09 12:02 pm Title: The Beginning

Wow, that part where Tom's father beat him up was so unexpected - but I loved it ... well, not that Tom got beat up, but, you know what I mean (I hope). But ya, I thought Jorg would love him, since in the beginning of the story he seemed to.

Man! I really love this story, and it's only the first chapter. You seriously have to post the next chapter soon!!! (meaning in twenty seconds or less XD)

Gosh, I feel so bad for Tom. It's like, he knows he's getting beaten up, but he doesn't scream or cry. He knows that if he does that, he's just going to get it even worse or something. And Simone is such a bad mother for not believing Tom.

But I love it! Please post another chapter soon!!! *gets down on knees and begs* 



Author's Response: Well, Jorg did love him, but he's one of those people that can't stand gay people (I'm sure you know exactly the kind I'm talking about), so when he found Tom kissing a boy, the hate kinda grew over the love. And I'm really glad you love the story. As for the updating, idk how soon I'll be able to because I'm moving into my college apartment tomorrow morning, but it should be soon.

Reviewer: THROX Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/09 11:36 am Title: The Beginning

awwww...so sad...I wonder what will happen next..by the way tom smoking a joint is interesting..hmmm... keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it...but I got a question...why is Tom smoking a joint interesting? Just curious.

Reviewer: Vampyr Sk8er Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/09 11:26 am Title: The Beginning

That was great, really emotional. And pleeeeeeeës update soon!

Love Jezzabella (my real name)

Ps. This would make a good Het, I don't know why but I just think that for some reason, but write what you like. You're a very good author.
Update ASAP!!!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, and thanks for saying I'm a good author. I did think about writing in some Het, but I'm not sure...I may tweak it a bit and add some...just wait and see.

Reviewer: Meadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/09 11:19 am Title: The Beginning

Sounds intresting.
I look forward to the rest of it ^^

Author's Response: Thanks...ho[e I don't disappoint.

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