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Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 10:54 am Title: First Day

I liked it, really good.

Author's Response: Thanks, I was kinda iffy about this chapter because I was trying to get it out while juggling all my exams and essays for classes, so I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: hilary1014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 08:43 am Title: First Day

so is bill not yet aware that tom is the same boy from the guest house?

Author's Response: Well...he does, but he doesn't. Cuz he never really saw Tom's face so he doesn't really know for sure, but trust me, it'll click soon.

Reviewer: automatischxmechanisch Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 04:47 am Title: First Day

I love this ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you. I try =)

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/09 11:18 pm Title: First Day

aww its cute=] cant wait 4 more

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like.

Reviewer: HyperActiveChick Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/09 11:12 pm Title: The New Guy

-chuckles- now if i could just get some damn weed...

Author's Response: Lol...I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: toms muso girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/09 09:54 pm Title: The New Guy

This story is really good theres just something about tom in it thats makes me want to hug him lol great work

Author's Response: Thank you...and I try to make Tom as loveable as possible so I'm glad it works =)

Reviewer: xmonicawilliamsx Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/09 08:02 pm Title: The New Guy

aww i love Tom in this chapter.. he's so adorable :D lol ^_^ What a wonderful story so far! :]

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/09 07:47 pm Title: The New Guy

i cant wait 2 see another chappie=]=]

Author's Response: I'm guessing this means you like? Lol, I'm working on it...tuning it up a bit. =)

Reviewer: makemesmile Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/09 07:10 pm Title: The New Guy

“Um, I sawed the sign on the Fenster…I, I mean window. Und I want a um, a…scheiße…”

favourite line! legit! lmao!
chapter was good. lol i love how bill's talking about how hot he finds tom at the start lol and tom's awkwardness when he talks in english is so cute lol

Author's Response: Lol...yeah, I laughed when I wrote that line too. I'm glad you like the story, and as for Tom's awkwardness, I simply thought about how awkward I probably sound speaking German since I know so little of it. But I'm glad you think it's cute.

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/09 07:00 pm Title: The New Guy

I like it so far! It's getting really good.

Author's Response: Thank you. I try =)

Reviewer: THROX Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/09 03:47 pm Title: The New Guy

LOL, that was funny as hell..

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked.

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/29/09 05:56 pm Title: Someone New

plz update sooon thx=]

Author's Response: I shall try.

Reviewer: 2Kewl4U Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/09 10:46 pm Title: The Beginning

LOL oooohhhh...

Author's Response: I'm hoping that's good.

Reviewer: THROX Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/09 01:48 pm Title: Someone New

LMAo Bill is too much..Love it

Author's Response: I'm glad you like him.

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/09 10:29 am Title: Someone New

Good chapter! something tells me though that Bill is not gonna be so pleased when he discovers that Tom and Simone are his real mom and brother....can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks and I don't plan for him to find out for quite a bit...imagine the ensuing drama...hehe...I have twisted mind I think.

Reviewer: daphne_always Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/09 09:04 am Title: Someone New

more more more more))

Author's Response: Lol...ok ok...I'll try to get some more soon, promise.

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/09 03:32 pm Title: A New Job and A New Home

plz update sooon thx soso much=]=]

Author's Response: Lol, I shall try.

Reviewer: omgthatshot05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/09 02:05 pm Title: A New Job and A New Home

Lol bill has to get a job! Poor boy

Can't wait for them to meet

Author's Response: They will soon. And I know, right? I just can't see Bill working fast food, ever.

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/09 11:18 am Title: A New Job and A New Home

I liked it! I can't blame Tom for being in awe over the size of the place, I would be the same way.

Author's Response: Thanks! And yeah, I just based that on what I'd want my house to look like if I ever became rich...well, kinda what it'd look like.

Reviewer: dancinginthemoonlight Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/09 04:01 am Title: A New Job and A New Home

Howdy Giraffe!
im loving this story and cant wait for the next chapter i just had one tiny problem with this one caus it says:
“Tom, language, and we are moving because I want to get you as far from here as possible before your father gets out. Now, go pack.” She told him as she continued to pack up the rather small amount of dishes.

Tom stormed back to his room and slammed the door. How the hell am I supposed to go to fucking America when I barely speak any fucking English?!

But Simone never says where they are moving to, ya see?
anywho update soon ja?
much love
Ellie barely awake
xXx

Author's Response: Damn-it...I knew I was forgetting something. Sorry bout that, I'll go in and fix it, so thanks for pointing it out to me. Glad you liked it anyway though.

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