Date: 07/23/10 08:10 am Title: Chapter 4
Whoop! I love this story! I don't want to feel sorry for Zach but I do. Please update soon!!!!
Date: 02/27/10 05:24 am Title: Chapter 4
Will there be more? Please you have to finish it it's an A-W-E-S-O-M-E story!!!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! Of course there will be more, just not right away.. I know it's taken me awhile, but I WILL update eventually. Hang in there!! ^_^
Date: 01/05/10 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
Long live the Minor Niners! I'm with you on that front! The Plot thickens! Uh oh! I'm loving the story, poor Bill, having to suffer through Tom's clothes. You should end his misery and take him shopping or something. Only Tom can pull off the baggy look! I can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Yes, long live the Minor Niners! I know, I know, I'm really sorry for making Bill wear Tom's clothes, but only for a little while, OK? We'll get him some stylish clothes soon!!
Date: 01/04/10 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 4
OMG! this story just keeps on getting better and better! Cant wait to read the next one :)
Author's Response: Thank you!! I've just been so busy lately... Hopefully I'll finish the next chapter in a couple of weeks... Sorry! ^_^
Date: 11/19/09 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh wow! This is an amazing story. Not finished yet but I can already tell it's going to be one of the best. Please update soon I'm dying to know what happens! xoxo
Author's Response: One of the best? Aww, I feel so warm and fuzzy!! Thanks though, that really means a lot to me. Hopefully I will be uploading another chapter very soon!
Date: 11/01/09 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
Bill killed him?! D:
This is a really good story and I love where it's going. Very nice. Very good description and characterization. I can't wait to see where this goes. And the banner is stunning x]
Author's Response: Never said that...
Wow, you actually think my writing's... good? Um, this is a shock to me lol. I always think I'm too lazy when it comes to writing. And you should go on Flickr and check out Vanzekin's page. Her pics are AMAZING!!
Date: 10/30/09 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 4
That was pretty good. I love the suspense of it. I'm looking forward to more chapters.
But don't ask for reviews in order to write and continue the story. Your writing is very good and its "voice" demands to be heard. Even if only one person was following your story, that on person is still your audience and its not fair to make them wait for another chapter until you get x number of people to review. You are disrepecting your audience and your writing when you do that. Let your words flow and be enjoyed by your readers. Just a thought...
Author's Response: It took me a while to read your comment, but wow, it's really eye-opening. I know I might sound rude when I say, 'Can't write a new chapter until I get _ reviews,' but I know what you mean when you say I should be grateful for all the wonderful reviwers and readers I have.
OK, it's final. I won't ask for a certain number of reviews anymore. But thanks a lot for your support!! ^_^
Date: 10/28/09 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
OH SNAP D:
Author's Response: Ha, ha, ha!!
Date: 10/28/09 07:55 am Title: Chapter 4
ooohhh... nicey nicey... I like it!!
Author's Response: Alright!! Thanks for the review! ^_^
Date: 10/27/09 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
i friggin love this story, mmkay. it's very nicely written, i love Bill's character. an odd and mysterious one, he is.
and congrats on high school!
i'm ten-er. haha. year nine was hard for me, but when you're a sophomore things are a bit easier.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm trying to make Bill as cute yet mysterious as possible! ^_^
I thought high school was gonna be tortue for me, but all in all, I find it a lot better than elementray school. And congrats on being a ten-er!
Date: 09/22/09 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 3
This was good, but yeah....what exactly is going on....?
Author's Response: You''l find out soon enough ;)
Date: 08/25/09 01:32 am Title: Chapter 3
I liked it. Very cute and funny chapter.
The print was too small. Not good for someone with bad eyes. : (
Author's Response: Thank you, because like the band, cute is what I aimed for!
Oh, and don't worry, I fixed the print. I accidently used a different size, but now it should be good!! ^_^
Date: 08/24/09 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
aaaaaawwww more
Author's Response: OKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK soon!!
Date: 08/15/09 12:34 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh wow! I like it! I hope you find time to write some more.
Author's Response: I know, I know, I will try hard to make in some time. Maybe not this week, but not week, because I might be going somewhere this week...
But good news, I just finished listening to Automatic, and I have a pretty good idea for the next few chapters!! ^_^
Date: 08/11/09 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aww! I actually didn't notice this was updated. I'm tracking, but I confess to being terrible at remembering to look.
Bill was adorable! I love how his home was Tom's. He was getting the directions from tapping into Tom's mind, I assume? *shudder* THAT would be scary....
Author's Response: It's k, I'm like that too sometimes (about tracking stories. I only look when I'm bored.)
And actually the way you thought Bill 'tapped' into Tom's mind was really creative, but that's not what he did. But I've never thought of that... Cool!! ^_^
Date: 08/11/09 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
chapter 1 and 2 r awesome.Can't wait for the rest of it.I think the banner is great too.
Author's Response: Really? I thought the two chapters were crap, but thanks for that.
So far I think you're the only person whose actually said anything about the banner, so thanks for that!!
Date: 08/11/09 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aww, Bill is cute :D
& i like this chapter lots :)
Author's Response: Correction, Bill is adorable!!
Glad you like the chapter. There will be more soon!!
Date: 08/11/09 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
yea poor bill but you gives him candy and he'll trust you...
hmm i wonder why he said he lived at Tom's house and why didnt TOm get freaked out over the fact that Bill knew where he lived and insisted he lived there too?
but i loved it you only have one spelling error that i could see in the first paragraph you put "hos" instead of "His"
hehe but i loved it !!! more soon?
Author's Response: Yea, I probably should have put a little bit more details during that time, but let's just pretend it was like, eleven at night, and Tom was too tired to think, OK, lol.
Thanks for pointing out the spelling error. I fixed it, so don't worry!
And of course I will put more up soon!! ^_^
Date: 08/11/09 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
"...still copying Tom, whether it was his walking or a butt scratch."
haha, that line made me giggle a bit. This story is so cute, lol. I LOVE Bill in this. And I'm really excited to see more.
Author's Response: lol I know, Tom does scratch his ass sometimes, so I thought it would be funny if Bill did it too.
Yay!! Please continue reading and reviewing, because I promise it'll get better! ^_^
Date: 08/10/09 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Me? I'm an ancient old crone ;) JK. I totally still do the one word thing too XD
Author's Response: lol
But seriously KEEP REVIEWING!!...Please?? ;_;