Date: 03/30/13 02:51 pm Title: Prologue
I loved it! Please continue!
Date: 08/12/09 07:14 pm Title: Prologue
Man, that must have hit him HARD! Nice beginning:)
Author's Response: Ahh, yeah. Thanks :)
Date: 08/09/09 11:54 am Title: Prologue
Whoa, for some reason I didn't expect that. I was waiting for them to say Tom hadn't woken up at all yet or something, instead... o_O Poor Bill :(
Author's Response: Oh my no :( A Tom in a vegetative state is as bad as a dead Tom for me :( That'd be too sad... but thanks for reading and reviewing :))
Date: 08/08/09 09:33 pm Title: Prologue
OMG! Poor Tom! I can't believe they didn't tell Bill. How could they do that!? Poor Bill!! Now Tom doesn't remember and Bill already feels horrible about not being there. I'm so sad for them. Still... How could they not tell Bill. Update soon:)
Author's Response: They didn't want him to worry while he was away... annnnd there's a bit more to Tom's injury than I revealed in the prologue. :) Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/08/09 07:10 pm Title: Prologue
OMG poor Tomi!
Author's Response: :( yeah... thanks for reading, though!
Date: 08/08/09 06:03 pm Title: Prologue
FINALLY!!
And why the fuck did you have to tweet that you posted this?
I got it on my phone and said "wait, is that...is that..." and I wanted to come home so bad
XP
Now I don't know what i want updated more
This or TWoW...
Hmm...
Author's Response: -_- Sorry. But YES--FINALLY! I've only been waiting to write it since before school was even out!! Ah, I'm a failure! Grr. And I have a feeling that the first chapter of this will come out before the next update of TWoW. I'm just not... *feeling* TWoW lately. It sucks. :( Anywhoooo, thank you for reading, my mentor ^_^ . . . OMG, I forgot to state that you're my mentor!! *runs to change story notes*
Date: 08/08/09 05:19 pm Title: Prologue
oh... that was so sad, that last little line... lovely job starting the first chapter. Bill just seemed a little young when he was meeting his dad, making him seem younger than collage age. If that makes sense, but it wasn't bad. just I guess different so it threw me off track n_n want to see where you're going to take this
Author's Response: :) thanks. mm, yeah, i can see how he'd rub off as a little younger... i was just trying to show his excitement with being home, though. thanks for reading!