Date: 03/01/13 07:11 pm Title: The meeting
I quite agree. Actually the very first review I got on THF was horrible, really vindictive and I almost deleted that first chapter of my first story and didn't write any more. It played on my mind for a long time. In the end I just deleted the comment instead and went on with the story and it was mostly well received although I did get someone else nit-picking about details so I wrote a big disclaimer for one chapter saying how I wrote for pleasure and although I did some research I didn't have time to check everything, and that it was a work of fiction after all and if people didn't like it they didn't have to read. I got lots of positive comments in response to that. Some people just like to put others down I think and I hope I'd never write anything detrimental about someone's writing because I know how much of a person goes into their stories. If I had more time I would gladly beta for you as I think so much of your writing, but I just can't do it at the moment. Oh, and I'm really glad you didn't delete all your stuff, and that you're still posting. Oh, by the way, not to nag or anything, but any chance you might add another chapter of Just Say No any time soon? I so want things to improve for poor Tom.
Author's Response: Reviews does so much, both good and bad, for how you feel about your own work. I'm glad you keept writing, it gives so much to do, I think. And glad you got postive feedback when you adressed it. And I agree, there are, sadly, a lot of that in this fandom, too. Both then it comes to fics but also then it comes this whole fandom, and it's so sad to see.rnAnd thank you, it's so kind to say so even if I completely understnad you isn't able to, it really takes a lot of time. Oh, you are not nagging, I'm just glad then someone askes about my stories. I'm sorry for not posting on Just say no, I got a chapter written, but no beta for it (again) but I guess I just as well can post it unbetad, I guess that is better than nothing,haven't updated since december, oops.
Date: 03/01/13 06:00 pm Title: The meeting
I loved it, and I'd also love to read the other stories in the series. I think you beat yourself up too much about your English. Sure, sometimes, some of it might be little hard to understand, but mostly its really good, and also without a beta the rawness of your writing really projects the emotion in the story.
Author's Response: Thanks for telling me. And my English is getting better, even if it takes time. And it's way better now than then. But I have gotten a lot of really awful comments, and sometimes mails, about my stories and almost only about my spelling and grammar. When I posted "His heart was heavy" the first reviews was only about my spelling. When I in the end of the second chapter said I know I can't spell, but asked what they though about the story, I got a long list of every mistake I did in the first chapter. I actually though about deleting all of my fics by that point. The person who reviewed deleted her reviews, but I think it stopped others both from commeting and reading. But I guess you are right, I need to be a bit brave, and you can never plase all, right? I will start looking over the other parts, has said that for a long time now, I better get to it :) Thank you once again, your words means a lot to me!
Date: 02/24/13 05:51 pm Title: The end
I only found this story yesterday, and I've read it right through. Can't even come up with words to describe all the emotions I felt reading it, or how incredibly amazing it was. I'm just overjoyed that Klaas has a happy ending, and that Bill eventually did the right thing. I hope that Alexander gets what he deserves, the perverted bastard, and that Bill and his family are okay. And that Tom will maybe get some help to deal with what happened to him. You should have had so many more reviews, but then I guess it was pretty painful to read so not everyone's cup of tea. But I just had to write and tell you how awesome it was.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much for telling me! This is acctuly just the firt story in a serie of.... hm, four? stories (oh, it was so long since I wrote them I can't really remember how many they are!) about Bill and Klaas, be caues even if it all ended well here, there are some way left for Bill to fully acept and adjust to the role as a father. I have thoung, and even decided, to translate the rest of them. But I feel so bad over my English! This was, clearly, the first story I posted here and even I can see how poor it is now. But yeah, I guess it's a bit hard to read too. Maybe I should try to correct the worst by my self, can't gett any worse, and then start with the rest of the story? It's a pretty good story all together :) Thanks again for letting me know you read this, I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 01/15/12 10:20 pm Title: The end
Wow. That was really an emotional roller-coaster. Some of these chapters just killed me, and towards the end of the story, I just had to cry. I felt so so sorry for Klaas. :(
So you're not going to translate the others? I'm really interested in what happens next...
Author's Response: Oh, thank you, I'm so glad you liked this one, it's one of my own favorites! And oh, I love to, I just didn't thouhgt anyone wanted me to, as nobody commented it. But sure, I will start translate as soon as posible, my English is better now then it was when I translated this one too, so I guess it won't take that long time and be easier to read :)rnThank you so much for your review, it means a lot to me!
Date: 06/04/11 10:06 pm Title: The end
Wow! Wasn't too sure about this fic when I first started reading it, but I got caught up in Bill's denial of his own child. Thanks for the great read!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, it means a lot to me!I think my english got better during the time, the first parts annoys me now ;)This is just the first of four fics in a serie, but I'm not sure if I shall translate the others, it's not so many who seems intrested in this one, makes me even more happy that you took your time to review :)
Date: 11/20/10 10:40 pm Title: Goodbye, farewell
Bill es una mier......
Author's Response: Yeah, sort of.rn
Date: 11/19/10 05:15 am Title: Goodbye, farewell
Please really u have to stop being so cruel to the kid
i can't anymore
How many damages Bill is doing to his own child, maybe as worse as the abuse
Please, please, please do something, that story is just breaking my heart
Author's Response: Well, it's only two chapters left now, let's se what can be done. ;)
Date: 10/07/10 01:13 pm Title: If where is no other way
i finally managed to review.
This was really good.
And i´m being completely honest.
Just a tiny little pointer.
It should be "There".
Not where.
That tiny little thing irritated me to no end.
I´m kind of a freak when it comes to proper wording.
Author's Response: Well, thanks but.... I DO mean "Where" not "There", is a whole other meaning?
Date: 09/24/10 08:02 am Title: And now I know
When is Bill going to react ?
He may be lost but it's not human to let that sort of things happen to your own flesh
He should go burn in hell just for that
Author's Response: I think he just doesn't understand, wants to understand, what part he plays in all this. rnLet's se if Georg can make him understand!
Date: 08/24/10 07:45 pm Title: Gustav
bad bad bad bad Bill
Author's Response: Yes, something like that, but maybe he will change, is just a few chapters left of this fic!rn
Date: 06/20/10 05:09 pm Title: Mirror talk
beautiful and emotional as always
I just hope that anytime soon Bill will stop torturing his kid and himslef and welcome him for rela into his heart.
he's so selfish and cuel towards that poor little guy.
Author's Response: Hope so too, but maybe you soon will understand a little better why he acts as he does, he has his reasons...
Date: 05/20/10 07:24 pm Title: Boxing day
please please make it better
please torturing that kid and ourselves to
It hurts so fucking much so fucking much
Author's Response: I guess this is quite an "angst" story, but I think it still are time to make things right, or atleast better!
Date: 05/10/10 12:49 pm Title: A late Christmas Eve.
such a fucked up Bill
To bad Klass has to bear all this
Author's Response: Yes, and it ain't over yet, i'm afraid (is 12 chapters left of this story).
Date: 05/10/10 05:26 am Title: A late Christmas Eve.
slept with cousins cousin LOL
Author's Response: Things happens, but no, maybe not a good idea ;)
Date: 05/09/10 10:14 pm Title: The meeting
i wish tom really was like that.
Author's Response: You do? Well, who really knows?
Date: 05/02/10 04:57 am Title: At home.
maybe finally bill got a wake up call
Author's Response: Maybe, maybe he needs another one before he starts to understand that he can't go on like this.rnThanks for your review!
Date: 05/01/10 08:28 pm Title: At home.
Bill is os fucked up in his head
Superbe story
I just hope he'll adjust and let the kid in
He loves him but doesn't know it yet
I guess he's afraid of many things: sex, love, feelings, losing control
Author's Response: I think so too, that he acts like this out of fear, not out of cruelty. And he might have some reasons to feel like this...rnGlad you like it, and thanks for your review!
Date: 04/18/10 11:27 pm Title: The Lion
aun me pregunto xq Bill no lo quiere? es decir él sabe q el niñito va a sufrir en esa casa... pero se niega a tenerlo... por q? me da mucha pena este capitulo! :( actualiza pronto!
Author's Response: Well, maybe he has his reasons? Hope it will make more sense futher on in the fic!
Date: 04/18/10 07:10 pm Title: The Lion
Now I'm crying
How much more this child is going to suffer*
That sucks
Author's Response: I know, it realy does, and it aint over yet. But maybe it will get better in the end? Or at least make more sense?
Date: 04/02/10 07:57 pm Title: The meeting
wow.
Author's Response: WOW is good, I think!