Date: 03/01/10 06:33 pm Title: Ukulele is also good.
I love ur story
At first I didin't wanna read it but god it's worth it
U made me cry
Bill is so ..afraid actually that makes him acting stoopid and dangerously
Poor kid: raped , almost, fister homes and now his father that left him on this window shield I mean it's awful
The way he cries ,a dn when Bill doesn't wanna him close he cries even more..
But fortunatly, Tom is here to save the day and make Klaas feels like he has some affection and love. That he's needed.
Bill becomes jealous, but doen's walk our the room when his son is there now..
Bad bad bad how can you hurt a kid that much ???
Author's Response: Oh, sorry, don't want you to cry, or well, love that my story can provoke such feelings!rnYes, I guess it is afraid Bill is, and yes, poor, poor Klaas.
Date: 02/25/10 06:50 pm Title: Blood and ice cream
Wonderfully wriiten
explain and all those feelings
Made me cry
Poor babe so young and he's been thru so much shit
Can't believa that
Author's Response: I guess this is, at least parts of it, a quite painful story, and I'm afraid it might get worse.rnAnd I'm so happy that someone actualy both reads it and comments, thanks, it makes it much more fun to up load it here!
Date: 02/10/10 09:43 pm Title: Little red marks.
genious great story
I hesitate reading it and finally I absolutly love it!
Love that idea of Bill struggle to admit the fact that he is a father
Poor kid thought
very realistic
Author's Response: Thanks! And I'm glad you did, struggles a lot with my english, but I guess it turns out right then some one likes my story and realistic is good, I'm glad you think it is!
Date: 02/10/10 07:32 pm Title: The meeting
DUDE first cha^pter and i'm lost
but the atmosphere is set
Author's Response: You are not the only one ;) but it gets clearer after a few chapters!
Date: 01/27/10 05:26 pm Title: The dinner
Augh!! It's so frustrating! Bill still thinks like a kid! He is almost a man! I want to smack some sense into him "You are a father! You have a kid! Be responsible!" If not to nurture that bond, then be responsible enough to find him a family that'd love him. Sorry, I really don't like Bill in here, but your story is so good I cannot get enough. Keep it up!
Author's Response: I know, he is really childish in this story, and quite irritating. rnThanks, I'm so glad that some one likes it!
Date: 08/10/09 11:00 pm Title: A blowjob isn't "having sex".
Bill is so careless, and for some twisted reason I can definetly imagine him being like this in real life...
Author's Response: And I'm afraid it might get worse...;)rnunfortunately, I can imagine that too.
Date: 08/08/09 04:23 pm Title: The meeting
interesting start to the story, you have this unique way of writing it seems, like this cool style n_n ready to see how everything is going to fold out, good job :)
Author's Response: oh, thank you, and i'm so glad you say that; peopel often say I have a "diferent" way of writing in Swedish, was so afraid that it would get lost if I tried to translate. I'm glad that it haven't. :)
Date: 08/08/09 04:01 pm Title: The meeting
Love it! But you know that. I really Love how you create the Bill character in this fic...already in this chapter its plain to see his childish sides :p and I cant wait for more, even tho Ive already read the swedish version...its different in english! Its great to be able to read it again and in a new language!
Author's Response: Thanks, you know how much your comments and your support means to me, and I'm so thankful for your help. Good that the story seems to work even translated!