Date: 07/10/10 10:16 am Title: Plans
I really like this story! I love how Bill isn't afraid to stand up to anyone, and that only Tom affects him. Love it! :D
Jane
Date: 06/07/10 01:05 pm Title: Pride
:) Wow this was AMAZING!
I'm so happy you've returned to this fic! Take your time with the next update because this chaoter makes up for lost time XD
Date: 03/13/10 08:13 pm Title: Wrath
you should totally continue this story!! i
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so :) Future chapters are in the works, not quite ready to post yet
Date: 09/10/09 03:27 am Title: Wrath
Dude.. wow.. I'm impressed man. Usually I don't read stories like this but wow... With the sins and all... NO WORDS CAN EXPLAIN HOW AWESOME YOU WROTE THIS STORY... True.. I can't explain I'm just wow..FAVORITES! I wonder if Tom would ever forgive him.
Author's Response: Thanks soooo much :] I'm so, so, so happy that you like it :D
Date: 09/10/09 03:21 am Title: Plans
Rarw! Bill naughty!
Author's Response: Very! :D
Date: 08/31/09 06:33 am Title: Wrath
I don't quite know why, but this made me chuckle slightly... I myself believe there is a god, i'm just not all that avidly religious...
Though I do like Bill in this... it was kinda scary, but my mind is sort of twisted like that...
I can't wait for more... *g*
Author's Response: I'm the same way! I'm also portraying the Kaulitz family as the stereotypical Catholic family, how most people think of those who are overly-religious...except for Bill of course! The point of the story is a balance between faith and experience, as will be revealed. Haha, aren't we all a bit twisted? :) Thank you for the review.
Date: 08/24/09 10:54 pm Title: Plans
Ah, no rush! Genius takes time, though I know whatever you come up with will be fantastic.
Author's Response: I appreciate your confidence in me! :] I've been so busy and I know where I want to go with the next chapter, but i just haven't had a chance to sit down and write it!
Date: 08/24/09 10:23 pm Title: Wrath
Wow this is realllly kooool. Unlike anything I've read!
Author's Response: Yup, religion is controversial!
Date: 08/16/09 03:27 am Title: Wrath
that was amazing! So intense... when he pointed the gun at Tom I think even my heart stopped. You really know how to captivate readers with your writing. I wonder which sin is up next? :)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Yes, that was a tough scene to write. Hmm I was thinking either Pride or Gluttony next, something a little less violent, but we'll see! :]
Date: 08/11/09 07:10 pm Title: Plans
That last review was meant for the NEXT chapter...haha sorry
Author's Response: :)
Date: 08/11/09 07:08 pm Title: Plans
Great! I'm excited to see more.
Author's Response: :)
Date: 08/11/09 07:07 pm Title: Wrath
I seriously love you. You are an amazing author and you really know how to write a story to keep the reader's attention and also create a wonderful plot with wonderful characters. With this story, you delve into a whole different world that hasn't really been explored on this site very often.
This chapter was very hardcore, and at least we know now that even though Bill has some SERIOUS obstacles to overcome, he still has remorse, and he still has love, but most importantly, he has Tom.
As we saw, Tom had the power to completely turn Bill around without saying anything, and even though Bill is fighting God and love, I truly believe that he will find his way back.
He is in a confused place, and he just needs some guidance, the poor kid.
Author's Response: Everything you said in this review was wonderful and right on target. Thanks for the comment!!!!
Date: 08/11/09 09:20 am Title: Wrath
oh wow, that was intense. LOVE it!! I think you did an amazing job with that, I'm just concerned about the conquences and all that fun stuff. When he pointed the gun at Tom, oh wow, my heart dropped, and I kept thinking, "don't do it, don't do it..." lovely job n_n hahaha, I can't wait for more :D
Author's Response: Thanks, it makes me SO happy that you like itt! And OH yes, there will be consequences!! Guh, I hated writing the gun scene... after I posted it I totally went to my collection of cute, loving Kaulitz twins quotes. Danke fur reviewing. (:
Date: 08/10/09 11:18 pm Title: Plans
Not put off at all!
That was absolutely amazing...
Author's Response: thankyou
Date: 08/10/09 08:51 pm Title: Wrath
God, Bill O_O
I was tense throughout most of this chapter. I was sure he'd do more damage than he actually did, but I'm glad he didn't. *wipes forehead* Poor Tom, though. I feel for Bill, but I can't imagine what was going through Tom's mind at that point -_-
Maybe he can help Bill =] *is hopeful*
Author's Response: Yeah, imagine that the person you love most in the world is standing before you, consumed by hatred, and pointing a loaded gun at your head?? Poor Tom, indeed. =/rnKeep up the hope!
Date: 08/10/09 08:37 pm Title: Wrath
Amazing! Really and truly amazing! I will wait for the next chapter as patiently as my impatient mind will allow, LOL
Author's Response: Yay I'm glad you like it! [: Ahh I'm sorry to keep you waiting
Date: 08/10/09 06:50 pm Title: Wrath
Aw man, I feel so sorry for Bill, because what his dad did was pretty unforgettable and unforgivable, but with the people we love beside us, we either choose to accept it and move on or let the hate and anger rule our life because of it. Bill chose the latter and it makes me sad to see him head down this path of utter destruction of what is left of his soul.
Hopefully, Tom will be able to pull him back before he is too lost beyond reach.
Author's Response: You are so right--there's always 2 paths you can take, but Bill has been drowned in pain and sucked down into a very, very dark hole that is hard, and nearly impossible, to get out of. His soul is being slowly eaten away and the only thing he can grab onto to escape is Tom, because Tom is the person that has the power to heal Bill as his genetic replica, best friend, and symbol of all things good in the world.
Date: 08/09/09 11:00 pm Title: Plans
This is very dark and twisted, and I really like it. You've definitely caught my attention and I respect that you are willing to touch upon something so controversial as religion. Kudos!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 08/09/09 10:56 pm Title: Plans
This is really awesome. I'm so curious as to how Bill ends up!
Author's Response: Thanks. Yup, guess we'll see!
Date: 08/09/09 09:51 pm Title: Plans
LOVE IT! Wanna see how far down into damnation he dares to go.
Author's Response: ;]