Date: 08/16/09 11:00 am Title: Chapter 2: Scars
Oooo I likie!
And when Bill asked Tom to model...he DOES mean naked, right? Please be naked please be naked... >.>
It seems we're both addicted to Three Days Grace, huh? I mean, with Flatline & all >.>
Author's Response: hahaha i'm glad that you likie. and errrrrrrrrrrr....idk. i really don't know if he's gonna be naked. remember Bill has to actually be okay with Tom's nudity and not feel like he's gonna be attacked.
and hahah I was making the drawing when Pain came on, so I was like AH HAH! xD
Date: 08/16/09 10:38 am Title: Chapter 2: Scars
wow, pretty painting n_n hehe, that was sweet. I can just imagine Bill painting happily away from an hour and then realize there is someone there and like freak out. :D it's why I can never blast music, because I'm afraid someone is sneaking up on me n_n Hehehe, I liked that last line. poor Tom I suppose, or lucky Tom. He's modeling now, hours after hours with Bill I bet :D
Author's Response: haha, danke ^^ and i'm glad you think it's sweet, and yea, i usually never black music on my headphones for the same reason xD i'm way too paranoid xD and awww I'm glad you liked the last line ^_^ and I think Tom'll be fine with the many many hours he's modeling. I think he's happy to be able to spend time with Bill and get to know him.
Date: 08/10/09 06:19 am Title: Chapter 1: Breathless
hmm, I'm liking it so far... can't wait for the next chapter!
oh, and i like the drawing! it's really nice!
Author's Response: how the fuck did i skip this? i'mw ay to scatterbrained because of my oneshots >.> anyways, i'm glad you like the chapter and the drawing and i'll update as soon as my files are in order and under control xD
Date: 08/09/09 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 1: Breathless
That drawing is awesome :)
& i like the story already.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
xx
Author's Response: awwww. danke. i tried very hard to make it like something my character would have actually drawn.
I'm glad that you like the story ^_^ and i'm working on the next chapter ^_^
Date: 08/08/09 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 1: Breathless
omgg!! update plz plz plzz its like good!
Author's Response: awww yay ^^ i'm glad that you like it and think it's good, and i'll update asap !_!
Date: 08/08/09 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 1: Breathless
i love this!!! please continue!!XD i love tomxbill thanks!! continue!!
Author's Response: awww i'm glad that you love this ^_^ i'll update asap! xD
Date: 08/08/09 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 1: Breathless
Oh.. I'm sorry, I forgot to update that... I have a beta... froeth, aka stephanie. I've also got a banner artist and I'll be posting it as soon as the banners ready. once again, sorry and I'm going to update my bio right now *blushes*
Author's Response: it's ok....i'm glad you found help and i wish you well with your fic ^^
Date: 08/08/09 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 1: Breathless
i love this! update!
Author's Response: awww. i'm glad you love this ^^ and i'll update as soon as my other fics are posted xD OH and if you're still looking for a beta, i'll help you out ^^ i generally dislike het, but you're a decent author and i have a feeling that whatever you write wouldn't wig me out as much as some of the other het writers i've seen xD
Date: 08/08/09 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 1: Breathless
Okay, you're on my list now. On my list of great people!I so love the manga 'Mars' that means I'm certain that I will love this story :D!
Author's Response: awwww *grins and then blushes* thank you! I love being on people's lists, ESPECIALLY when they're good xD and ah!! another person that enjoyed that manga! i just LOVED it and HAD to add it to my collection of stories based off of manga/anime and Asian dramas ^_^
Date: 08/08/09 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 1: Breathless
I love it so far =]. Love love love it, and I can't wait to see more.
Author's Response: yay. i'm glad you love it so much ^_^ and I should have the next installmnent by tomorrow, time permitting of course lol
Date: 08/08/09 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 1: Breathless
Interesting start. Bill is certainly one sort of an enigma here. Different kinds of disorders and disabilities are my favourites, so yeah, muteness of Bill is a big plus. We'll see what's going to happen next...
Btw, I really like the idea of an artistic Bill. It's always fascinating, because he is kind of a person to be imagined being very artistic. Personally I don't even know how to keep pen in my hand, so it's fascinating to read about drawing and painting etc.
And I had really hard time to imagine Bill with David, haha :D
Author's Response: alright, i've been waiting until i had actual time ti respond to this, rather than scribble a short thank you, and here i am, finally with some time lol.
anyways, i'm glad that you like the start, and yea, Bill is a bit of an enigma, but, not as much as Tom, or later characters i've yet to introduce lol.
and i'm glad that him being mute is a plus, especially since it's more of a mental disorder than anything.
and awww, i'm glad you like that he's artistic. i can't draw to save my life, but i DO enjoy painting a lot, so i'll try to incorporate that into the story ^^
and hahaha. as the last line said, whatever was going on in the room was NOT consensual xD
Date: 08/08/09 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 1: Breathless
Oooooo I heart ^_^ Most definitely heart lol
--I meant the story AND the drawing, btw XD So Bill's a mute in this one? Coolness ^_^ I've sure that Tom just made a mistake and there's nothing going on between Dave and Bill >.>
Author's Response: ooohhhh YAY *flutterclaps* I'm glad that you heart the story and the drawing ^_^ and yea, the drawing was like 30 minutes worth of 'i hope this is decent enough. oh fuck i gotta redo this part' xD and yea, Bill's a mute, but like, by choice/emotional trauma. he can still make small noises when he's in distress. and er...there's no mistake in what Tom saw, and like the last line said, it's not consensual >.< OH AND SORRY FOR NOT COMING BACK RIGHT AWAY....my sister made me go with her to the store and somehow that took like an hour and a half. *sad face*
Date: 08/08/09 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 1: Breathless
What the heck. I didn't get the end XD
Anyways. I love the idea. Update soon again, :P
Author's Response: lol. Basically Tom thought he heard Bill moan in pleasure, but when he heard the small whimper again, he rushed into the room realizing that Jost was basically forcing himself on Bill.
*nodnod*
anyways, thanks for reviewing and i'm glad that you love the idea ^^
Date: 08/08/09 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 1: Breathless
Ooo, I like this. Hahaha, I love the picture n_n it is an interesting start to the chapter, and yeah, I'm waiting to see where you take all this. Hahaha, it seems like lots of fun, but not crack fun, if you know what I mean. I'm scared for poor Bliisa though...I hope he's okay, let him be okay and big Tomi save him :D I can't elp staring at the picture and I'm so loving it... :)
Author's Response: YAY I'm glad you like this (i also love that you read/review most of my fics ^_^ i'm glad you like the start to the chapter, and yea, I'm waiting to see where I take it as well, I have a couple things planned out, but everything's still in the dark, since I write scenes based on my character's development ^^ and...i don't know if it'll be fun. xD it's kinda morbid, although not in the sense of the way Lunacy will be lol. and yea, Tom'll save him and things will be...interesting lol. and awwwww i'm glad that you love the picture ^^ to took me forever to finish lol.
Date: 08/08/09 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 1: Breathless
oh wow im intrested and i wonder wat tom saw wen he entered
Author's Response: awwww danke. ^^ and Tom basically saw what I explained before, Bill with Jost...but it's what he does, and Bill's reaction that i'll focus on in the next chapter. THANKS so much for being my first reviewer ^_^