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Reviewer: Nonconman Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/11 09:41 am Title: Chapter 3: White Noise

It's very nice, Bill's traumatized and Tom managed to kiss him? WTH Tomi . . DX

Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/10 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 3: White Noise

I love this story :D Sadly all the pictures are gone :( I hope you continue soon!!! *faved*
xx Chi ^^

Author's Response: Cause I had to switch them over to protected ^_^ I'll post them again once I start posting chapter again (hopefully in december if my scheduling works out xD)

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/14/10 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 3: White Noise

Oh goodness the drama. I feel it's rushed. They haven't known each other for long, but I guess Tom acted on impulse.

Author's Response: it was impulse, I promise you. it'll slow down a bit once I've got them where they need to be. xD

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 3: White Noise

go figure...tom just had to go and screw things up...

Author's Response: lol. hahah. it's alright, Tom'll figure things out and fix it in his own time ^^

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 2: Scars

that was sweet of bill to give the painting to tomi...

Author's Response: lol. you think so? Bill's an...interesting character, and I'm not sure he meant to be sweet xD Tom scares him a little bit.

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 1: Breathless

huh...tomi to the rescue...

Author's Response: lol hahah. yea. *shrugs* i don't plan these things that Tom does. He just does them xD

Reviewer: punk_princess_044 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/09 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 3: White Noise

i did like it i just hope that tom didnt mess up with bill

Author's Response: i'm glad that you liked it and nah, he'll be fine ^_^

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/26/09 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 1: Breathless

Oh, I totally get that. Bill just might not that's all I meant. I totes know what the kiss was all about from Tomi's end. <333

Author's Response: lol. yaya for you getting Tom. some might not, and that's my biggest fear xD but yea...Bill's....ugh...in this fic he's the one that doesn't do what he's told. he's too...closed off, even for me as the author.

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/26/09 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 3: White Noise

Oh GOD! Tom's got to make up for that, because Bill already has trust issues with the world in general and Tom just proved himself to be as horny as all the professors!

Author's Response: hahaha yea, Tom'll fic things xD. i don't think the kiss had anything to do with sex, and, Tom's gonna have to show Bill that. I think that, in comparison with the professors and whatnot, Tom kissed him because showing his feelings (of being appreciated by Bill) in the form of a kiss was all he could think of.

Reviewer: tokiMey8 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/26/09 09:21 am Title: Chapter 3: White Noise

i loved it! update more soon please! this is so cute!

Author's Response: awww. yay i'm glad that i still have people reading this! ^_^ i'll update soon!

Reviewer: Tears_of_trees Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/09 08:36 am Title: Chapter 3: White Noise

oh...Bill...I want to find him and squish him, and tell him Tom really is sweet. Hehehe, but I like how you had Bill's reaction. It was realistic. Everything seemed too soon for a kiss they both accept. Hehehe, and well, it makes everything so much more interesting, Tom having to apologize :D And I liked Gustav, just his last line there was really, Gustav sounding XD Bah, I keep thinking about how Bill drew away and got scared, and it gets more depressing each time I think about it...hehe, but I love it n_n

Author's Response: hahah awwwww. *hands you Bill* now squish him and tell him! xD but i'm glad you liked his reaction. i feel like the chapter's not very well liked, because i didn't have them fall in love or whatever right away

i just felt like, for someone that's been as abused as Bill has been, him accepting a kiss wouldn't have been realistic, and that the kiss HAD to happen to establish set boundaries and whatnot xD

but I'm glad that you liked Gustav and his last line. xD I try to stay as close to what I think they're like in RL when i write serious fics like this. but don't get depressed. things'll work out.

Reviewer: Kariiin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/09 06:42 am Title: Chapter 3: White Noise

Aww. Billa is so supercute, but yeah, Tom made a mistake by kissing him. :(
I hope they'll be okay though. ;)

Update soon again, hun! :)

Author's Response: i'm glad that you think that Billa is supercute ^_^ and yea tom made a mistake, but he'll fix it ^_^

Reviewer: Annalas Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/09 02:41 am Title: Chapter 3: White Noise

*enjoyed the chapter, even though she's half-asleep still* I like it!

How come Tom always screws EVERYTHING up? Well, as long as he fixes it...XD

Author's Response: hhahahaha awwww *pats head* i'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter and that you liked it

and.....he screws everything up because he's TOM xD

Reviewer: WhiteWolfHotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/09 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 2: Scars

i friken love this storyys like i

Author's Response: YAY for loving this story ^_^ it makes me happy to see you reading all my works ^_^

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/17/09 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 2: Scars

First I have to do a little dance here for Tom punching Jost... Go, Tom! Go, Tom! :D

I think this was a sweet chapter. Tom is getting close to Bill and Bill is not that weird after all. His background makes me feel sympathy for him. Nice work with creating character. He seems to be more adorable than I first thought he would be. And besides it's a destiny of Bill Kaulitz to be accused for seducing people even if he didn't want to. I mean, who can resist him ever? :)


By the way, that painting is absolutely amazing. I really like it.

Author's Response: *GRINS* danke. I wasn't sure if it happened that way in the original drama, but I figured it'd be the most effective, especially since Jost can't do anything to Tom--Tom's not in his department xD.

and I'm glad you thought that the chapter's sweet. Although I'll warn you, what we're seeing from Bill is.....idk, it's not fully him. he has a deeper (and darker, but not at all evil or malicious) side of him that we've yet to see.

and you're so totally right, it's his destiny to be accused of that xD

and thanks for complimenting the painting. it feels loved xD

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/09 02:33 am Title: Chapter 2: Scars

Wow, that was just wow.. I like the ending of the chapter.

Author's Response: i'm glad that you liked it hun ^^

Reviewer: punk_princess_044 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 2: Scars

wow that is really nice... did you draw this or did you get it somewere...

Author's Response: i'm glad you liked it ^_^ and i saw the picture online, and redrew it/painted it and then scanned it. i hope you liked it

Reviewer: tokiMey8 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 2: Scars

this is such a great story! i love the chemistry between Bill and Tom! Great work hon, update soon please!

Author's Response: awww. thanks for calling this a great story ^_^ i'm glad oyu like the chemistry ^_^

Reviewer: bmccray Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 2: Scars

I like this and the painting is very nice!

Author's Response: awww. thank you for liking this and for thinking the painting was nice ^^

Reviewer: Kariiin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 11:13 am Title: Chapter 2: Scars

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww. that was so damn cute!

Author's Response: awww ^^ danke love.

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