Date: 08/07/09 10:50 pm Title: Found
Pretty good, pretty good.:).
I'll be looking for an update.
Author's Response: Thank you! :) Next update will be right about now, and more later today.
Date: 08/07/09 07:40 pm Title: Found
This story is already all kinds of wonderful and I still try to figure out what Bill said because English is not my first language but the chapter and your writing skills are extremely precious :).
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I know Bill's accent is tricky, but hopefully worth the trouble. I'm blushing at the compliment, and thank you for reading. :)
Date: 08/07/09 06:11 pm Title: Found
The providence thoughts were concluded in a wonderfull way. I'm already loving this. I'm not english so in order to understand Bill I had to read a few times in some cases. His talk it's weird at first but then it just makes this fic even more realistic, like your description wasn't enough xD the way you described the streets makes me remember "The Perfume" scencario, idk if you saw that movie.Tom is the perfect shy gentleman and somehow Bill's age makes me want even more that Tom can protect him. please update soon! ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much; I'm glad you like it! I wasn't sure at first whether to write Bill's accent out or not, but I think in the end it does set the scene the way I wanted it to. Hopefully it's worth the trouble of reading... and writing, for that matter. XD And oh, yes, I did see that movie and greatly enjoyed it! The story about the perfume-making murderer, wasn't it? If the descriptions remind you of that, then I'm flattered. :D
Date: 08/07/09 05:35 pm Title: Found
love this :)
sometimes I have some trouble with Bill's accent, because for someone who hasn't english as first language, it's a bit difficult to understand.
but I love the detailed describing of all things :D
I will definately look for more :)
Author's Response: Glad you like it! :) And to be honest, until recent years I had trouble with written accents like Bill's, too. This story is good practice, because I write accents like his fairly often, and I hope it won't discourage you from reading!
Thank you very much. :D
Date: 08/07/09 05:14 pm Title: Found
You know I love it, but I want more now. :|
Author's Response: You really are a demanding wench, lol.