Date: 03/07/12 04:52 am Title: Chapter 1
this was a really good story!
Date: 05/26/10 02:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow! That's quite the power Tom has. Sounds a bit...awkward. :p
Like the story! Can't wait to read the rest of the series!
Date: 03/21/10 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
DUDE!!!! It would be soooo funny is Tom was walking down the sidewalk in New York, New York, without his glasses, and everyone he looked at would just jizz in their pants! SOOOOO FUNNY LMFAO!!
Date: 01/22/10 12:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww. I love tom's power. Somehow I think he has that power in real life too. ;D Bill is so awesome at the beginning. Super!Bill rockS my world.
Date: 10/28/09 06:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Aaaaaw, I loved it :D
xx Chi ^^
*yess, I'm going through all the stories now xD*
Date: 09/13/09 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Brilliant!
How do you come up with things like this?
It's a perfect mix of humour, sexiness and conversation.
Date: 08/16/09 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
kinda like a porn star Cyclops from X-men. At least Tom doesn't have to worry about frying people if he takes his glasses off. (^_^)
Date: 08/12/09 12:22 am Title: Chapter 1
awww thats so um romantic... but toms powers suck
Date: 08/10/09 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
tom has the strangest power ever!
Date: 08/08/09 05:04 am Title: Chapter 1
This was the most strange and amusing thing I've ever read, I think. I really liked it though, and I'm looking forward to the rest of it. :)
Date: 08/07/09 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww poor Tomi. :( I felt bad for them both. But neat powers lol!
Date: 08/07/09 03:53 am Title: Chapter 1
holy shit luv Tom's power amazing XOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Date: 08/07/09 02:09 am Title: Chapter 1
LMFAO, I loved that. But I do have one small piece of advice: You should proof-read just a little bit more carefully. One part you used 'done' instead of 'don't' and tentivly instead of tentatively. Other than those few minor things, it was amazing, of course. Although, from the moment I realized what Tom's power was I couldn't get the song "Jizz in My Pants" by The Lonely Island to stop repeating over and over in my head. Lol.
Author's Response: Don't tell anyone but... >.> That's the next story in our series. And I apologize for the mistakes, I as brain dead yesasterday and got as many as possible.
Date: 08/06/09 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
aha. this is such an amazing idea.
kuuuuudooooos!
Date: 08/06/09 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
AWW! The ending was sweet. It's so Tom to have a power like that. . .
Date: 08/06/09 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
lol. just lol. i lol'd the ENTIRE time reading this. Tom's ability is just lol-worthy xD
Date: 08/06/09 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was cute n hot n funny. good job girlies!!! xxAli
Date: 08/06/09 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
LMFAO the power to make people cum