Date: 08/15/09 01:29 am Title: Chapter 1
lovely... my heart is melting.
Date: 08/08/09 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
.... Man, this story is so sweet!
Date: 08/08/09 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
sweetNESS!
Omg, I loved it!
The beginning was sad and melancholic and the ending was so sweet, I can swear I got a cavity. xD
Date: 08/08/09 05:40 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm a sap. I cried. This was gorgeous.
Date: 08/07/09 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for this, I really liked it! I haven't read any fan fiction in 3 months or so, and yours was not only smooth to read, but moreover varied and had some twists.
A few things:
Oh, this was very sweet how you described their “breakfast” in the evening. I also liked the way you included real-time events into the story plot!
I laughed about the way Tom was calling (twice) for his brother really loud. Who would have thought that he misses Bill that quickly ;)
I do think that you managed to build up some angst btw. You could have intensified it by switching into Bill's perspective, but personally I don't like it when it becomes too dramatic suddenly.
Whoaa, what a speech from Tom there. I didn't see that coming ;)
Haha, and a flower tattoo on Tom? His reputation will be destroyed forever! But I'm sure they have a secret place for it where we won't see it. Tricky sneaky bastards :P
You have a very unique way to describe them, and I really enjoyed this fluffy-emotional twin time. :)
Author's Response: Hello Sir, it a honor having you here ;D
Lol, I'm feeling a mix of amused, embarrassed and proud to be your first story in 3 months... wow (you could find something better though :/)
Is funny that everyone assumed that Tom was missing his twin, he called Bill twice just because he wanted to find out where his twin was XD (ok, a part of him was missing Bill *lol* - it's the same thing I do when I get back in my flat; if I see I'm not alone I just call for my roomie, trying to figure out where she is :P
and of course the tattoo would be done in a secret place, you think Bill would like the whole world to see it? tsk!
Thank you very much for your review :D
Date: 08/06/09 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww! That was so cute, and it was a little bit corny, but that made it fantastic!
Author's Response: Thank you
I'm very happy you liked it :)
Date: 08/06/09 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this was wonderful. hahah I wonder how glad I should be that me and Nightingale started making our own little story about it on MTT and it inspired you. :D
the jasmine symbolism was wonderful, and I love that Tom did all of that just for his twin.
thank you for writing :)
Author's Response: LOL, actually you and Nightingale helped a lot because I wasn't even thinking about writing it; just plotting it in the back of my head (24 hours before I wrote this story, I was working on PB&BB). The more I've read you two talking and discussing the whole wedding, the more I wanted to write it :)rn
Thank you for reviewing :D
Date: 08/06/09 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
i liked that, but can you make a chapter about the tattoo thing? I didnt really get it
Author's Response: I'm sorry, but this was planned as a oneshot and there won't be a second chapter^^
rnAnd I thought the tattoo thing was actually clear - since Tom didn't want to buy two rings (because Bill is better when it comes to jewelry and stuff like this), he went to Hamburg to talk with Florence (the tattoo-artist that made Bill's fourth tattoo) and together they choose a drawing of two jasmine flower that both the twins would get tattooed :)
Date: 08/06/09 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
awwww so cute, I absolutly loved it a big heart for u XOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: thank you :D
Date: 08/06/09 10:21 am Title: Chapter 1
This is adorable. Absolutely adorable. Incredibly corny, but adorable.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 08/06/09 09:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh this was so sweet and lovely Ana! :)
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 08/06/09 08:17 am Title: Chapter 1
This was the sweetest thing EVER. The way Tom would go out of his way to make Bill feel better! Perfect! Update soon!
Author's Response: Ermmm, is a oneshot... but, thanks anyway?
Date: 08/06/09 07:55 am Title: Chapter 1
This was *so* sweet, not corny at all; it was delightful, romantic, and I'm actually crying. Yes, seriously.
Reading this was like watching a movie, Ana. I loved it!
Author's Response: Oh, god, you scared the hell out of me O.o I didn't realized it was you, I had to check your profile, I was like "Why is this person calling me by name...?"
rnThank you :) I'm glad you like it :D
Date: 08/06/09 06:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, that was really sweet! Not corny at all!
Author's Response: Thank you :)