Date: 08/26/09 02:06 pm Title: Wicked Game
So honestly, I have no Idea what to say about this chapter, other than I feel sorta bad for Andi. But I mean I guess I could understand how Bill feels, he had a really close, intimate relationship with his twin brother, and in a flash it was gone. He still loved Tom when Tom died. And I would assume it would be really hard to forget those memories, But If Andi is gonna play the role of bill's boyfriend, I think he deserves the right to know about tom. And soon. Maybe he'll be more.......understanding? It's kinda , for lack of a better word, selfish that Bill hasn't told anyone about Tom, not even Andi, and I mean, he doesn't have to tell Andi All the details of his and Tom's relationship, but he should just let Andi know that he had a twin brother that he had a really close bond/ relationship with, but he passed and he's still not used to having someone be so close. Haha well enough of my rambles and great update. :3
More soon? Please? :3
Author's Response: There will be more soon, I promise. And as for Bill not telling Andi... *shrugs* It's mainly because he can't talk about Tom without getting choked up. He'll probably tell Andi eventually, I think XD
Date: 08/26/09 11:19 am Title: Wicked Game
The anticipation is killing me, lol. I just caught up on this story and guh how awful to lose Tom that fast. I can't wait till he sees him again. :)
Author's Response: Next chapter! I can't wait either, which means this SHOULD be a short wait for the next update.
Date: 08/26/09 09:44 am Title: Wicked Game
This reminds me of an episode of Tru Calling! I'm glad you're writing this, the episode left me with some ideas and questions about purposeful death and resuscitation, and maybe your fic will inspire me to go study it. ;) Anyway, I'll be awaiting your next update!
Author's Response: OMG I LOVE THAT SHOW! >.> Erm, I mean, yeah. Thank you. A lot lol. I have to thank parallelheartz for all the realistic-ness of it. She did all the research that would have taken HOURS on my slow internet.
Date: 08/26/09 09:41 am Title: Wicked Game
aw poor tomi. poor billa misses tomi so much his willing to die for answers
Author's Response: I know, right? I never thought I was good at writing angst until this fic XD
Date: 08/26/09 06:47 am Title: Wicked Game
*is exhausted*
but i really liked the chapter even though Bill's ADD ruined a perfectly good blowjob scene xD
i can't wait for him to die already xD
don't i sound lie a cranky bitch? xD
Author's Response: Yes, you do, and you should go lie down and sleep :P And you can't for him to dies because *sings to George of the Jungle tune*
TOM TOM TOM VON DER KAULITZ TOMTOMTOMTOMTOM
I Couldn't resist. This is the point in time in which I become notoriously slap happy >.>
Date: 08/16/09 06:18 am Title: Time Of Dying
I think this is a thrilling and exciting plot. It is well written,and I really like the fact that you do reseach to make the medicall parts seem realistic.
I'm just confused about one part. In chp.3 Bill thinks about how he is close to giving into Andi,letting him touch places only Tom have touched. And until he is completely over Tom he would do nothing. Then the confusing part; In chp.2 we are told Bill and Andi's relationship are mostly based on sex. How intimit are Bill and Andi?
I'll shut up if you are about to explain that in an upcoming chapter ;)
Have a splendid day!
Author's Response: It's a bit complicated, but basically, Bill gives Andi really good blow jobs/hand jobs, and in return, he and Andi often share a bed. But Andi isn't allowed to touch Bill sexually (even though he really wants to). I'll try to explain it in an upcoming chapter ^_^ I usually try to do research on all of my fics. I actually went to NYC when I wrote 'Together in Hell', and toured a jail for 'Imprison My Heart'. In my opinion, the best stories are always researched ^_^ Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 08/15/09 07:00 pm Title: Get Out Alive
*Speachless*
(In a good way)
please more soon. O:
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 08/15/09 12:22 pm Title: Get Out Alive
is tom going to get tom back or is he just going to see him.
Author's Response: Tom and Bill will end up together by the end of the story :)
Date: 08/15/09 05:46 am Title: Get Out Alive
please write more, cause i cant wait to saturday! :P
Author's Response: I'm writing more now ^_^
Date: 08/15/09 04:19 am Title: Prologue
Oh also –you write fantastic sex scenes – my goodness! please let there be more of those! =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 08/15/09 04:07 am Title: Prologue
Wow with this fic I can’t even begin to imagine what you have in store for us and I think I am a little bit afraid. This is utterly fantastic and so so different from any other AU I can think of. 10 points for such a crazy awesome unique idea.
I am so excited about what happened now and I love the little details you add which make the story and characters seem even more interesting like Monday being the day Tom was buried. So cool.
Thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks ^_^ I try to come up with non-cliched plots...I guess it worked!
Date: 08/15/09 03:52 am Title: Get Out Alive
haha i feel that is gonna be like a horror fic xD not that im complaining lol
Author's Response: lol Since TDG is inspiring it...it probably should be considered as such. Maybe I'll change the genre...when I'm not being lazy, of course XD
Date: 08/15/09 02:00 am Title: Get Out Alive
NOM NOM NOM....i can't wait for Tom to come back ^_^ and Georg sooooo sees his mummy right?
Author's Response: Yep! lol and Tom...yeah >.> He's gonna be FUN to write lol
Date: 08/10/09 07:58 pm Title: Time Of Dying
awesome story. please update soon.
Author's Response: I'll update Saturday or after I get 25 reviews. Whichever comes first ^_^ Thanks so much for the review :)
Date: 08/08/09 10:36 pm Title: Time Of Dying
hahha cant wait to see what happens XD
Author's Response: Me neither XD But whatever happens, it'll be good!
Date: 08/08/09 04:50 pm Title: Time Of Dying
*shivers* Oooh. That was awesome. I may have slightly giggled at Georg saying his prayers in the bathroom, was that wrong? :) Anyway, I'm glad for some insight into Bill's past, and the reason for him wanting to be a doctor. I think a good song for this chapter may have been My Immortal by Evanessence, the lyrics have a lot to do with being haunted by someone who's long gone. But the Three Days Grace was nice, at any rate. I'm a bit nervous, are you planning on keeping Georg alive? I think he should almost die, so that Bill really has to think about this. Are you planning on letting Georg talk to anyone? I think he should run into Tom, maybe, just for a bit, long enough for Tom to tell Georg to pass on a message to Bill. But that's just me, and this chapter was great! But it's now kinda your fault that my 'rents think I'm more insane than before, but squealing at the table for no reason isn't that weird is it? XD
Author's Response: Oh, That WOULD have been a good song :) But, since Georg decided to die in this chappie, Three Days Grace it was. They kinda inspired me to actually start writing the fic, since I got the plot like...two months ago XD Don't worry, Georg isn't going to die for good (at least not yet). As for the rest of it, you'll just have to wait and see! :) Don't worry, I've squealed in way weirder places before lol. Like the middle of Geology Class >.> And the library. And once i even woke my roommate up with a squeal lol.
Date: 08/08/09 04:29 pm Title: Time Of Dying
lol. hahahaha. i told you that under NORMAL circumstances you had 3 minutes xD as if THIS is even normal in the first place xD
Author's Response: *shurg* Ah, well. Better to be on the safe side lol. I'm not planning on having any of them under longer than 5 min though. UNLIKE the movie, where the guy is fine after 12 minutes >.>rn
Date: 08/07/09 02:41 pm Title: On My Own
*squeaks and falls of chair* YAY! new chappy!!! *does dance* But it's so sad. *pouts* *huggles Bill* Anyway, I liked the guitar pick part, it was sweet. Georg strikes me as a little crazy, but who ever heard of genius without crazy? XD! Loved, can't wait for next chappy!!!
Author's Response: The move starts out with Keifer Sutherland's character (Georg) watching the sunset and saying "Today's a good day to die." Seriously, Georg probably won't be as wacky as the guy in that movie xD And the guitar pick was Shelly's idea :) I already had Bill put something in his bag, but I had no idea what he would have brought to his brother, so she helped me out ^_^ Next new chappie is probably Saturday ^_^
Date: 08/07/09 11:58 am Title: On My Own
Aww!
Such a sad story... :(
But very well written. :)
I love the idea and the whole plot line. It's a great story. :D
Update soon?
Author's Response: Thanks ^_^ I'll probably update Saturday sometime. I'm working on the next chappie now!
Date: 08/07/09 06:30 am Title: On My Own
Really great story ;D
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks :)