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Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/29/09 04:20 am Title: Running Away

WOOT! more answers :D hahaha its getting a whole lot more interesting

Author's Response: Thanks ^_^ Now that the whole Tom-is-dead angst is pretty much over, I hope it gets more interesting XD

Reviewer: parallelheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/29/09 02:25 am Title: Running Away

I went to go read this and realize I had already read all of this xD

waking up at 1am is not cool for my brain xD

but anyways, you know i liked this chapter.

i can't wait for more Bill and Tom time...as long as there's no little penis talk xD

Author's Response: Waking up at 1am would be okay if you when to sleep at 6pm XD

No little penis talk, I promise XD Or at the very least, I'll make it a whole chapter so you can skip it :P

Reviewer: talyntokiohotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/29/09 12:36 am Title: Running Away

yay now geo and billa can see dead people... love it

Author's Response: Thanks ^_^

Reviewer: leahq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/28/09 11:55 pm Title: Running Away

OMG I really can't wait to read Georg and Bill talking... i want to know what georg can see... and hopefully more of Tom... that whole repetitive afterlife thing sounds kind of scary.... but i really love this, i sent a link to my friends... keep up the fabulous work

Author's Response: Thanks ^_^ The afterlife thing IS scary--and it showed that Tom, being trapped in the two memories of his life, probably wouldn't have had new life experiences or grown grown a ton emotionally, like Bill when he moved out of his house, got his first car, etc.

Reviewer: Katanasai Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/09 10:03 pm Title: Running Away

Reviewing now! Yay! I was gone for two days, and I come back to a new chapter! Anyway. It's good to see GhostTom, and I can't wait to see how Georg approaches the situation. Anxiously awaiting the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks ^_^ We'll see about that, won't we?

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/09 09:31 pm Title: Running Away

Can Georg see Tom? Or can they only see the ones they knew in life? Now I'm curious... Update soon!



Author's Response: You'll find out soon! :D

Reviewer: ninjastarshinex Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/09 03:25 am Title: Stay With You

Oh god, that was sad. Yet i found it hilarious when tom danced around the room :D Can't wait for the next chapter!
x

Author's Response: Comic relief ^_^ I think the chapters will start getting a bit more upbeat now :D

Reviewer: graciaxdiederich Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/09 11:06 pm Title: Stay With You

I'm usually not into this kind of stuff, but my god, I'm HOOKED. Keep writing, it's great.

Author's Response: Thanks ^_^ I'm working on the next chapter now :)

Reviewer: leahq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/27/09 08:36 pm Title: Stay With You

Holy crapola this is fantastic... seriously, i havn't seen whatever it's based off of so it's totally origional to me.. the idea is fantastic and I love how you're putting it together... I just read all six chapters at once and I really wish there was more! OMG this is so cool! I can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much ^_^ I'm writing the next chapter right now, if that helps. It should be up in a few days.

Reviewer: Nini Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/09 08:03 pm Title: Stay With You

OH MY GOD
hahaha tom is 14 ..

Author's Response: My excuse is that he's been dead (and not aging/maturing/getting life experiences) for ten years. Ergo, he doesn't deserve to be 24 XD And it's FUN to write a 14-year-old Tom XD

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/09 05:18 pm Title: Stay With You

Wow, that was utterly AMAZING! So interesting, it totaly caught my mind and imagination! Fantastic, and I can't wait for more now.

Author's Response: Thanks ^_^ A new chapter will definitely be up soon :D

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/09 05:08 pm Title: Stay With You

it made a little sense lol and wow a dead 14 year old tom...who would of thought of that? XP

Author's Response: Apparently...me >.> And I'm glad it made a little sense ^_^

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/09 05:02 pm Title: Wicked Game

wow bill is pretty uhh whatstheword....devoted to tom hehe

Author's Response: Yeah. He's trying to stop...he just...can't (because it's love! lol)

Reviewer: megkaulitz483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/09 04:52 pm Title: Stay With You

ok i dont get the end ...... did Tom come back too?

Author's Response: Yeah ^_^ More info in the next chapter, I promise.

Reviewer: pattylake Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/09 01:19 pm Title: Stay With You

Oh no poor baby Tom, bless his heart. He makes me sad for some reason. :( But I can't wait for more. :)

Author's Response: Awww...well, it will have a happy ending, I promise ^_^

Reviewer: Lestat Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/09 11:43 am Title: Stay With You

This is such a good story. It's amazing. I can't believe that Tom's alive !

Hugs

Author's Response: Thanks ^_^ Although, he's not QUITE alive right now >.> More of a ghost lol

Reviewer: spreadxthexiubesc Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/09 08:58 am Title: Stay With You

Holy crap, he's alive again?!?!
I'm so excited for the next chapter.
I wasn't exactly expecting that.

Author's Response: Well, he's not EXACTLY alive yet. You'll see :D

Reviewer: Katanasai Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/09 08:48 am Title: Stay With You

The death thing really worked! It's very dreamy, and only the slightest bit confusing. It's going to be interesting to see how Tom reacts to the world now. I'll be waiting!

Author's Response: Thanks :) And Tom...well, he'll be very FUN to write ^_^

Reviewer: slicedtopieces Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/09 04:09 am Title: Stay With You

Wow great way to end the chapter. I wasn't expecting it to go exactly like that. This story had me crying earlier and happy now. It's written amazingly well- keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks :) Now that Bill can FINALLY stop all the angsting, I'm hoping that it will be a lot more fun to read :)

Reviewer: parallelheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/09 03:15 am Title: Stay With You

Tom dancing at the end made it move from serious to comedy for me xD

but i loved everything in this chapter from Bill dying and seeing Tom

Tom's desperation

and even Bill's confusion at the end.

*hug* love it ^^

Author's Response: Thank you ^_^ And you KNOW Tom would SO be dancing if that really happened XD At least, his 14-year-old self would XD

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