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Reviewer: killingallthatisreal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/09 02:41 am Title: Time Of Dying

O.o *grabs popcorn* now i'm nervous...

Reviewer: killingallthatisreal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/09 02:32 am Title: On My Own

*cries*

Reviewer: killingallthatisreal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/09 02:27 am Title: Prologue

thats really sad....i love it!

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/09 02:25 am Title: Everything I'm Not

wow i just finished reading a voice for tom before this one O-o

huh there wasnt a lot going on this chapter xD thats about it hahah

Author's Response: Lol I know. WB is a B*TCH

Reviewer: Nini Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/09 12:22 am Title: Everything I'm Not

SADDDDDD

Author's Response: I knw T_T

Reviewer: IndigoKitti Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/09 04:49 pm Title: Screwed

DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD;
Poor tom.
He must be confused. D:
More when you can?

Author's Response: I'll try my best. Thank you so much ^_^

Reviewer: RNA-Sun Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/09 02:18 am Title: Screwed

I love this story so much! I havn't been on this site in a while, and I'm so glad to come back and read an excellent story like this! I can't wait to read more, so I hope you write fast! ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm trying to write, when the jetlag isn't killing me XD Next chapter will (hopefully) be done soon, though!

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/09 02:00 am Title: Screwed

hmmm, i like this, i'm just not sure where it it going. its pretty heartbreaking at this point. i want our boys to have a happy ending. i always do. =) looking forward to more!

Author's Response: I can promise you a Tom/Bill happy ending. Or perhaps a Bill/Tom happy ending. Not sure yet XD It'll get better though, hopefully!

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/09 05:17 pm Title: Screwed

The very ending doesn't bode well for me... Tom sounds like he's going to do something stupid.

It's not right for Bill to give up what he has because his DEAD brother is back. Til death do us part means exactly that. Death came and spirited away Tom. He doesn't get another chance for what he might have had. It doesn't work like that, sorry.

Thanks for spending the money to post this. That's so awesome of you! Enjoy your trip.



Author's Response: Stupid? Maybe, maybe not XD

I think the $8 was TOTALLY worth it XD

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/09 02:39 am Title: Screwed

wow hope you have fun over there O_O and oh do i sense a killer ghost? XD

Author's Response: I'm having fun now...I'd be having MORE FUN if getting on the internet didn't require a 1.5 mile walk XD

And as for Tom killing Andi...pretty unlikely, since he knows what being dead is like and he HATES it XD

Reviewer: parallelheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/09 01:07 am Title: Screwed

awwww.

i just woke so my face is all -.-

i loved this chapter though.

the angst really killed me, as well as Tom's self doubt (yet again), and Bill's earnest reaction towards missing him.

anywhoodiddles, yay for this chapter, and i can't wait to see how tom truly reacts to Andi and what Bill's gonna do....

AND....i'm posting a bunch of chapters, just for you ^^

Author's Response: I LOVE YOU!!!

And this story is based on angst XD I can't stop it lol. And Andi...lol just wait and see XD

Reviewer: leahq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/31/09 07:34 pm Title: Screwed

OOH fantastic! I was so surprised... this was really great!

Author's Response: Thanks ^_^

Reviewer: parallelheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/09 04:49 pm Title: Real

w00t? xDD

i do miss you dearly...yes, already.

but i did enjoy this chapter. i liked Bill's reaction to Georg not sharing details with him, Tom's fear that Bill didn't love him, and even him reassuring himself that yes, Bill did still love him.

my favorite part was the ending though. it was sweet, and it showed their bond, how strong it was, even as Bill was falling asleep. ^^

Author's Response: YAY! Thanks for the review ^_^ I always look forward to your reviews XD You always give great feedback ^_^

And I miss you already, too. So much so that I paid $8 for two hours of internet >.>

Reviewer: leahq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/31/09 03:26 pm Title: Real

OH MY! This is a really interesting twist on things... they they can only see the person they dragged back... I'm really curious as to what the consequencse are going to be... keep up the good work and have fun in Spain!!!

Author's Response: I'm curious too...but I'm sure the plot bunnies know. Wherever they are XD.

Thanks! I will have fun (and work hard on finishing this chapter!)

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/09 12:32 pm Title: Real

Spain, huh? That's awesome. WOOT! Enjoy the time.

Even if Georg had told Bill about any of that, he still would've done it, I think. He was already intent on doing it, so why change his mind, simply because the one person who made Bill's life become stagnant could possibly cross back over?

I already read Entropy...



Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try!

Yeah, Bill probably would have. But like he said--it's the principle XD Bill probably would have been even more psyched to die, then XD

Reviewer: sexytwin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/09 11:28 am Title: Real

Awww this is sweet! I really like this...I hope u can continue soon with the story!.

I will be waiting...

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm nearly done with the next chapter! :D

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/09 09:26 am Title: Real

This is the first time im reading this andfuuuuuuuuck, it made me laugh, it made me cry, it made me go mad x'3
its wonderful!!!
love it and faved it already :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! This review really made my day :) I'm glad you loved it!

Reviewer: Ghostie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/09 07:46 am Title: Real

Oh. OUO
I guess it's fair to tell you now that I've been haunting this story [haunting, get it? teehee] and thank you SO MUCH for the pimpage. *dorky grin* I never expected that, so thanks :O! ♥ ♥ ♥

Have fun in Spain, I patiently await the next chapter ^u^

Author's Response: Lmfao I get it! rnAnd Entropy totally deserves being pimped XD I know I've pimped it more than once, and it deserves it every time lol. rnAnd next chapter will be finished in a bit XD

Reviewer: xVeroGore Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/29/09 07:18 am Title: Running Away

this is amazing! keep on with the good work :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much ^_^

Reviewer: Riven Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/29/09 05:15 am Title: Running Away

omg two fics in one update so awesome - I adore this story so much!

Author's Response: Thank you so much ^_^ I TRY to update in a timely manner lol

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