Date: 09/14/09 02:41 am Title: Breakdown
come on billa, tomi is back!
Author's Response: Bill's being difficult >.> Apparently ten years of therapy messed with his head.
Date: 09/13/09 10:40 pm Title: Breakdown
I knew Tom was going to do something. I could feel it in my gut.
Bill really does need help. He's not crazy, just hurt and confused.
Author's Response: *nods* I repeat. He's 14. He's immature. And Bill? *sigh* Poor guy...
Date: 09/13/09 07:03 pm Title: Breakdown
hi! :D
um I post in fanfiction.net and I read in spanish in sites like...
slasheaven and amoryaoi ... there are plenty of betas u can ask for x)
and yeah i have a 4 hours french test tomorrow :D so keep updatiiing cuz ur fic is great!
bill is being stupid xD *slap*! and tom is so aaaaaawww
i thought tom will grow up like in a month or so the ten year he missed :0 xD
and ARGH D: french xD sooo much texts to study D:
alors je dis au revoir! xD c'est tard D:
alto
si sabes español por qué escribí todo en ..argh xDDDDDDDD
D:
entonces duuh ..soy una estupida :B
D: si y tengo que estudiar..
bye :D
.nekito.
ps: it's a mix of lenguages!!! D: HELP!! xD
Author's Response: Lol Thanks XD I took French once and...NEVER AGAIN XD I had a horrible teacher lol. And honestly...who knows if Tom's every going to grow up? (Mentally, physically, in the story AND in RL) XD
Date: 09/13/09 06:07 pm Title: Breakdown
oh no oh no! No pills Bill! Bad Bill bad Bill!
Author's Response: But they're prescription pills! XD
Date: 09/13/09 06:02 pm Title: Breakdown
oh, poor bill. great chapter though! cant wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks ^_^
Date: 09/13/09 05:46 pm Title: Breakdown
wow, that was pretty low, even for tom. o_o
Author's Response: Originally Tom was just going to whack him over the head. I think this is more effective XD
Date: 09/13/09 05:24 pm Title: Breakdown
Aw ;-; I feel so bad for poor Tom. Even though he kind of did it against Bill's consent, the poor kid still loves him. Gosh, this is tearing me up inside. I know that you're going to write it how you want it and it pisses me off when people tell me to do certain things to my story but please let Tom end up with Bill D;
Like I said, I adore this story x]
And I'm so excited that you posted this chapter tonight. It's really helping me get my writing inspiration back ;]
Author's Response: Lol I post bonus chapters every 25-50 reviews, so more reviews=more chapters quite literally XD
Don't worry, I'm a serious Tom/Bill fan. They end up together eventually, I promise. I hope that doesn't take the spark of unknowing out of the story D:
Date: 09/13/09 03:02 pm Title: Mockingbird
Okay, I'm hooked. And I always make sure to comment on stories that I adore like this one. I just saw this by browsing and I read all eleven chapters and I LOVE it. It's so original and so well-written. I love how you kept Tom at fourteen years old. That was an unexpected twist ;]
So make sure you write another chapter real soon, okay? Because I really want to see what happens :]
Author's Response: I'm actually writing the bonus chapter right now, and it should be posted a little bit later tonight.
Thank you so much for the review. I always love well-written ones ^_^
Date: 09/13/09 02:50 pm Title: Mockingbird
it'd suck to be tom now. :P
Author's Response: Next chapter...it'll suck more to be Bill. Trust me ;)
Date: 09/13/09 01:36 pm Title: Mockingbird
This is going so well! I like how you're able to write about Bill and make him sound like a mature adult (mostly) and then write Tom and still be able to show that he's still only a teenager.
Author's Response: Thanks! That's one of the points that I'm really worried about making--the fact that there IS an age difference now, and I'm trying to show that. Although, I've been asked to show that only mentally, and not so much physically XD
Date: 09/13/09 12:25 pm Title: Mockingbird
last chapter tom swore that he coud move the fork... is he coming back, like for real? that would be sooo cool, like if he had grown in he's ghost shape 'till he got the same age as bill, then became more and more real!
(A)
but great story btw :D
Author's Response: I haven't really decided if he comes back for real, tbh. But I figure that the longer he's in the real world, the more 'powers' he gets. :D
Date: 09/12/09 12:46 pm Title: Everything I'm Not
AWWWWWWWW. AWWWWW! THIS IS SO FUCKING AMAZING, I CAN'T EVEN COMMENT CORRECTLY (which I never can, but this made it worse) AND IT'S SO SAD BUT CUTE BUT SAD AGAIN.
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.
Author's Response: Um....congrats on 75? XD
Date: 09/07/09 06:14 pm Title: Everything I'm Not
Wow so... I feel super bad for everyone involved *but less so for andreas because he cheats, the scumbag*... this is really interesting and i'm super curious about how this talk is going to go! More soon I hope!
Author's Response: Working on it now...or I would be, if I didn't have class in a few minutes XD And Andi...gah. Just gah.
Thanks for the review!
Date: 09/06/09 02:26 pm Title: Everything I'm Not
Now I understand the dynamic between Bill and Andi. With that in mind, I can say that maybe this relationsip isn't the best one for Bill. His mind is in the right place, but I think it's for all the wrong reasons.
I'm still a bit leary of Tom. Just saying, for the record.
Fantastic job, though. I like this.
Author's Response: It probably ISN'T the best thing for Bill, but he thinks it's keeping him sane, and he thinks it's a bit better than a relationship with Tom. And Tom...well, he's 14. That should say it all.
Date: 09/06/09 11:55 am Title: Everything I'm Not
poor tom, bill needs to just tell him everything. i mean, he has his twin back, thats who he is supposed to tell everything to. i look forward to more! =) oh, and i love a voice for tom. you have good taste. ;)
Author's Response: Oh he will...tomorrow XD When Tom..erm...yeah.
Thanks! Maybe it's just because it's such an awesome story, though! XD
Date: 09/06/09 06:31 am Title: Everything I'm Not
wow... for one is tomi going to be able to touch stuff? cause i pity andi if tomi learns to pick up frying pans. i love your progress its developing into a good plot keep going.
Author's Response: Lol I pity Andi anyway >.> Kinda. He's sorta a douche, in my opinion. And as for touching stuff...right now, if he gets pissed enough...but later? Idk maybe he'll figure out how to hold stuff normally XD
Date: 09/06/09 06:20 am Title: Everything I'm Not
GAH. i'm sorry that I wasn't able to help hun. mum went into total bitch mode because no one (other than me) was doing their set chores, and she turned off the entire computer system as we were talking, and refused to turn it back on until the chores were complete (which meant that I did them all b/c no one but me really cared that we had no internet >.>)
but anyways, here's my review ^_^:
poor Tom, like really. i mean i GET why Bill feels he needs that relationship, it makes him sane, even though he'll never really be able to forget what happened with Tom, ESPECIALLY now that Tom's there with him 24/7
Tom needs to figure out how to make Bill realize that he still needs/loves him *nodnod*
again, i'm really sorry for not being able to be there for you love.
Author's Response: Well, you'll just have to deal with the consequences of not helping XD Namely, this chapter being plotless Scheiße.
I moved from Bill Angst to Tom Angst XD How am I doing on the maturity level? I was kinda worried that Tom was too mature about the Andi thing >.>
Date: 09/06/09 04:34 am Title: Everything I'm Not
Update!
Bad idea to take Tomi to see Andreas hehe... well I think he is going to get used to it...
Contine soon please I really like this story!
Oh yeah! A Voice For Tom is really amazing but there is only 1 chapter left, Oh nooooo I love that story!
Author's Response: Well, no one's really sure how far Tom can go away from Bill. After all, he IS haunting him XD
There's only one chappie left in VFT? hmmm.... >.>
Date: 09/06/09 04:06 am Title: Screwed
oooooooooh!!!! gettin good!!!
Author's Response: Thanks ^_^ I try!
Date: 09/06/09 03:52 am Title: Stay With You
holy crap...