Date: 09/27/09 07:38 pm Title: S.O.S.
So....sad.
Poor Tom, brings me to tears, literally.
Author's Response: That's either a compliment as to my writing or a complaint about all the angst... XD
Date: 09/27/09 07:33 pm Title: Faint
Hmmm.....I was kind of thinking Tom was like Patrick Swayze in 'Ghost' where he could like move or touch anything depending on how much he focused on it, but, I guess I was wrong. I'm sooooo interested to find out what happens with Bill at therapy xD
Author's Response: It's more like very intense emotion will let him briefly touch things...like that fork in the diner XD
Date: 09/27/09 07:18 pm Title: Mockingbird
=O
Bill's a meanie!
Pooooooor Tom...*sigh*
Author's Response: Bill...thinks he's insane and THINKS he's only doing what's best for Tom lol He's not mean--he's WRONG. XD
Date: 09/27/09 07:15 pm Title: Let It Out
Yay for his therapist!! =) I am so glad she told him to interact with Tom, though I dont want Tom to go away. i want them to find a way for Tom to be able to stay with Bill. Maybe the more he interacts with him the more real he will become, since he and Bill are so connected. I mean, there is obviously an afterlife here so we can have miracles too. Keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: 0.0 You think? Wow...that would be a really good plot twist, wouldn't it?... >.>
Date: 09/27/09 07:09 pm Title: Wicked Game
This song, is the only song that i have heard from this band. I loved this song when i younger
Author's Response: Wanna know something funny? I honestly never even heard this song until about a week ago. I posted it in this chapter mainly for the lyrics XD
Date: 09/27/09 06:53 pm Title: Let It Out
I barely began reading but I'm pretty sure i'm hooked!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Date: 09/27/09 06:47 pm Title: Running Away
Oh, my god! This story is EPIC!
I love it, I love it, I LOVE IT!
Whoo!
I can't even give a half good review because I wanna read the next chapter but you're amazing!
Author's Response: Really? Wow. Thank you so much!
Date: 09/27/09 06:27 pm Title: Get Out Alive
Even after how upset I was by the 2nd chapter, I'm getting kind of gitty for Bill to die xD
Author's Response: Lol It's kinda sad how I think everyone was...maybe because that's when the story REALLY starts? XD
Date: 09/27/09 06:15 pm Title: On My Own
I don't know why I clicked this story; I'm such crap at reading this with death.
As soon as he read the epitaph, I started sobbing.
Ugh, but it's SO well written that I honestly cannot stop reading it now.
Well, at least I know I'll get a good cry from it.
Great job so far ^_^
Author's Response: Aww...Thank you for giving this fic I chance. I hope you feel a lot better by the end of the fic (since NONE of my characters ever stay dead, for some reason :/)
If it helps at all, I cried while writing that scene.
Date: 09/27/09 03:57 pm Title: Let It Out
OMG. So the psychiatrist actually thinks it is a ghost. Which it is. Or maybe she's just playing along with Bill's supposed "hallucinations?".
But now Georg has actually spoken to TOM, so obviously Bill must try to believe now right? Unless, he begins to think that Georg too is a hallucination....
Ahh, it get's more complicated. And I love it :)
Author's Response: O_O Now that WOULD be a good twist...*is trying to figure out how to pull it off* But no, Dr. Turner believes XD
Author's Response: O_O Now that WOULD be a good twist...*is trying to figure out how to pull it off* But no, Dr. Turner believes XD
Date: 09/27/09 03:05 pm Title: Tell Me Why
I really like this story. The whole "experiment" was executed very realistically--as in, I could see this really happening. You write very well and I cannot wait to read more. :)
Author's Response: Thanks ^_^ What information I didn't get off the movie, parallelheartz looked up for me :)
Date: 09/27/09 02:04 pm Title: Tell Me Why
YAY! awesomeness! god, I love this story....
Author's Response: Thanks! ^_^ I was WAITING for your review lol :P
Author's Response: Thanks! ^_^ I was WAITING for your review lol :P
Date: 09/27/09 01:29 pm Title: Tell Me Why
I love this story story and I love the movie Flatline, so this is just great! In Danish the movie is called "Playing with Death" which I actually think your story shows more than actually flatlining (you follow? hope so).
Guess what I'm trying to say is great story and keep up the good work ;)
Author's Response: Thanks! I really didn't know much about Flatliners in other countries, that's awesome!
Author's Response: Thanks! I really didn't know much about Flatliners in other countries, that's awesome!
Date: 09/27/09 12:48 pm Title: Tell Me Why
Man, that a big mess. Tom feels responsible, but it's not really his fault. Bill thinks he's losing his mind, and I can understand that. Georg just got sucked into it. I almost feel bad for him.
Author's Response: lol Well, Georg kinda STARTED the whole thing XD
Date: 09/27/09 12:34 pm Title: Tell Me Why
Thnx for posting this story :D
Really goodi :P
Author's Response: Thanks ^_^ I'm glad you think so!
Date: 09/23/09 10:16 pm Title: S.O.S.
uhh filler words? O_o I'm not used to all this writer talk XD
but bill is so mean...again XD
Author's Response: Not mean so much as scared to death he might be insane. They usually don't let the insane be doctors, you know... 0.0
Date: 09/23/09 04:20 am Title: S.O.S.
ooooooohh noooeeesss T_T
*cries a river in front of the screen*
Author's Response: *is typing in a lifeboat in the middle of a river of tears*
It'll get better soon, I promise! Well, okay. It'll get better. More angst ahead XD
Date: 09/22/09 08:01 pm Title: S.O.S.
Oh gosh ;-; Poor Tom. Ugh, Bill needs to get a grip, because that's just terrible. Poor kid ;-;
Oh yay, bonus chapter x] I'll be watching out for it.
I like both of your writing styles. But I have to say that "Together in Hell", that writing style was my very favorite. I adore your writing in general, though. So don't feel like you have to change it :]
Author's Response: Erm...I have a funny sense of time? X(
Thanks for answering the question :) Hopefully next chapter will be up soon XD It's have done...if it's only going to be four sentences long.
Date: 09/21/09 06:38 pm Title: S.O.S.
oh! poor tom. and poor bill i suppose. poor boys!! i can't wait for the next chapter, to see how the dr. appointment goes. maybe going will help tom understand what bill thinks is going on.
Author's Response: That's the plan! Or...it would be, if any of my stories ever stuck to the plan >.>
Date: 09/21/09 04:49 pm Title: S.O.S.
I feel so bad for Tom. It's not his fault that he's dead. He makes me sad.
Author's Response: I know T_T It's be fine in the end, though, I promise!