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Reviewer: Nini Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 05:35 pm Title: Comatose

I loved this :)
Bill finally realised tom was real ....well deathly-real :)

Author's Response: Yep! LOL Now if only Tom could become real-real XD

Reviewer: talyntokiohotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 04:43 pm Title: Comatose

aw so sweet im crying.

Author's Response: *hands a tissue* Just wait until next chapter, Hun ;)

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 03:39 pm Title: Comatose

Georg sounds like he would make a good friend for Bill, even if it IS his fault that Bill wanted to do the experiment in the first place. If Georg hadn't mentioned it, Bill wouldn't have done it, and there would be no problems. Of course, there would also be no story, so I guess I'm kinda grateful.

Author's Response: LOL I like Georg, too, and I don't blame him at all for this whole mess...it can be traced back to Bill's mom XD

Reviewer: BillsFreak Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 03:04 pm Title: Comatose

aww, they made up :) didn't like it when Bill thought Tom wasn't real! I'd like it if Tom somehow got older (like Bill's age) I have no idea how or why or if it would fit in with the story, just thougt I share my thought (since they are about your story). Anywho keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: I doubt that will fit into the story, but if you find a plausible way, let me know!

Reviewer: SchwarzEstrella Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 02:43 pm Title: Comatose

Such cute Billa/Tomi moments. I think I might cry... You are evil! :P

Bravo!

Author's Response: I'm evil NOW...wait until the next chapter ;)

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 01:47 pm Title: Comatose

I really like this story.
Thank you

Author's Response: Thank YOU for reviewing ^_^

Reviewer: toriboo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 12:14 pm Title: Comatose

So, now Bill knows he's not crazy xD
I'm glad for it, you know? And I'm also REALLY happing that he's coming to appreciate Tom ^_^....well, now that he knows Tom is real and not a hallucination.

Can I ask a question? Of course that was a question but, another xD
Before, I think you said none of your characters ever stay dead, I was wondering what you meant by that? Did you mean like...like Tom is kind of in the in-between world, neither truly dead nor alive or will he somehow come alive again? Like and even though Tom is a ghost, now that he's back in the world of the living, can he slowly age? Like on his birthday could he become....the next age he's supposed to be (i forgot how old he was when he died) or like could he age slowly and slowly become the same age as Bill?

Awesome, awesome chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for the awesome review! ^_^

In answer to your question, Yes, Tom IS sorta in an in-between world. He is neither dead and in the afterlife, nor is he alive and breathing. It's almost as if he's alive on a totally different plane. As to slowly coming alive...we'll see, won't we? ;)

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 10:16 am Title: Comatose

i hate u so much! im crying here T.T
it was such a good chap!!!

Author's Response: *Hands a tissue* Sorry! Next chapter will be a bit fluffier, I think :)

Reviewer: emochmcl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 08:06 am Title: Comatose

thats no fair i love all your stories. sighs... lifes no fair huh?

Author's Response: "It's not fair!"--But that's the way it is XD Those lines are from my fav movie LOL. Everytime I hear someone say it's not fair I think of the movie Labyrinth XD

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: HarpAngel999 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/09 09:57 am Title: Let It Out

More bitteeeeeeeeeeeeeee~~~~~~~~~

Author's Response: I should update on Sunday ^_^

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/09 06:29 pm Title: Let It Out

I love this story.
I cant wait for the new chapter

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll probably update on Sunday :)

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 07:11 pm Title: Everything I'm Not

I have been reading it and yes it is a wonderful fic

Author's Response: Danke! ^_^

Reviewer: KTwinsLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 06:06 am Title: Let It Out

OMG you can't stop here!! I want more! I just started reading this story and I really like it. The idea of it is so interesting and I can't wait to read what happens when Bill and Tom are back together. :]
Updates soon I hope. :D

Author's Response: Soon, soon, I promise ^_^ I'm actually working on the next chapter now lol

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 04:31 am Title: Let It Out

OH MY GOOOOOOOOSSHHH xD
please more more more SOON!!! IM DYING HERE!!!! C'MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON

Author's Response: I'm writing the next chapter now? XD

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/09 11:17 pm Title: Stay With You

hehehe, the ending was kinda cute

Author's Response: Thanks ^_^

Reviewer: Nini Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/09 11:17 pm Title: Let It Out

OMGGGGGG :D

Author's Response: I knowz, right? XD

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/09 11:00 pm Title: Let It Out

Brotherly time, huh? Will that be possible with those two? And what the doctor said totally made sense. Accept it and move on.

Author's Response: Um...Maybe...NOT XD

Thanks! I was kinda worried that everyone would go on about how Dr. Turner was a quack, etc XD

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/09 10:21 pm Title: Let It Out

No, Bill, no. Don't spend just regular brotherly time with Tom. He loves you ;-;

Oh gosh, I'm getting all caught up in the story. Probably because you are a GREAT WRITER :] Seriously, Zaubermaus. Stellarrrrr.

Author's Response: I knowz, right? Well, since Bill isn't exactly up-to-date on what 'brothers' do...XD

Thank you thank you thank you. Seriously. You chased my TH-related nightmare away when I look up and saw this review! ^_^

Reviewer: emochmcl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/09 09:12 pm Title: Let It Out

what??? you sided with tom... i actually like this story but you should work on your others also. you are a talented author please keep up the good work

Author's Response: Of course I sided with Tom. I mean, Bill's insane, right? Or not, according to his therapist.

THANK YOU SO MUCH! It is reviews like yours that keep my faith in writing alive :D

Reviewer: toriboo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/27/09 08:02 pm Title: Let It Out

=O
Oh, shi-oot.
Update, update!
Georg talked to Tom. Did he say that in the presence of the psychiatrists or had she already left?
This story is absolutely amazing and I can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: He said it after Dr. Turner left, on the way back to the car. Ima gonna update soon, promise!

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