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Reviewer: Aneksi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 07:49 am Title: If We Kissed

YAY to updates!

 

OMG it was an awesome chapter - i love the fact that Bill decided to let go of the therapy stuff for a while and just spent time with Tom :') and the ending with a kiss PHWOAAAAR ;)

 

cant wait for the next chapter! :D x



Author's Response: Thanks ^_^ Let's see if Bill REALLY let go of all the therapy stuff or if he's gonna regress later XD

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 05:24 am Title: If We Kissed

good work, as usual. =)

Author's Response: Thanks :) I actually think that this chapter and the next are the best two so far...

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/09 11:10 pm Title: Stay With You

it made sense to me...and he brought 14 year old tomi back...hmmm...this should be interesting...

Author's Response: I hope it is! XD More angst on the way...

Reviewer: Aneksi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/09 10:48 am Title: Comatose

OMG i think im gonna cry *girlieflapsathereyes* this story is so amazing! absolutely heart wrenching and soooo beautiful at the same time! and OMG i LOVE Georg and his mutti - such an excellent choice of ghost to take back with him! i LOOOOOOOOOVE this story! cant wait for an update! :D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: I seriously have like...two chapters ready to post, in case I reach 200 and need a bonus chapter LOL Thank you sssssssoooooooooooooooooo much for reviewing ^_^

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/09 11:40 pm Title: Wicked Game

interesting...he did a crappy job of convincing himself he was over tom...i can't wait til he dies...does that sound cruel? unfortunately that's it for me tonight and i shall continue tomorrow...

Author's Response: Well, normally, yes, I would say waiting for someone to die IS cruel. But considering the circumstances...nein. It's not XD

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/09 11:30 pm Title: Get Out Alive

he sees things now doesn't he? it's gotta be freaky to die and come back...poor bill...i understand though cause he never got to say good-bye...

Author's Response: I think a lot of people would be willing to do the experiment in it meant they got to say goodbye...

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/09 11:20 pm Title: Time Of Dying

i don't know if i'd ever be able to do something like that...but hey, to each his own, right?

Author's Response: Yep! ^_^

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/09 11:11 pm Title: On My Own

it's sad that he balmes his mother but i understand why...and the gifts are perfect...

Author's Response: THanks :) It took FOREVER trying to figure out gifts for Tom -.- I wonder if he's this hard to shop for in RL...

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/09 10:19 pm Title: Prologue

that is a really great beginning! it's tragic...poor bill is all alone now...

Author's Response: Yeah...Poor Bill >.> He's a soddin' idiot, I think.

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/09 04:05 pm Title: Comatose

Sure x]

Wow, I'm totally spamming up the review page xD

Author's Response: LOL I don't care XD Review count goes up, doesn't it? LOL XD Do you have some kind of Messenger? I wanna hunt/stalk/talk to you now LOL

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/09 10:12 pm Title: Prologue

:DDDDDDDD

You make me happy.

...I don't suppose you'd update "Winter's Son", would you? D: I just started reading it today and it's another really great one but your chapter notes say that you have no inspiration or motivation for it :/ But if you could that would be great.

If not, just tell me and I'll pick a different one. ...and go sob in the corner...

JUST KIDDING xD

Author's Response: Well...I already have a paragraph, soo....I guess we'll see on Sunday what kind of chapter I can come up with, huh? ;) If I can't manage to get more than like...1500 words for Winter's Son, would you like an extra chapter of Flatline, instead, though (and a promise to finish the WS chapter soon?)rn

Reviewer: lovemusicart Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/09 07:15 pm Title: Comatose

I love this story SQUEE!
Yay, I believe Bill is finally figuring out that Tom is real. That was so touching.

Author's Response: Thanks! That's what I was aiming for ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks! That's what I was aiming for ^_^

Reviewer: KTwinsLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/09 04:40 am Title: Comatose

;-; That was such a great chapter. That Tom can still play his guitar is amazing. x] and I love that Bill seems to finally be accepting that Tom is really there. Hopefully he'll still believe. :]
I really love this story, it's just amazing. Can't wait for the next update. :D

Author's Response: Thanks! ^_^ I think you'll L-O-V-E the next chappie ;)

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/09 12:01 am Title: Comatose

aww damn there were about 151 reviews when i was reading the chapters XD oh well haha

Author's Response: Ah well. Maybe next time? The contest is valid for all of my stories LOL

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 11:55 pm Title: Let It Out

pft bill is being so dumb lol

Author's Response: Yep!

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 11:47 pm Title: Tell Me Why

gosh Georg is so smart XD

Author's Response: I think he is in RL, too XD

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 09:50 pm Title: Comatose

BAH!! I was no. 151 ;-; I fail at life v_v

SO. You updated! :D This chapter really made me quiet, which is a shock because I talk ALL THE TIME. So sitting in silence for like four minutes (I read fast) was like...wow. I adore your writing, Zaubermaus. You have the greatest ideas.

Funny thing: In Arc 3 of my new story Love and Death which is being written right now, the Arc is called "The Comatose" and it has some of the lyrics from that song xD I thought that was pretty funny.

I can't wait to see how this turns out, Mausi x]

...giving people German animal nicknames isn't normal, is it? @_@

Author's Response: Actually...there was a double review XD Which makes you 150th. Congrats! Review me again and tell me which story to update/write a one-shot for XD

Who cares if giving people German nicknames is normal or not? i like it ^_^

Reviewer: IzzyKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 07:04 pm Title: Comatose

Annlas, this was an AMAZING chapter, I love how Georg proved to Bill that he could see Tom, Tom saw his guitar, and the twins got back together, it was so, so cute! GAH! Imma come after you with a hoe and stab you if you don't update soon. *eyes*

Author's Response: ...Do you consider Sunday to be soon? >.>

Reviewer: sexytwin Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 07:01 pm Title: Comatose

Awww this chapter was so cute, they are finally together again...so sweet. Georg seems to be a good friend! I'm glab that he is able to see Tom when he is with his mom. It would be very nice if Tom have the same age as Bill but he always going to look like a little boy, right?

Continue soon!!! I really like the story!

Author's Response: Yeah, he'll probably stay a boy--no magical way to get older except time, i'm afraid.

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 06:29 pm Title: Comatose

Yay for an update. I just love this story. I'm so glad Tom could still play his guitar. =) Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thanks ^_^

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