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Reviewer: SchwarzEstrella Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 10:43 am Title: Keep Holding On

Again, you are an evil person, taunting us with the prospect of a bonus chapter! Grrr.... you and your awesomnesstasticaly cool writing skills.

Author's Response: Yes, I AM Evil, for writing two extra chapters, one of which you won't see until next week... >.>

Reviewer: Maddie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 10:20 am Title: Keep Holding On

You lost me here on that "a few more ghost rules"...he need sleep ? is that one ? what are the others then ?
I feel kinda stupid for asking, but oh well...I'll get over it :p

Great chapter, love it :D

Author's Response: Argh my choice of words...I'll go change it. It's more like 'differences' than before (Tom sleeping, Georg being able to see his outline). Thanks for asking I'll go fix it now XD

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/09 09:33 am Title: If We Kissed

that's sweet...it couldn't be helped...if you love someone so much, it's hard to forget and not do what comes natural...it's strange though 'cause how exactly are they gonna make this work if tom's dead?

Author's Response: It'd be weird, but I have every faith in them...at least they can touch/have sex, ja?

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/09 09:22 am Title: Comatose

that's so sweet...at least he's there to comfort bill and bill's not pushing him away...and he can ply his guitar...that's awesome...now he won't be bored when bill's not around...

Author's Response: Yeah...>.> If, you know, he decides NOT to follow Bill everywhere lolrn

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/09 09:13 am Title: Let It Out

i like this therapist...she seems to have a handle on bill fairly well...she's got a point, what could it hurt? either way, he gets to say good bye...now let's see what geo has to say to bill aobut tom...

Author's Response: Yeah, I like her...unlike MY therapist *fumes silently*

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/09 01:18 am Title: If We Kissed

ahh so cute ahaha and sweeney todd is awesome! :o wth was tom thinking? lol

Author's Response: Tom was thinking Pirates probably had less blood in it XD

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 10:28 pm Title: Tell Me Why

it's great that geo's trying to help...i'm just worried that the thetapist is going to do more damage than actually help bill...

Author's Response: Don't most therapists? *personal experience* >.>

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 10:07 pm Title: S.O.S.

poor tomi...i wanted to cry for him...but bill really thinks he's a hallucination...it's sad...

Author's Response: I know...

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 09:58 pm Title: Faint

the ghost rules make sense...i always thought that's how it worked...i really hope that they sit down and actually talk to each other...and soon...

Author's Response: I did some serious internet research for the ghost rules...and then just wrote my own XD

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 09:40 pm Title: Breakdown

poor bill...how can he handle this? he never really got over tom...this just proves it...

Author's Response: I know, right? Poor Bill...

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 07:56 pm Title: Mockingbird

that's gotta suck 4 both bill & tom...how do they both feel about this? and bill's just leading andi on...how fair is that? and tom's gotta b livid...i would b...

Author's Response: Livid...yeah >.>

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 07:51 pm Title: If We Kissed

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I hate scary movies ;-;

xD ANYWAY...of course it's dedicated to me because I'm epic like that. But thanks for pimping my oneshot x] It's because it's a KC, isn't it? xD All my others are General or Het so you had to go and pick the only KC. Ahahaha, just kidding, thanks so much *hug*

I'm about to go read Winter's Son, as long as my mom doesn't kick me off the computer. And thennn...I'm going to write some of Chrysanthemum which is a KC chaptered fic I'm working on that was somewhat inspired by your writing x] So it's kind of your story in a way.

So. Now to the actual review. That was such a sweet, fluffy chapter. I love how Tom's scared of scary movies, that's something not a lot of people would think about. Like the one picture where Bill, Tom, and Georg are in the movie theater and Tom says, "RUN HE GON KILL U BITCH" and Bill and Georg are like "shut up Tom". Makes me laugh. My sister and I did that once xD But yeah. The kiss was adorable x] It must be guilty pleasure, it's like...pedophilia and under-age erotica and incest and all the different stuff that I love reading xD

...I have just decided that I suck at writing reviews xD



Author's Response: Well, 'cuz it's a KC and because, by some stroke of fate, it's the only one I had time to read -,- I am going to fix, that, i promise. Just...after I write more chapters of smut/fluff/angst XD

Ima gonna read Chrysanthemum, again, when I haz time XD

Don't think I've seen that picture XD Lol it was BILL'S guilty pleasure ;)

And I look forward to your reviews so nyahh :P

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 07:37 pm Title: Everything I'm Not

i agree with tom...why do it if your not happy...but i also see bill's point...it makes him seem more normal...what ever the hell that means...

Author's Response: I don't even see why he wants to be normal in the first place, really :/

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 06:44 pm Title: Screwed

that's so sweet... they wanted to marry eachother...tom has a lot of good points...he's been dead for 10 years...do all of their promises become null and void?

Author's Response: ...I honestly don't know. Seriously. I should think about that... XD

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 06:14 pm Title: Real

nothing can change the fact that georg didn't tell him...now he has to figure out what's going on from here...

Author's Response: 'Where do we go from here...' I think that's a song >.>

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 05:54 pm Title: Running Away

georg knows exactly what's going on...poor andi...he's got to be so confused...and tom too...after being dead for 10 years it's gotta be scary...even if no one but bill can see him...

Author's Response: Poor Andi indeed. Pfft. >.> Explanations shall come later, I promise.

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 03:36 pm Title: If We Kissed

That was an great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks ^_^

Reviewer: lovemusicart Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 01:36 pm Title: If We Kissed

Aww! That kiss was painfully sweet.
That's crazy all that stuff had to go through to try and erase his feelngs for Tom.

What a waste of money, because it didn't change one thing. He's right back where he was ten years ago.

Author's Response: Well, ALMOST XD He's not past the brother thing YET. But...soon?

Reviewer: toriboo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 12:07 pm Title: If We Kissed

Oh, yes! Acceptance! Sweet, sweet, fluffy acceptance~~!

Tom wants to be grown up, so sad but selfless because he only wants to be that way for Bill, but, if he thinks like a grown up, will he BECOME a grown now that he's back in the land of the living or be stuck in a perpetual stage of adolescence?

Great chapter as usual! xD

Author's Response: Maybe he'll age normally, who knows? And as far as Bill is concerned...acceptance is, unfortunately, just an illusion -.-

Reviewer: KTwinsLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 09:42 am Title: If We Kissed

Love it! I like that Bill and Tom are making up and getting better. Poor Tom was scared of the movie. XD It's ok Tom, I was too! Until I saw it. XD
Anyway great update. I can't wait to read more. :]

Author's Response: Scary Movie 3 is the reason I can now watch The Ring and go to bed without a nightlight ^_^

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