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Reviewer: KTwinsLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/09 09:21 pm Title: Say Goodbye

Awww. I liked the two updates. x]
It's sad that Georg's mom is gone though. :[ I hope Bill and Tom have time to make things right before Tom has to leave again.
Great chapter on a great story. :]
Can't wait till Sunday. :D

Author's Response: Tom doesn't HAVE to leave unless he feels Bill could cope without him...or he could cope without Bill. :D So...never? lol XD

Reviewer: 2Kewl4U Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/09 06:01 pm Title: Say Goodbye

I love it! It's so sad and Tom is so adorable and Georg is depressed! I love this story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! ^_^

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/09 03:13 pm Title: Say Goodbye

GO TOM! GO TOM! SMACK IT! XD

Author's Response: LOL I know, right? XD

Reviewer: toriboo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/19/09 02:51 pm Title: Prologue

Haha, don't be too jealous; I'm going by myself 'cause all of my friends dislike TH with a passion, but I have to pay $12 for round trip train tickets, additional $6 because I'm coming back after 5pm, cab fare both ways and....I might not even get a pass. =(

Mah! =P but what does it mean?!

=P Boo! lol

Author's Response: LOL You'll see, you'll see...I promise ^_^

Reviewer: pippinmcgee Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/09 01:55 pm Title: Say Goodbye

Oh my Goodness, this is amazing!! You're an amazing writer and I love how this story goes so much deeper than just the usual twincest ideas - there's actual confusion and emotions behind all this too.

I want to hug you so much for writing this! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you loved it :) I honestly try to go through the twincest confusion/emotions in all my stories, but this is one of the ones where I get more in depth with it. ^_^

Reviewer: toriboo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/19/09 11:45 am Title: Say Goodbye

=O
Now who's a cocktease?! Lol
Oh my god.....Georg can SEE Tom! The hell........? Why?
And now he knows there's some.....'abnormal' about Tom and Bill's relationship; I can't wait to see how he takes it but, he seems to be rather intelligent here, so, maybe he won't be TOTALLY surprised once he sits down and think logically about everything.
XD (and TH is here today and tomorrow; cd signing tomorrow. Yay, joy!)
Until you update again, I'm gonna be biting my nails waiting.

Author's Response: I be jealous. >.> And pretending not to care. But jealous.

And Georg can see Tom's OUTLINE, which isn't exactly TOM... >.>

And of COURSE I'm a cocktease! PAYBACK! XD

Reviewer: talyntokiohotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/09 05:32 am Title: Keep Holding On

omg is he becoming real?!

Author's Response: I shall say nothing >.>

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/09 02:22 am Title: Keep Holding On

O_O tom isnt gonna disappear is he? T-T

Author's Response: That's for me to know and you to...just don't worry, it'll be fine, ja? XD

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/09 01:33 am Title: Keep Holding On

He's not SUPPOSED to sleep, or he just doesn't sleep? There is a difference, and I'm not sure I grasp what it is. And why is Mutti gone? Did she disappear, or did she just kinda, like, go invisible or whatever and do ghostly things?

Author's Response: Ghosts just DON'T sleep, and Tom's a bit confused as to why he is sleeping now...as everyone SHOULD be, at this point.

And Mutti moved on, because Georg said goodbye and finally let her move on (like in Ghost Whisperer, if you've ever seen the show).

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/09 01:28 am Title: If We Kissed

Finally, the kiss. I've been waiting for it. But what now? Where do they go from here?

Author's Response: You'll see...XD

Reviewer: DiscoDancing Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 06:47 pm Title: Keep Holding On

Cuuuute! But the issue with Georg's mom makes me nervous. =(

Reviewer: DiscoDancing Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 06:47 pm Title: Keep Holding On

Cuuuute! But the issue with Georg's mom makes me nervous. =(

Author's Response: It makes Bill nervous, too :/

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 05:46 pm Title: Keep Holding On

Aw ;-;

Poor Tomi. I would hate to have to go through something like that.

And this is stupid, but...I had a nightmare two nights ago and then this chapter was updated xD Kind of a little weird coincidence (but not really). So yeah.

I love how Bill is comforting Tom. So sweet x]



Author's Response: Wow 0.0 I just wanted Tom to go to sleep, the nightmare happened on its own XD

Reviewer: Turner Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 04:48 pm Title: Keep Holding On

Well..i love bonus chapters :)
I hopee Georg's mum comes back.
thanks for updating.
xx

Author's Response: In all likelihood...she probably won't XD Sorry!

Reviewer: HarpAngel999 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 04:24 pm Title: Keep Holding On

love it~~~~~~~~~~ i'm dieing for the next chapter

Author's Response: So is Tom >.> Or not lol :)

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 02:51 pm Title: Keep Holding On

That was an odd chapter, but good.
I really like this story.

Author's Response: Thanks ^_^

Reviewer: toriboo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 11:51 am Title: Keep Holding On

Oh, mah gawd.
Ok, ok, where do I start, man?!
Georg saw Tom?! What? What?! So, does that mean -mmmm- *bites nails*

And what's up with Tom sleeping and his nightmare? Ghosts don't sleep. *shakes head*

*sigh* my reviews are always like question but your chapters always leave me with a million of them. Hmph. I blame you. xD

But, no, this chapter was awesome and I'm SO anxious for the next one ^_^

Author's Response: LOL Yes and Yes, both of those things happened! ^_^ and to answer your questions...EXACTLY. ;)

Reviewer: billa_lewis Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 11:40 am Title: Keep Holding On

awesome chapter. but why is tom able to break these "rules"? why can tom sleep now, but couldn't before?

Author's Response: You'll see in a few chapters, I promise ^_^

Reviewer: Maddie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 11:37 am Title: Prologue

You're welcome ^^,

Author's Response: ^_^

Reviewer: Maddie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 11:29 am Title: Prologue

Oh, now I understand ^^

Author's Response: Thanks for pointing it out to me! ^_^

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