Date: 11/01/09 02:58 pm Title: Cry Little Sister
i reallyyy want tom to magically become older lmaooooo hahaaaa
Author's Response: We'll see :D
Date: 11/01/09 01:09 pm Title: Cry Little Sister
Poor Tom
Author's Response: Poor Tom...Poor Bill. I think both of them got the shaft in this fic XD
Date: 11/01/09 12:17 pm Title: Cry Little Sister
:D You're writing TaCE for NaNoWriMo?! :DDDDDDD
I've always wanted to do that but I can never come up with an original fic xD Then again I suppose I could rename Bill and Tom and just change some stuff around BUT I totally even forgot that it was coming up xD
ANYWAY, I liked the chapter. I love how Bill keeps getting called away and I can feel the distance of Bill. I like how you keep his personality the same instead of melting him into some emotional puddle. I can never do that >.> But yeah. So. Blah.
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Author's Response: You're going to have to get online and explain this emotional puddle concept to me XD I be dumb and lacking 500 or so words...and I have 5.5 hours left in the day XDXDXD Yeah... >.>
Posting the fic on Lj as I go, and the prologue's already up...PLUS I'm changing the title (again). It's currently called 'Escape From Magic' XD
Date: 11/01/09 12:08 pm Title: Cry Little Sister
At least Tom is beginning to see the main difference between himself and Bill. While Tom will be forever stuck in his 14-year-old body, Bill will continue to grow and mature. Bill is already an adult, so there are things that Tom could never hope to understand. It's sweet that he's making something of an effort, though.
Also, I think it may be possible that Tom doesn't love Bill like that anymore, but since that's the way it was when he died, maybe he's a bit stuck on it. Maybe it's the only way he can remember to be when it comes to Bill.
Good luck on writing your other stuff. Writing is a joy, and you do it well, so I have faith in you and know you'll have no problems whatsoever.
Author's Response: Yeah...forever >.>
Honestly, the thought never crossed my mind that Tom might not love Bill like that anymore. I figured if Bill's love lasted 10 years, Tom's could too...but then, the story isn't yet finished, so I don't know yet XD Thanks for the suggestion, though!
If I have no problems whatsoever...why can't I come up with 400 more words?! *freakout*
Date: 10/27/09 02:11 am Title: My Obsession
I love it! This is such a good story! I love your writing style. I read through a cat's eyes, and now this one, and I have to say I like reading this more than cat's eyes. Now it's fluid to read, you know? Great job!
Author's Response: Well, TaCE was actually my 2nd TH story EVER, so I would hope that this one is a bit better--it means I developed as a writer :) Thank you so much for reviewing!
Date: 10/26/09 11:25 am Title: My Obsession
it's gotta be hard having it in the back of your mind that he could be gone in a few days....tomi's right, he does need to forgive...his mother is sorry...i hope bill realizes it before it's too late...
Author's Response: I think it'll turn out alright in the end...maybe... >.> Thanks for the review!rn
Date: 10/26/09 02:47 am Title: My Obsession
This is a very interesting story. I'm curious where you're going to go with it. Thanks for poking me to read it. :)
Author's Response: OMG You read my story! *happy dance*
Other than that, I suppose I should go fangirl you some more and continue writing, huh? XD
Date: 10/25/09 06:21 pm Title: My Obsession
Ooh, Simone heard Tom! Thanks for the speedy update!! =)
Author's Response: No problem! *goes to write next chapter* ^_^
Date: 10/25/09 06:13 pm Title: My Obsession
That was a really sad chapter. :[
I liked it, but it was really sad. I get why Bill can't forgive his mom, but it must be so hard for her.
And the guitar pick part was so beautiful.
Oh and what's up with their mom being able to hear Tom?! Gah! Updates soon I hope! :]
Author's Response: I think it's hard for everyone, especially since her one little overreaction caused the death of her ex-husband and son. I wish Bill could forgive her, but...well, we'll just see, won't we?
Date: 10/25/09 06:59 am Title: Stay With You
This was a really excellent chapter. I could see the situation and the characters perfectly. Wonderfully done. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really try to work on my description and imagery, since that's what I find my stories tend to lack the most XD
Date: 10/24/09 09:26 pm Title: My Obsession
True, adults are supposed to firgive, but I think death holds a different place in that category... Causing a death, even inadvertantly, is a huge thing. People may firgive, but they normally don't forget, and sometimes that can be worse.
Author's Response: That is probably the most mature answer I've heard yet. I really wanted to make the point that Tom is forgiving his mom solely because he thinks adults forgive each other (without exception), and he's trying to grow up for Bill.
Wish I could favorite reviews, though. This would be one of them XD
Date: 10/24/09 07:59 pm Title: My Obsession
Aw ;-;
I'm really sad right now and this chapter made me even more sad. The guitar pick part was really powerful :/
Author's Response: Aww....I'm so sorry! If you get on AIM I'll make you less sad? *huggles*
Date: 10/24/09 07:09 pm Title: My Obsession
Why must you TEASE me so?! lol
Omg! Why can people see Tom? Why could Simone hear him? This is driving me mad!
This chapter was awesome as always and has left me with a million question.....ok like two question but still xD
(this whole chapter was in italics btw ^_^)
Author's Response: I tease you because it's fun...and because someone told me to develop plot (whatever THAT is...) That's for me to know and you to keep guessing until I reveal it >:D
Thanks about the italics thing, I think I fixed it XD
Date: 10/23/09 08:00 am Title: Say Goodbye
yay!! i'm hoping that since what needed to be resolved between them was them getting to grow up and be together after all that tom will just become real. so georg seeing him more clearly is good. keep up the great work, i cant wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! ^_^ I can't give anything away yet, since nothing is set in stone...or typed on my computer XD
Date: 10/23/09 07:54 am Title: Keep Holding On
uhoh, i like that georg can maybr see tom now, thats a good sign. but i dont want bill to go instead! that dream better have been just a dream, off i go to read the next one, yay!
Author's Response: Don't worry, it's just a dream, unless I decide to add a serious twist or something XD
Date: 10/22/09 06:34 pm Title: Say Goodbye
Aw, that's so sweet x]
Haha, I literally LOL'd at the end part with the 'smacking his ass' thing. That was funny. Especially since Georg has no clue about their relationship. Too funny.
I loved the flashback. I'm such a sick pervert xD
Author's Response: If you're a sick pervert for reading it, what am I for writing it?! XD
And thanks XD I'd give a better response, but on the bus to Cantabria right now XD
Date: 10/21/09 01:17 am Title: Say Goodbye
haha i was expecting more smut XD damn lol poor georg :(
Author's Response: Sorry XD Trust me, the smut that comes later will (hopefully) more than make up for it :)
Date: 10/20/09 11:45 pm Title: Say Goodbye
it's interesting that georg can see an outline of tom...is he becoming real again? guess i'll have to wait for an update...
Author's Response: Yep! Next Sunday! ^_^
Date: 10/20/09 11:32 pm Title: Keep Holding On
hmmm...what's happening to tom?now he's sleeping and it's bill instead of him...hmmm...
Author's Response: I seriously saw 'inside' instead of..well, instead XD I laughed for five minutes straight XD
Date: 10/20/09 12:19 am Title: Say Goodbye
I kinda figured that Mutti left because Georg finally was able to say goodbye. Closure and all that. And on that thought, Tom might leave Bill one day, but probably no anytime soon, because he's held on for 10 years. I'm not sure if that made much sense, I'm kinda tired, but you get me.
Author's Response: Yeah, it's like that...but somehow, I doubt Tom and Bill will be able to say goodbye for a LOOONNNGGG time, if ever XD