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Reviewer: rednblack Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/09 07:48 pm Title: Time Of Dying

how do you know all these medical terms? I'm impressed I have no idea of that stuff :P

Author's Response: I thank Parallelheartz. SHE knows and she told me XD Plus they showed how to do it in the movie Flatliners, which is what inspired this fic XD

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/09 07:41 pm Title: Hot N Cold

I think I'm as confused as Bill...

Author's Response: To clarify: Tom's becoming real, the longer he stays with Bill XD

Reviewer: rednblack Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/09 04:11 pm Title: On My Own

I'm crying right now. this is so sad... I'll soon read the other chapters

Author's Response: Thanks :) It'll get better, I promise. Just...not soon >.>

Reviewer: SchwarzEstrella Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/09 02:20 pm Title: Hot N Cold

*feels special as she helped with this*

I sowwies about the Het... :D

Love this chapter as you well know.

Author's Response: *grrrr* :P I will SOMEHOW pay you back for that...somehow...

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/09 01:41 pm Title: Hot N Cold

Aw ;-;

This is so sad and so sweet. I love it. Poor Tomi ;-; Bill needs to learn how to accept the fact that he and Tom love each other :/

prettymuchstatingeverythingthatyoujustwrote



Author's Response: LOL yep! Give it a few chapters XDrn

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/09 01:36 pm Title: I Will Survive

*gasp*

He can touch Andi? Wow, that's a shock. I didn't expect that one :] It actually kind of sent chills up my spine, to be honest xD

Sorry I haven't been commenting, things have been hectic :P Lame excuse, but yeah. Eviction does that to you. Especially if you can't always get on the laptop of the woman you're living with :P



Author's Response: LOL I didn't twice say 'Where's Savannah?'

Once was enough XD

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/09 10:54 am Title: Hot N Cold

"He was tired of fighting, tired of feeling like he was caught in an unending river, the water beating against him as he tried not to get swept away in the current that was his twin."

That was a beautiful line. I think Bill and Tom need to go to the therapist. How can a love that can bring someone back from the dead be wrong? I think she is going to surprise tom, because she just wants whats best for bill, which in this case is tom. keep up the great work! thanks for the update!!

Author's Response: Thankies! And about Turner...well, we'll see what she thinks next chapter LOL. I think she might surprise Bill more than Tom, but I have no clue yet.

Reviewer: BeautiFurImmer Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/09 08:02 am Title: Hot N Cold

Exiting :D
is Tom gonna pick a fight with the therapist oO that would be awesome xD

Author's Response: Hmmm...that WOULD be awesome >.> She can even see him now! ^_^

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/09 11:21 pm Title: I Will Survive

I concur, what the blazes was going ON?!.:D.

Author's Response: Um, well, see... >.> Tommightbeabletotouchthingsforashorttimenow. yeah.

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/09 10:22 pm Title: I Will Survive

oh yeah!! hahah :D i'm totally rooting for tom XD

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/09 10:02 pm Title: My Obsession

i feel sorry for the mother -.-

Author's Response: Yeah, well...Everything will (might) resolve itself in the end? XD

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/09 12:14 am Title: I Will Survive

Alright People can now kinda see Tom, and he just socked Andreas in the face, so I'm thinking maybe is he becoming, like, real again? Not like real, like he was fake before, but real as in alive? Or something. I admit, it's not making much sense in my head at the moment, but that punch really knocked me for a loop. How could Tom punch Andreas unless he WERE becoming solid (or whatever you call it)?

Author's Response: Again: EXACTLY. Answers next chapter, I promise XD

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/09 07:26 pm Title: I Will Survive

wow! exciting update! can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Me neither XD I've been plotting ALL DAY. Now it's time to type!

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/09 05:58 pm Title: I Will Survive

Wait, couldn't Tom always touch Bills things?

Author's Response: Well, things that belonged to Tom at one point or another, AND Bill. If you remember, he has a habit of putting his hands right through Bill's clothes. PLUS Andi doesn't exactly belong to Bill or Tom XD

Reviewer: KTwinsLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/09 03:55 am Title: I Will Survive

Yay! for the update! :D
Now, what is going on?!? Tom can touch things??
That's kinda cool that he punched Andi for being such a jerk though. XD
I can't wait to see what comes next!! :D

Author's Response: Me neither! Oh wait...I should know this, shouldn't I? D:

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 07:14 pm Title: I Will Survive

Oh shit! I wanna know how he could hit Andi, too! O.O

Author's Response: Next chapter XD

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 01:09 pm Title: I Will Survive

Oh. My. Gosh. Not letting him go and remembering him, but instead bringing him back to life! No!

Author's Response: ...Why not 'yes'?! D:

Reviewer: Aneksi Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 12:06 pm Title: I Will Survive

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhh!!! new chapter is fab! i loved it and SO many quirky ideas in it! YAY for new updates! :D

x



Author's Response: ILY for this review XD

Reviewer: KTwinsLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/09 04:44 am Title: Cry Little Sister

Aww! I loved this chapter. x]
It was cute how Tom's the one who freaked out over all the candy. XD
I'm sad that you might not update. :[
Hopefully you can though.
Great chapter anyway. :]

Author's Response: Well, I figure Bill's all 'Grown-Up' now...*rolls eyes*

It's looking good so far, but then, it's only the second day, too XD

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/09 04:09 am Title: Cry Little Sister

I just got into this fic and i love it! It's such a difficult situation. ou just know it's set up for failure or something. I've read a couple of these in other fandoms and the author was never able to finish them, really and it just left me feeling depressed all the time. I'm really excited to read one that will be finished.

Author's Response: I WILL finish this, I promise. Everything is totally planned out ^_^

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