Date: 07/22/13 10:41 am Title: On the broken hearted
I'm reviewing because I love your summary, that you addressed us as hardcore twincesters! I love you for that! Hardcore Het yuck!
Date: 05/04/10 12:42 am Title: On the broken hearted
Loved this! Very intensely written, it was easy to get wrapped up in the emotions. There is something so heartbreaking about reading a story written like this, starting with the knowledge that there IS no real happy ending; it makes the whole rest of the fic that much more painful. But it says a lot that I couldn't stop reading, even knowing that it would only hurt more ;) I think I caught on right from the beginning which twin we were dealing with, but I could see that the point was to be ambiguous and I think it added a really interesting element to the story. I really like that it may trick some people, though - I love things that just might make people question the way they always see the guys, and might make them think outside of a narrow box they are used to.
I also must say that there isn't nearly enough really hot and well-written het in this fandom, and this was quite guhhhhhhhhhhhhh UNF-worthy in that respect, THANK YOU *____* :D
Date: 08/08/09 05:27 am Title: On the broken hearted
Dai, this was incredibly intense! Your style is so heavy and it just steals the air and leaves me breathless.
I felt so much for Bill in this. I kinda didn't want to because he seemed like such an ass, but it was so obvious that he was hurting. I didn't expect that Tom was getting married. That part came out of the blue for me, but I can sure see why Bill was as devastated as he was.
This was so wonderfully written, and I'm very glad I got to read it. :D
Date: 08/05/09 03:14 pm Title: On the broken hearted
umm wow i cant think of anything else to say that was just...
Date: 08/05/09 12:17 pm Title: On the broken hearted
Super weel written
Your writing is surprising and make you stick like glue to the text
But I gotta admit it didn't get quite all of it
Tom has multiple girlfriends,Bill is hurt and then Tom gets married to one of his nightstands and Bill suffers.
Am I right ?
Date: 08/05/09 08:29 am Title: On the broken hearted
Well, that caught me out. I expected the twins to be the other way around... o_O Awesome job :)
Author's Response: Thank you!rn
rnAnd that was my intent. So, I'm glad it worked!