Date: 02/18/10 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
Wow! I can't even begin to say whats on my mind that story was amazing a totally awesome. I was so confused in the end but I got it and finally realized that it was Bill. Awesome job on the story.
Author's Response: *flutterclaps* I'm so happy that you think all of that about it, and yea, I wanted it to be a burst of confusion, cause hell, it's NOT what you expect xD
Date: 02/18/10 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
Well, didn't see the Bushido thing coming AT ALL! xD I had a feeling it was Bill, but I thought it was his past life and he honestly didn't remember that. Imagine my surprise! I'm really sad to see this go, but I can't wait for your new crime fic coming!
Author's Response: Lol, I had clues, I SWEAR I DID. xD But I'm glad you thought it was Bill somewhat xD and nahhhhhhh i had fun making you guys try to figure things out ESPECIALLY since he had slip-ups here and there when he would forget his mask.x D But awww I'm sad too xD And the crime fic is posted already ^_^
Date: 02/18/10 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
OH GOD!!! ;____;
FUCK, that was like a good banging and it's gonna be so sore but yet so good. I will miss this story so fucking MUCH!
BILL, JESUS, YOU ARE TOO MUCH OF A PSYCHO FOR ME TO WANT YOU, but I guess I better be careful cause Tomi is a very jealous pet and I don't want angry!Bill at me cause I upset Tom. -.-
BB, god, I couldn't be any more proud of you for writing this mindfuck of a story! I loved it. I loved it all and I feel so bad for the G's at the end there and who knows if Bill will keep his word, but kinda have to trust he will, yanno?
GOODBYE, LUNACY! *CUDDLES* It was a real joyride into my mind and I loved every single moment of it.
Author's Response: LOLOL your metaphors xD
And don't miss it too much! you still have Profile (and my 4059230 other fics xD) And don't upset Bill to much, Tom might have to shank you xD and Bill will, Bill doesn't hate the G's. don't wanna kill them OR their daughters
Date: 02/18/10 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
I really gasped when I saw this was up. First I was happy; I wanted to know the ending so bad. Then I panicked; because yep, it is the ending. I'm extremely annoyed with myself for not having started the reading earlier - far earlier! - and I wish I had followed it little by little. But it went this way - woah, I'm still happy I've read it nevertheless. This kind of story is not my favourite one actually, so I can't tell exactly why this story had me hooked so bad. Well, yes, maybe I can; I think it was because of the presence of Slash and Bill and Tom - in short, it was because the genre was mixed with the fiction elements. GREAT IDEA, seriously, if you want to keep my eyes glued to the screen.
I'm actually breathless at the moment. Bill IS perfect in this, no one will convince me he wasn't. Well, I don't know Bill Kaulitz personally, but this character that you've made up just fitted him completely, so good that it couldn't have been better. To me it was a surprise to find out that Criminal!Bill is someone I would fall in love with. I'd never thought I could like this kind of character that much, so, I guess, THANK YOU for helping me find out. :)
(This is pretty much the reason why, after I'm done reviewing, I'm going straight to read the one you mentioned in the Chapter End Notes).
I'm still thrilled, I doubt I could focus on anything else at the moment (and um, yeah, I should study). I've already told you, but I tell you again because I haven't changed my mind; it could be the plot of a movie, a very dark, intriguing, movie. A movie that I'd love.
Seriously. This story is so dark, so dark and sexy at the same time, Tom and Bill ARE dark and sexy at the same time. How did you come up with this? It's so beautiful, really...
Another element that I liked was psychology, I've always been interested in it. Not that I study it, but you've put many interesting considerations in here. Bill being a psychologist, too... wow, seriously. One of the best Bills I've ever read about, REALLY. If I had to associate a colour to him, it would definitely be black.
Bill is nasty and seductive. I mean, he's nasty AND seductive. He's not seductive because he's nasty, I know it may not make sense, but there's a difference there. These two adjectives can be referred to Bill in this, but still they're indipendent from one another. I like the way you managed to do it. Still, if that makes sense, I'm not good at explaining myself, but I had to try at least, seriously, I'm just so amazed by this story right now.
Tom is frightening, I'm not changing my mind; the relationship he has with Bill makes him sexy too. Well, truth be told, less sexy than Bill, because Bill is the fine, dangerous mind behind it all. I totally liked the way you made Tom sound like the pet, Bill's toy, so convincingly.
I liked it especially because in the beginning, Tom seems to be the most dangerous one, the murderous one, then Bill becomes that. They... swapped, in a sense. I actually don't know what else to say about this. I'm so speechless, like last time.
This story seriously got to me. In a way that no other story ever did, this is why I'm feeling so weird right now. Well, I stop this because it's night and so dark all around me, it's getting so creepy...
Well done, seriously (how many times have I said 'seriously'?!?). It's going to my fav. :)
You're in hospital? :O I hope you get better soon!! D:
xx
Author's Response: long review is long. xD but I love it that way, cause you point out distinct parts about each chapter, and that makes me feel appreciated xD.
I'm really happy you liked it, I was DEAD SERIOUS about perfecting this and angsted over the story and the final chapter SO MUCH it's obnoxious xD.
I love your descriptions of my characters, and your reasons for liking them. I agree with you on Bill (about everything) especially how he's sexier than Tom. I think it's because he's a literal psychopath, it's ingrained in him, and he's seriously INSANE, whereas Tom is more a evil science project. xD
And I think that for Bill to be so controlling over Tom, it's not just a pain-filled relationship. A lot of it, is that he's insane (totally bonkers and still able to love Tom), and there is a fear of his insanity in Tom's case, but also a love for this creature that is so completely bonkers that they'd go insane without them. *nods*
Date: 02/18/10 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
:O Well, that explains everything!! I was so lost the entire time, and now that the puzzle has been pieced together, it all makes sense!
Thanks for the great story.
Hope you feel better BTW.
Author's Response: Lol, I'm glad you feel so. I was worried when writing this, cause I wanted to make sure that I answered all of the unanswered questions from before. xD Thanks for reading love
Date: 02/18/10 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
hospitals suck! D: What happened?
And I'm gonna go read Profile after I scare myself silly with Resident Evil 3 (in honor of me finally figuring out what to do with Psychosis lol)
Author's Response: bah i know, and i've got a. swine flu b. my knee is REALLY SCREWED UP and b. a nerve conditioned that they STILL haven't diagnosed. bah
and okies LOL, it's not as creepy as this, but I think Profile is pretty decent xD
Date: 02/18/10 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
Ohh, I thought he really had amnesia and Tom was there to 'remind' him ^^ And I KNEW he wasn't dead! >:D
Best typo ever: 'smut Bill Kaulitz'. xDD It's when Bushido looks up at him, btw.
Author's Response: lol, am glad you liked it xD and everyone thought that. and thanks hun, i'm in the hospital, and was rushing to get this chaptered finished before they carted in dinner and told me to "relax' aka not to write so much xD
Date: 02/15/10 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
WTF!! So, Tom has a god and that god has a god too??? D: Puppet mastery at it's best.FTW!!!
Only one more chapter left?? oh nein.
Make it a long one please????
Author's Response: lolol, keep reading love. xD and I made it....longer xD it's like 3300 words >.> xD
Date: 02/14/10 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
write more soon!
Author's Response: Lol, I have. there's more up now ^_^
Date: 02/14/10 07:45 am Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
Gaaah, I am so confused, and yet so incredibly intrigued. I have to know what happens next! You have a wonderful way of writing the horror so palpably, it's like every word is flowing off the screen to drag me into the story, into the debauchery and bloodied mess they make. Ffff I'm going to die waiting for the last chapter. ;__;
Author's Response: lol, I hope that's a good thing! xD but I'm SO happy that you liked it, this fic was difficult for me cause I always feel like it's too...actioney, but as long as you guys love it, I'm so happy to post xD And the next chapter is up now!
Date: 02/13/10 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 3: Smile For Me Beautiful...
OMG ! This is so intense ! I'm definitely scared of Tom but very, very intrigued at the same time ! Can't wait to know what this God talk was all about !
Author's Response: Lol, I'm glad you think so, and I'm glad it's got you hooked ^_^
Date: 02/13/10 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 2: You Are Down On Your Knees, Begging Me For More...
o_O Tom's dreads ! NEIN! lol
Poor Bill, horrible past... it was nice to learn more about him tho! I like his character so far! Bill as a genious? sexy ! xD
Author's Response: Lol, he looks hot without them. xD And yea, our Bill is a precocious little bugger xD
Date: 02/13/10 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
OMGYOUBETTERWRITETHATLASTCHAPTERFASTBAH!
ahem.
Author's Response: LOL. it's written and posted now? xD
Date: 02/13/10 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
This seems sooo interesting ! I really like the first chap, the idea is good and I like your writing style as always :) Going to read the rest now and I will leave NICE reviews... ;)
Author's Response: i'm glad you think so ^_^ it's a bit strange at first, but I adore it in general. and THANK YOU bb for the nice reviews xD
Date: 02/13/10 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 5: Don't Touch My Things...
charming. This is creeping me out. where does this come from? Are you ok?
Author's Response: *stares* why are you reading it if you're going to be insulting in your reviews? like really? this comes from extensive knowledge of psychology, sociology and criminology. Aka, I've got a really high IQ and spent most of my youth learning about things that interested me: psychology, criminology, sociology, amongst other things.
and yea, I'm okay, I've just got a pretty decent understanding of how people's minds work.
Date: 02/13/10 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 4: Are You Afraid of The Dark?
Tom is totally unaffected by drugs. How?
Author's Response: by that specific drug. and if i told you that'd take away from the final chapter, not wouldn't it.
Date: 02/13/10 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 3: Smile For Me Beautiful...
yeah, you creeped me out too. I hope I don't have to read too many more details like that.
Author's Response: *shrugs* there are warnings against that. not that there are many other scenes like that, least that I remember.
Date: 02/13/10 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 2: You Are Down On Your Knees, Begging Me For More...
Creeped out by Tom. fascinated by Bill.
Author's Response: *shrugs* to each his own. many of my readers love him.
Date: 02/13/10 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
GOOD GOD I still have NO idea what's going on but I am SOOO Fucking addicted. I just KNOW the next chapter is going to be mind blowingly FANTASTIC! Bet it's a real trip too. You're AMAZING And I seriously can't wait for this mystery to be solved.
Author's Response: LOL, well mystery has been solved! the last chapter is up, so I hope you enjoy it ^_^ xD and I don't think it's THAT amazing. it just truly show you how crazy people can be xDit's more like mindfuck xD
Date: 02/13/10 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
Is Bill schizo and is actually Tom's God? D: I have been wondering for some chapter now, because the God seems to know everything, and Tom knows about Bill's relationships and he tells Bill a lot..and stuff... Pluss the Bill/Tom pairing. I don't really know what else it could be D:
Author's Response: read read read. the last chapter is up, and everything will make sense then xD