Date: 03/02/10 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
omg O_o this story blew my brain! it's exceptional!! i really love it...
sorry that i didn't comment to the other chapters but i read it in about 65 minutes?! kinda... yeah...
[i'm a lazy person... don't kill me T_T]
anyway but my mind was like: ohh so tom is the insane one and bill the doctor... *thumb up* then so many crimes i remained like '....' then it started with the conversation and the things were cooooool....then tom's theory with the obsession and his obsession about his 'God' i was like if he's obsessed with that man, thing whatever why he looks like having an obsession for bill?!?! then tom's reveling the truth?! O...O
i know i may be crazy but i really like those parts... especially at the 'murder' chapters.
so 'the death' really catched me! wonderful!
and then at la latest parts Bill being the God... WOw i really remained like stone! i was so Happy! and then their romance and everything and their escape and plans... ^^ i admired their spirit of doing crazy /and dangerous in the same time/ thing !!
thank you so so so much for this!
it was really good! i love it! and sorry again that i didn't comment.
Date: 03/01/10 11:29 am Title: Chapter 5: Don't Touch My Things...
This story is so amazing. Seriously. Never have i read a story like this on this site. It's too bad. This story (so far) reminds me so much of criminal minds, which is amazing cuz i love that show. But yea it made me laugh and become kinda confused when i realized that i love crazy Tom so much o.O lol
Thanks for this :D
Date: 02/25/10 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
Hahaha *flutter clap* High off of reading this and watching women's long figure skating and OMG!!! They're both amazing. Hehehe, love the ending, just love love love love. I don't know what else I can really say about it. I expected parts, but not the whole thing. Very well put together. You had to think this so threw, amazingly so, to be able to put something together like this.
Love it, all the twistedness (that I caught up on today, eep ^^") Oh how sick and amazing. Hehehe, I liked the little thing with the US, it made me cackle a little. :D
Um, yeah. I don't know what else to say, but wow. Wow for it all, I love this. n_n Maybe later go back and just breeze over for little grammar stuff? Hehe, there was some as I was reading, but I love the ending. Lol!! Amazing and beautiful.
Date: 02/25/10 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
Death turns in Tom's arms, a finger raking down his cheek so sharply blood trickles from the wound, only to meet with Death's tongue as he laps at it hungrily.
Absolutely love that line. Just, love, love love. I'm only kind of half sure why I do, the rest, it's just, I love it :D
Date: 02/25/10 04:30 am Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
Why do I keep thinking that Tom's god is Bill?... Hmm...
Date: 02/25/10 03:27 am Title: Chapter 3: Smile For Me Beautiful...
Oh. My. God... That... was horrifyingly amazing!!! Super creepy, but breathtaking description. Wow. Great job!
Date: 02/23/10 03:15 am Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
Whoah! DDuuudeee! That's sooo freaky and unexpected man. Great job. Wow...
Date: 02/23/10 01:57 am Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
i fucking loved this~
Date: 02/21/10 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
yup. my point exactly. I would love to learn more about how they see the world, how they act, what they think about themselves. Wow, we really are going on long talks over here *haha*
Author's Response: lol, well then rather than kill my review stuff, why don't I hop online and you can IM me. you have yahoo right? my email/sn is liebe_does_exist@yahoo.com
Date: 02/21/10 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
Oh wow , i have goosebumps still this story it was just fantasic chilling and thirlling all at the same time. and now i wanna read it again. =D
Author's Response: Lol YAY for goosebumps then! xD
Date: 02/21/10 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
yeah, i did find a bit weird that Tom knew all that stuff about Bill in the first place ._. And you know, if i could, i would totally work in an insane asylum. it's got to be so fascinating
Author's Response: Lolol, mhmmmmmm, well Tom was there for a reason, he said it plain and clear xD And I would too, I think that people in asylums are so fascinating and intriguing, and see things so different than we do.
Date: 02/21/10 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
true... but damn o.o I didn't srsly think that Bill was faking all of that! I mean...wow... It was absolutely awesome
Author's Response: lol, I get you xD I wanted a OMG ending, and it just came together that way. at first I was thinking of writing him losing his memory for real & Tom bringing it back, and when rereading the first few chapters, I realized that Bill and Tom knew who each other were, and were using the sessions to 'talk' to each other, through body language, looks etc etc.
Date: 02/21/10 11:33 am Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
This is just twisted. I have not read a twisted fic like this one yet. I have only seen movies that where close to the warped like plot you have cerated. I am favoring this. I alway love a dominate Bill as well. I think it is more his nature to be dominate. I mean he has everyone else caving to his needs. Even Tom listens to Bill. If Bill is not happy no one is. That simple. I thought I knew a few times what was going on. Then the last chapter really set me strait. The murder scenes were something else as well. I always pegged it on Tom when it came to the murders, which is true in some way. Then I began to worry about Tom and how he was the tool, and not knowing whom the hand that tool laid in. Thanking you for writing such a suspenseful and thrilling story.
Author's Response: LOL, I like twisted! xD And the TH fandom is NOT the place to look for twisted fics xD That's why I like the Supernatural and Buffy/Angel fandoms. their fics are twisted galore xD
I'm glad you liked the plot though, and yea, I do think Bill is dominating, which is smt I oddly like in feminine men xD
And yea, I wanted the ending to be OMG IN YOUR FACE, something twisted and surprising xD
And I loved writing the murders. It was...interesting to have to put myself in Bill's shoes and try to think of what someone like him would do, and actually write it out.
Date: 02/21/10 08:37 am Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
oh my GOD! O.O
that ending absolutely blew my head off! LITERALLY! x.x"
srsly, when it was with the teddy shit, i thought it would have been his father but...HELL o.o *is speechless*
Author's Response: LOLOL, I'm glad you liked it xD but nahhhhhhhh Tom's parents are dead, it HAD to be someone else xD
Date: 02/21/10 06:19 am Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
wow. i must say you threw me off! you had some typos... but then i overlooked it since the story kept me hanging. it was superb and brilliant! i never really expected that! i actually thought tom has a personality disorder!
Author's Response: lol, I'm glad I did then xD And Forgive the typos. Sometimes this goes to beta, sometimes it doesn't. Most of the time I'm so eager to give you guys what I've finally got finished that I post & go back later and fix things here and there. Once my regular beta gets internet access back, she's gonna sift through all of my chapters for all of my fics and fix the stuff I can't find. xD But I'm happy that you liked it, and nahhh, he's just a sociopath xD
Date: 02/21/10 01:41 am Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
You had me the entire time. OMFG. I'm a little afraid of you though. On the other hand this was brilliant. And I love the show Criminal Minds. I often wish is was smart enough to have a job like that but that's way to left brained for me. I've got no logic what so ever.
Author's Response: LOL, really? I'm glad I did xD And don't be LOL, I enjoy studying people, enjoy how people's minds work, so for most of my stories (not just Lunacy) I like to capture the little...insanities a character has. In the case of this story, it was a WHOLE lot, and I had friends in the field of psychology/psychiatry as well as an intensive knowledge of criminology and psychology/sociology to help me write this xD
And omg CM is AMAZING. I STILL wanna be a FBI agent and work with the BAU, someday xD
Date: 02/20/10 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
oh myyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!! that was spicataculicious!!!!!!!! toyal shockerrr! *hug*
Author's Response: LOLOL, I'm glad you liked it so much ^_^ *hugs*
Date: 02/20/10 08:57 am Title: Chapter 3: Smile For Me Beautiful...
Oh god, bringing in a higher power for his actions just made this the up most creepy. It turns the stomach with fear and dread. The pain thing, that is very true. If you do have many other pains assaulting your mind you can not escape any of them.
Author's Response: LOL, yepppppppp. I love higher powers xDDDD
Date: 02/19/10 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
Oh My God! I knew it the whole time. i knew it was Bill. I had it in mind the whole time:D Nyahaha.
Thanks for the story. I loved it. It was great:D
Author's Response: Lololol, I'm glad you figured it out ^_^
Date: 02/19/10 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
Yay! I knew it! I f*cking knew it!
But you're right, I wasn't aware of why or how, I had other theories. And at some point I started to doubt myself too, but the previous chapter finally convinced me.
This was really fun and disturbing to read. I like the psychological view in this. Very entertaining and interesting. I'm just a bit worried of myself, but this whole balance of dominance was very hot. It has been all the way, the complete submission and devotion.
Great job and good ending, I actually didn't expect it to end like this.
Author's Response: LOLOLOLOL. I'm glad you knew it, even if you didn't know how and why xD. And DUDE everyone doubted it at one point in time. I put small things in there to make it happen like that. Wanted to make the end a surprise xD And I'm glad you like the psychological view of this, as well as submission and devotion, because those were my favorite things to research. Part of it helps that a lot of my friends have gone into that field, as well as that I've got an innate interest in it, so I had fun building up my characters to who they were in the final chapter.