Date: 08/15/09 12:51 am Title: Chapter 2: You Are Down On Your Knees, Begging Me For More...
I really don't know If this makes me wierd but tom as a serial killer sounds incredibly hot in the way you make him act and the way you describe him. You did an incredible job I like this Tom as much as I like amazingly huge a-hole Tom in taken.
Author's Response: it doesn't make you weird love, because i know my friends and I DEFINITELY think Tom is hot like this xD and I'm glad that you love the characterizations of Tom in this and in Taken ^_^
Date: 08/14/09 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 2: You Are Down On Your Knees, Begging Me For More...
The thing Tom says now make soooo much sense to me because I KNOW XD And it's amazing. Can't wait for the next update...or the updates to other stories XD
...And Lily's a bitch. I hope she DOES sit on Saki's cock and Bill sees it, runs distraught to Tom and *censored* XD
Author's Response: hahahahah xD well yay for you knowing xD and i'm trying to update stuff. don't blame the exhaustion, blame the WB xD
and Lily's.....a difficult character xD and she's so gonna die xD
Date: 08/14/09 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 2: You Are Down On Your Knees, Begging Me For More...
OhOh! I can't stop my mind from guessing at what is going on in this story. I won't share my theories because I'm prolly way off, but I am really interested in knowing where this all is leading hun! :)
Author's Response: hahaha. well your'e more than welcome to guess. i'll never tease your or anything. i love eharing my readers' thoughts ^_^ and i'm really glad you're so interesting ^_^
Date: 08/14/09 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 2: You Are Down On Your Knees, Begging Me For More...
OMG I HAVE TO HAVE MORE! HOLY CRAP! This is really really interesting, I wan to get into tom's head more SO SO bad.. you've made such an interesting character here, you have no idea! I love the hell out of this and i hope you get over your WB soon because I really really can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: hahahah you'll have more as soon as i plan the next chappie xD and don't worry, you'll have a chance to get into his head eventually. I'm leading up to that part ^_^ I'm really really happy that you like his character ^_^
Date: 08/14/09 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 2: You Are Down On Your Knees, Begging Me For More...
Loved it!
Author's Response: yay! i'm glad you loved it!
Date: 08/14/09 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 2: You Are Down On Your Knees, Begging Me For More...
i did like it!!!!
Tomi as a socio path is kinda hot and i laughed at the song though my sister didn't find it as funny as i did...
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it ^^ and yay! i'm not the only one that likes crazy Tom xD and i lol'd at the song too, don't worry xD
Date: 08/14/09 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 2: You Are Down On Your Knees, Begging Me For More...
Ok, he's a little less cryptic than the Joker. But still.
*shivers* I love this so far!
Author's Response: hahahah xD he totally is LESS cryptic, but I think it's because of who he's working with. If he wanted to pull of the whole crazy thing 100% he couldn't but i think he definitely tones it down for Bill xD and i'm glad that you love this ^^
Date: 08/14/09 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 2: You Are Down On Your Knees, Begging Me For More...
MUAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAH!
... that was my evil laugh in honour of tomi... i'm sorry, it just had to be done.
anyway, onto to the review
i throuoghly enjoy pyschopath *ahem* sociopath tomi... it's such a lovely character to read... and sometimes write... and what i love about asylum fics is the whole notion of going through the story trying to figure out why the insane person went fucking barking... that's what attract me to them... the enigmas... that is why i wish to be a pyschologist... *gazes off dreamily* *snaps back* anyways, so yeah. this is just... brilliant and i seriously cannot wait for more!
Author's Response: lmfao YAY for evil laughs! xD and I'm glad that you enjoy the story and I can't wait to show you guys why we went mental *nodnod* and i'm sooo happy that you liked this so much ^^
Date: 08/14/09 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
He reminds me of the Joker! Like, CREEPILY reminds me of the Joker. If I made a movie of this, I'd bring Heath Ledger back from the dead, give him Tom's face, and let him loose.
I LIKE IT!!!!!
Author's Response: hahaha does it help tha tthe Joker is my favorite serial killer? one of them anyways xD and HAHAHAHAH i love that xd and don't worry, Tom'll go back and forth btwn his jokerness and his seriousness. it depends on the day and what he wants to tell Bill, i guess.
Date: 08/14/09 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 2: You Are Down On Your Knees, Begging Me For More...
Oh my D:
Crazy Tom certainly does interest me x]
I can't wait to see morreee =]
Author's Response: hahah YAY I'm glad he does and I can't wait to give more ^^
Date: 08/14/09 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 2: You Are Down On Your Knees, Begging Me For More...
Tom is so creepy yet awesome in this fic! Not to mention all of the cryptic clues he's giving...great update!
Author's Response: haha danke danke ^^ i'm glad that you like Tom and his clue-giving-ness xD
Date: 08/14/09 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 2: You Are Down On Your Knees, Begging Me For More...
Gah, I love this chapter. Would love to explore Tom's mind more, however freaky it is.
Author's Response: lol. i'm glad that you like it ^^ and don't worry, Tom will have his POV shown to the work eventually. i'm working it up to that point ^^
Date: 08/08/09 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
Shit......
damn... wow.... that's alot of peeps for only being 23!
Way looking forward to reading more of this!!
Author's Response: hahah awww. i'm glad you liked this ^_^ and yea...it's a lot, but you'll find things out *nodnod*
Date: 08/08/09 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
.... OMG! UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!
Author's Response: hahaha. i shall. i've already started the next chapter ^_^
Date: 08/06/09 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
Damn....Tom sent shivers down my spine in this story, I like it! Keep it up!
Author's Response: hahaha. *pats your spine* sorry? xD but i'm glad that you like it ^^
Date: 08/06/09 05:08 am Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
LOL~ how fun~ :DDD
Author's Response: lol. danke danke ^^
Date: 08/06/09 01:00 am Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
I love it!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: YAY i'm glad that you love it ^^
Date: 08/06/09 12:56 am Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
Hey hun, I loved this beginning, it was written very well. I had a slight issue with the amount of people Tom has killed though... (please don't think this is me being mean, I just want to give some thoughts)... Wouldn't it be hard to kill almost 400 people without a bomb or something? And to only be 23 years old? And why did they only just catch him if it has been that many singular murders, roughly within the last few years, I mean, that could be a person every few days and still take up four years of time right? It just really threw me off, I think toning the number down a little would have helped make the story more credible.
But anyway! I did like it bby, and I'll continue to read :)
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked it, and to answer your slight issue, it is feasible for Tom to have killed nearly 400 people (or more) because a. they weren't always singular murders, b. he's been killing for longer than you'd like to think, and c. he may or may or may not have been working with someone OR under someone's orders. i think that lack of credibility for you, is lack of information for me. In the upcoming chapters, i hope to explain to you guys how it was possible for all of this to happen. and as for him getting caught....what makes you think he didn't let himself get caught? i don't want to actually have to give away the plot, but let's just say that Tom's a lot smarter than he seems, and nothing in this story, from Tom being captured, to Bill being his doctor to the number of people being killed is done without a purpose or a reason that will be explained later, throughout the story.
anyways, thanks for liking it, and i'm glad that you'll still continue to read. ^_^
Date: 08/05/09 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
Tom is lolzy. XD
Bill is a wimp.
I wanna give Tom a hug.
And smack Bill.
I guess I've just been in a Bill-smacking mood lately. XD
Don't try to make me make sense. XD It's not happening.
Author's Response: i lol'd at your review almost as hard as I lol'd about TUTANKHAMUN.....those two things made my night xD ily misa xD
Date: 08/05/09 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
...Okay so I just added this to my favs, but I couldn't remember if I reviewed first, so I'm gonna review now XD
LOVE IT! lol But you probably expected that. I heart Serial-killer Tom ^_^ Did he kill all of those people himself or did he do a 'SAW' rendition and make other people kill each other?
Author's Response: haha YAY for being favortied ^^ and hahahaha fail memory xD
and i didn't expect it, i hoped for it xD and YAY for you loving Tom xD AND...ask me that question on AIM and i'll give you an actual answer xD AND AND AND...get your ass on AIM xD