okay first off...

OMG!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!!

This might sound twisted, but I've always loved sick and twisted stuff like this, loved looking into the minds of killers, so yeah, this is just awesome :D and that there is nice amount of description in here along with dialogue, well I just love it. XD I'm just that kind of sick and twisted person. I flinched at the cock in her mouth though. That was very nasty to me. But then his type (badass killers) always seem to want sexual relief with what they've done...if that makes any sense...

But the God thing was kind of creepy to me...not going to lie there, how Tom was talking to him, I'm trying to figure out who it is, and how they’re play into everything. Hehehe, I loved when he was creeping Bill out though, with saying how beautiful and whatnot. That is fun stuff, messing with minds n_n But hehehe, this only makes me want it more...

Oh, something that is kind of cool (in my opinion) you were saying how they stared at each other, and Bill could see all these things about Tom without saying anything, and just watching and could tell what was going on in Tom's mind with just a blink, and I recently just read Blink (which maybe you already know about...?) which was kind of talking about some of this stuff, first impressions and thin-slicing and all this fun stuff n_n So yeah... it was fun that I could read that, and then apply that to this, and fall all that more in love with this :D Sick and twisted, keep coming XD

Author's Response: first offs, I have heard of the book, (as a HUGE Leonardo DiCaprio fan, I bought the book when I heard that he'd be playing a movie that is an adapted version of the movie) so then it should be read the book xD but it makes me wanna reread it, because tbh, i didn't consciously put that in here. i tend to do what Bill does naturally. I'm always looking for facial expressions and whatnot, because I think they're way more truthful than ANY word that comes out of a person's mouth.

anyways, on to the review part of this response xD don't worry, you're not twisted, i LOVE sick and twisted stuff, well more the sociopathic insanity than the gore, but I was INSANELY happy that everything worked out well in the whole dialogue vs. description, and yea, don't worry the shoving his cock in her mouth thing, i totes puked in my mouth at that...although tbh, i don't think it was sexual. i think to him, it was just another way for him to desecrate and mutilate her AND to cause her pain. because he's ALL about causing her pain. that's why she was alive during it all.

and i'm glad that i could creep you out but still hold that air of mystery when it came to Tom's god. it's....interesting and creepy and you're welcome to laden me when all of your guesses, xD and yea, i LOVED him creeping Bill out like that. I was like BWAHAHAH you could be my next victim xD

oh.my.jesus.fucking.christ
i-am-shocked.

Tom is fucking...god, i don't even know what to call him. Lunatic, maybe but he's even wrose than that o___o'
god, i don't even know what to say .__.'

well, i love this and i want more xD
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Author's Response: well, i have to say that i'm glad you're shocked then.

Tom is insane, but it's not his fault when he's so obsessed xD but I'm glad that this could affect you so much, even if in a creepy way.

i'm glad you loved this and i'll give you more aasap ^^

Yes, I see exactly why you creeped yourself out, lol. Good Lord I think I have the shivers. Your Tom is creepy as hell. :D

Author's Response: hahahah mhm. writing that at 3am was a bad idea xD but i'm happy i could creep you out as well xD

Gosh, this Tom really is creepy! 8O

Author's Response: hahaha. seeeee. i totes creeped myself out writing this at 3am xD

“1, 2 Tomi's coming for you 3, 4 Better lock your door 5, 6 Grab your crucifix 7, 8 Better stay up late 9, 10 Never sleep again!"
o.m.g
fucking creepy but I loved it xD (i'd love to hear tom sing that to me, o.o')

anywaaaays, i'm still loving this. I seriously curious about Tom, i need to know what's on his miiind.

And Anna, i don't know why but i like her xD

oh well, anyay, i need some moar *w*

Author's Response: HAHAHA I'm glad you thought the song was creepy and nah, i agree with you, I'd want Tom so sing that to me too xD he's just THAT hot xD

and son't worry, we're going to break into his inner thought soon. It's gonna be awesome xD

and Anna is...Anna xD I love people with MPD for some reason xD

and the next chapter should be posted today or tomorrow. i have to write it xD

I want Tom to obsess over Bill now. I bet Tom has something to do with Bill's pass. Like they were in love and Bill forgot him because of the car crash, which causes Tom to go all nutzo.

Author's Response: hahahaha that's a pretty interesting plot, I never even thought of using that, but probably because i came into this knowing certain things about their pasts xD and don't worry wha ti have in store for them is way more sinister xD

As strange as this may sound I can honestly see Tom acting this way....freaky...I like it!

Author's Response: hahaha it doesn't sound strange xD I try my hardest to write my characters with SOME similarity to their RL counterparts. but I'm glad that you like it ^_^

Oh boy. You got another great one on your hands, girl. Awesome..I LOVE crazy Tommi.

Author's Response: hahaha awww. danke ^_^ I do try to write great ones xD and i'm glad you love crazy!Tom he's my favorite xD

oooohhhh... I find the intelligent twins hot.. I'm a sucker for nerds..

-giggles- I feel stupid again.. it's soo.. -brain bleeding-

Time for the Smile-y because I cant say the feeling...

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