Date: 08/24/09 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 3: Smile For Me Beautiful...
Fuuuuuck....
and another dang cliffhanger... although if I had my way, people would put the whole fic out at once.... so yeah maybe cliffhangers are good....
anyway! can't wait to read more! And again with his obsession... and now his god.... *imitation of Mr. Burns* intersting, very interesting
Author's Response: hahahah. i'm sorry. if i had the patience to write chapter after chapter, i would, but i don't so you'll get the next chappie after i've updated my last couple of fics xD but i'm glad that you liked this chapter, and yea his obsession with his god -.- he's a creepy little bugger
Date: 08/24/09 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 3: Smile For Me Beautiful...
*chuckles* aww, sweety, it's gonna take A LOT more than that to creep me out...
though, it was very good, i thoroughly enjoyed it... *g* i can't wait for more...
...I love pyscho!Tom... he's ever so fun to read about... and to write too...
...i can't wait for more.
Author's Response: hahahaha. oh trust me love,. i have WAYYY mroe than in my brain, unfortunately for Bill xD and nah, i think that writing that, and imagining that you're the girl at 3am is bad for your health xD *nodnod* or at least my health xD but i'm glad you thought it was veyr good and enjoyed it ^_^
i can't wait to give you more ^_^
Date: 08/24/09 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 3: Smile For Me Beautiful...
it is creepy....
KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: yay for creepy? xD and i shall ^_^
Date: 08/24/09 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 3: Smile For Me Beautiful...
omg. creppy but great!
Author's Response: i'm glad that this could be both creepy and great xD
Date: 08/24/09 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 3: Smile For Me Beautiful...
Wow.... Okey... Now that WAS creepy. I missed the 2nd chapter for some reason, so I had to read two in a row and damn, you are writing some seriously fucked up Tom here. I LOVE it :D. So let's creep ourselves out together, shall we? :)
Nice job, very interesting. I really want to find out more about Tom's obsession, his God. It's fascinating. After these intense chapters you'll have a pretty high standards for the rest of the fic, but I know that you'll do just as good job as you've done already. Nice, nice :)
Author's Response: hahaha. i told you it was creepy! xD and awww well at least you read it now, and yea >.> I can't help it, he was just MEANT to be fucked up in this fic xD but i'm glad that you lvoe it, and yes, we can be creeped out together xD
and we'll find out more. I'm trying to figure out how i'm going to format the next couple of chapters, so we'll see how it goes xD and ahhhh high standards. well, i'll try to do my best and keep it awesome xD
Date: 08/24/09 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 3: Smile For Me Beautiful...
@___@
He's more freaky than Lector, and that's saying something.
I still want more, but he's being more open here. Wonder when Bill's gonna start openly freaking out about this, the more Tom talks, lol.
Author's Response: hahahaha. i think he's sexier than Lector though >.> xD and i'm glad that you like it, and er, you'll get more when Tom decides to be more open. and er, it'll be a while. Bill's determined to not show outright fear in front of Tom.
Date: 08/24/09 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 3: Smile For Me Beautiful...
*shivers* I'm sleeping with the lights on tonight, that's for sure. Tom's talk of his "god" is confusing and beyond creepy - his description of the murder he committed was creepy, but this "god" thing is beyond creepy.
Author's Response: awwww. *hands you my teddy* sorry for creeping you out so much love. and yea. I was writing the murder an my serial-killer-tom muse was like I HAVE A SECRET AND I WANNA TEASE BILL AND THE READERS WITH IT xD so we added it in and yea...his god *shakes head* beyond creepy when you guys finally get to the end of the story lol.
Date: 08/24/09 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
Awwww. I know how you feel. I've babysat this one nearly every day, minus school days(even though I see him then, too), since he was a month old and he's almost three now. :( They grow up so fast. One day he's a baby and the next he's calling me a little shit head. Sigh. The good old days.
Author's Response: awwwwwwww *huggle* sorry love. and yea. the innocent days xD
Date: 08/24/09 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 3: Smile For Me Beautiful...
Ö okay Serial Killer Tom is WAY creepy! I can so understand how you creeped yourself out while writing this last chapter. I would have been too! Hell I was hella creeped out just reading it! Even worse since I was imagining all of what Tom was telling Bill in my head. Very creepy images might I add. Can't wait for a new chapter!
Author's Response: hahaha. i hope that him being creepy is a good thing lol. and yea -.- serial killer is love. gore, not so much xD but i'm glad you liked it event hough it was so creepy xD
Date: 08/24/09 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
Well, I'll bet Tom kills you in your dreams. And awwwwwwwwwww! You have a baby? I love babies! I miss my nephew. I'm at school and don't get to see him much. :(
Author's Response: hahah if I'm me he kills me, if I'm Bill he fucks me. How warped is that? xD and nein, i have two reallyyy young nephews xD but they think i'm their mother since i take care of them mostly, and i don't bother correcting it xD and awww *hug* i'd die if i had to leave these brats again.
Date: 08/24/09 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 3: Smile For Me Beautiful...
humm.
If Bill cant remember a thing from his past, maybe he is tom's
Maybe he just can't remember. humm...
Author's Response: i can't tell secrets for the story in reviews so i can't really let you know if you're right or wrong lol, but my question is, you think that Bill is some's what exactly?
Date: 08/24/09 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 3: Smile For Me Beautiful...
sick and twist i say, sick a twisted...but oddly entertaining. lol i loved it!! :) more please. :)
Author's Response: hahahah i'm glad you liked it despite it being sick and twisted love ^_^
Date: 08/24/09 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 3: Smile For Me Beautiful...
*has goosebumps* that was terrifying to be completly honest with you... it was so well written that i felt like I was watching in like in a movie or in person... very well done, I can't wait for more, this first obsession/god twist is really interesting!
Author's Response: *pats your goosebumps away* i'm sorry it was so terrifying ^_^ but i'm glad that I could write it well enough for you to feel that way about it. and i'm glad that you like the twist ^_^
Date: 08/24/09 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
Did u have nightmares? I would have...
Author's Response: hahah nah. i didn't go to sleep until 6am since the baby woke up, so i actually didn't dream of anything xD although i might tonight xD
Date: 08/24/09 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 3: Smile For Me Beautiful...
READING This creeped me out I got chills. This so creepy.
Author's Response: *pats your shoulder* i know, i know. i got chills writing this xD
Date: 08/24/09 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 3: Smile For Me Beautiful...
gosh he's so creepy ! But so intresting at the same time anyways cool chapter
Author's Response: haha, i know right! he's a creepy little bugger xD but i'm glad that you liked it ^_^
Date: 08/24/09 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 3: Smile For Me Beautiful...
Dear god... His killing description was almost unbearable to read.. but I still read it x]
God damn lol
Author's Response: hahah i'm sorry it was soo creepy? apparently my brain wanted it to be super stellar and creepy, and yea there it was xD don't worry, i scared myself xD
Date: 08/24/09 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 3: Smile For Me Beautiful...
hehe i loved this so much i creeped myself out XD
even talking about murder Tom is still as smexy as ever oh god i think i might be mentally deranged ...
Author's Response: hahaha YAY for being creeped out xD and i don't think there's anyway for him to NOT be smexy xD
Date: 08/24/09 11:55 am Title: Chapter 3: Smile For Me Beautiful...
O.O Wow...that was rather creepy...almost SAW creepy...yet I'm finding myself becoming even more hooked to this story! Can't wait to see the next chapter.
Author's Response: haaha yay for creepy. now that it's actual daylight i'm not AS creeped out xD and yea, I think my mind took some stuff from SAW, even though i think i've only seen the first 2-3 movies lol. but I'm glad that it didn't frighten you away ^_^
Date: 08/24/09 10:51 am Title: Chapter 3: Smile For Me Beautiful...
*creeped out* It was the teeth thing, mostly, that did it for me XD Although the worse part was that she was alive and CONSCIOUS for the whole thing XD
There's a small typo when he's describing the chick where Tom says: "I was Friday." You might want to check that, as funny as it was to read XD
Author's Response: danke liebchen. I fixed it once I saw your review. seee why writing so late is a no-no for me? xD but i'm still glad that I could creep you out too xD and yea......what he did ti her was totes awesome though xD