I really love your story, totally intresting. And Tom as a psychopath is strangely sexy :D

Author's Response: *dances* I like it when people love my stuff xD and I KNOW RIGHT!!! he's so sexy it's not even fair xD

Oh! Oh, my! Well that was.. that was uh.. interesting *fans self with notebook*

Ahem.. so yea.. about that next update? x] lol

Author's Response: lol. hahah YAY I made you hot and bothered xD and the next chappie is almost complete. yay for me wanting to please you guys xD

I love your story.
I start college tomorrow studying psycology and this is a very interesting read. :)

Author's Response: YAY for this being loved!!!! and yay for studying psychology. i'd do it if i wasn't so set in writing/music xD

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Author's Response: lol.....i love reviews like this xD

Is Tom's original obsession Bill? I keep thinking that but then it seems as if he doesn't really care all that much about him... Anyways! Loved the new chapter bby :)

Author's Response: er *makes shifty eyes* xD. tbh, even I'm not 100% sure who Tom's original obsession is. I can't decide things like that this early in the story, because when I actually sit down to write, the story takes on a totally different angle, and I realize it's NOT following my plot line AT ALL xD. but, for now, let's just peg Bill as the REALLY unfortunate doctor that Tom ended up being placed with, because Tom thinks Bill MIGHT just be his most exquisite masterpiece *nodnod* but anyways, i'm glad that you loved the chappie lovie ^^

Oh, we sure did! Damn, hothothot (Ok, is it impropriate so say that?). The happenings on Tom's room were really tense. I like it a lot. Of course, my passion for psycho-Tom makes me not so objective, but I think it worked. I think it was interesting how you suddenly put sexual element there. It was surpricing, but very welcomed element. I can't wait to se where this is going!

Author's Response: hahahahaah I'm GLAD that you liked/loved this chapter hun ^^ there are always worries that I'm not hitting the nail on the head with the horror/creepy stuff lol. but I'm glad you found that to be hothothot and it's totally appropriate to say that ^_^ and yay for TENSE. my first version wasn't as tense of this, but with some reworking I made it fit ^^. and hahahaha i don't think there was a single person who reviewed that isn't somewhat subjective towards psycho-Tom, but I'm happy it worked. ^^ and initially, there WASN'T supposed to be a sexual element, but all of the experts said that Bill's body WOULD have reacted towards Tom, not just because Bill is bisexual, but because the fear and the adrenaline and Tom's proximity, would have caused his body to react. i tried to get across that it was more of a physical reaction towards what Tom was doing, rather than Bill going all psycholovestruck over him xD

hahaha! lovely n_n I was so happy when you updated this :D it's my fix :) damn, I wish I had psychologist friends...all the fun questions :) anyway, lol, I loved the chapter. It did have goodies, but I wish it had been longer, maybe a little more detail, but I like Tom :) Saki, what is wrong with Saki? Why does he keep giving Tom doses? It doesn't seem to be helping, and that boy doesn't need his mind fucked with anymore. And stupid police, seriously? They should be handing it all over to Bill so he could try and fix Tom. (not like I really want him fixed *cough* he's way too much fun this way! XD but anyway...)

But how quickly Tom moved, it makes me wonder if he planned it all, with the lights and everything...I feel for poor Anna darlin', and I think I kind of want to see her, despite this is mainly Tom and Bill and whatnot, because I think it would be interesting to see how Bill works with a more normal (not killing people and loving it) person, so maybe get more depth to Bill's character that way? lol, idk, it could be fun though :) Gah, but I so wanted this to be longer. n_n

I didn't see any mistakes/typos yea!! Except for a missed period somewhere...which I only noticed because I was giggling madly at the sentence because Bill was uncomfortable. But I can't remember the sentence... lol, but hehehe, I love love love this story n_n I want to see more of where you're going to take this, what things are going to happen. The main idea is Tom being awesome/killer, but then we have the God thrown in there, with Bill's feelings and everything, and it's just so much fun XD keep it this amazing :)

Author's Response: woot! i'm glad that I could make you happy. truth be told, I had every intention to type up the chapters to my other stories I had written in my notebook while I was internetless, BUT noooooo I had to be dragged out of my house and ALL across the city for pointlessness and now I hurt too much to do more than reply to about HALF of my reviews. yea.....i'm exhausted.

anyways, ahahah yea, I usually call them for little stuff in my other stories, but this was one of the BIG chapters that my own psychological expertise didn't cover and I had to go annoy them xD also, I had intended to make the chapter longer, I just felt that it didn't need to be drawn out anymore than it already was, and the next chapter will probably be jam packed with little details/infos, mostly about Tom and how the Asylum works *nodnod* and Saki is.....purposely being provoked by Tom. xD there's total backstory to that, and it'll come out later on, BUT for now, we can just assume that Saki's being a pussy and drugging Tom when Tom freaks him out xD

and er, as for the doses Tom's given, he has NO reaction towards them. again, there's reason for that. I think he's able to take about 30mg of that specific drug before he ends up feeling any type of effect. his purposely trained his body to NOT react to it.

and the police are morons xD but I has actualy had that part planned out chapters ago, I had called my friend Brian whose a cop and who said that they wouldn't HAVE to disclose all of the information since Bill's only doing an evaluation, not necessarily trying to fix Tom.

but......nah, he didn't plan it....well kinda sorta xD again that's something explained towards the end of the story *nodnod* and we're definitely gonna see more Anna, not only because she's an interesting character, but as you mentioned, it shows Bill as an actual doctors dealing with a patient that ISN'T a serial killer xD also, i think i'm working her into the second half of the fic as a more important role, so for now you can expect more of her ^_^

and again, i'm sorry for it not being long enough. several parts of this I rewrite because I had to extend the scene, but as for the next update, I will TRY to give you over 2000 words. xD

and YAY for not screwing up! xD actually my friend Less Than Three read over it at the last minute and adjusted most of the ones I didn't see, but if it's just a missing period, I'm GOOD xD

and again, THANK YOU for always pointing out my mistakes. very few people can do this without me wanting to kill them xD

and i am really happy that you love this fic so much and that you're eager to read more. i'm eager to write more, and i can only hope that my kinda sluggish updates are a form of me trying to get these chapters to be PERFECT, and actually succeeding in that.

Omg... Wow. Hahah I hope Saki gets a mental beat down from Bill.

Author's Response: hahaha i'm glad i could make you go omg and wow xD and he's gonna get one of the most brutal verbal lashes from Bill EVER xD

okay.. for the first time I was creeped out..

-bangs head to walls- I write torture dammit..

other that Ghostie's story with the wierd title which didn't creep me as much as this nothing else compares.

fuck.. I know I'm crazy but I can now see goosebumps on my arms and feel my stomach drop..

okay that sounded weird.. I didn't understand what I just said..

*hug* you'll be fine xD

Geeeze... Freaking Tom is scary man... Wow. Maybe this is why I like this story hahaha. Not that I like Tom all scary and shit but I feel Bill's fear right there yo!

Author's Response: hahaha yay for being scary then right? xD but i'm glad that you like this story, and that i could make you feel what my characters feel ^_^