Reviewer: leahq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/06/09 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 6: You Know You Do, You Kill Me Well...

Hehe I've been paying attention, but I'm feeling like I missed something obvious now... I really cant wait untill you make me realize what it is! This is brilliant and I can't wait for more... gives me chills every time!

Author's Response: lololol. you might've idk. go back and read? or just read the next chapter LOL. I'm glad you like this, and I hope you like the future ones <3333

Reviewer: RealityUnknowN Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/09 02:13 am Title: Chapter 5: Don't Touch My Things...

YAY!!!!! New chappie *does update dance* ...this was great *contented sigh* ooh! guess what?! I figured out what tom did before bill! I feel smarticle now...
...alright so... i must say, I am impressed but still, i'm not freaked out yet... sadly, it just made me giggle... because i am a sick and twisted bitch but yeah... I really can't wait til we get to the bit I'm really waiting for (oh the twisting, the screaming, I can't wait!) because, Oh boy, it's gonna be fun!
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so yeah, that was my inner sadist and this is me loving this fic to pieces...
I was wondering if you'd let me use the tom and bill characters in a little spin-off-y type, slightly au one-shot becuase the idea is swirling around in my brain... may I?

Author's Response: LOLOL. yay for update dances. you're gonna have to do another one real soon. LOL. and YAY you're like the first person that figured that out before Bill! Congrats!!!

and dude, i think i'm not freaking you out, because im working on not freaking ME out. all this stuff is tame compared to my original murders LOL. I'm slowly edging it to the INSANITY though. but I gotta keep some of my gruesome-stuff for my upcoming AU fic "Hell" it's INSANITYx100 lol.

Oh and that's fine. I really don't mind. I'm excited to see what you'll come up with.

Reviewer: huntstx2006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/09 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...

LMFAO xD okay okay okay I'll trip about the wait (just a little bit) next time :P hopefully you won't take so long...next time :)

Author's Response: LOLOLOL. i won't. the next chapter is actually done. just waiting for beta ^^

Reviewer: Lazurline Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/09 10:48 am Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...

thank you LOL I love the fic! Even if it rapes my sane thots!

Author's Response: lol. <3333

Reviewer: AlexDum Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/09 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 5: Don't Touch My Things...

Tom is a mastermind!!! I find the fact that he is this smart unbelievably Sexy, even though he is a serial killer. I'm searching the deep corners of my mind to try and figure out who tom's "God" is and what exactly he has done to tom. I swear i will figure this out as soon as you relieve more details!!!
also i wanna know how Tom knows all this shit about bill. Maybe he's really good at reading people. I'm thinking Tom just said what came to mind and used Bill's reaction to relieve if it was true or not. You know, answering the question through his emotion. Dumb Bill!
Bill and Jost is mucho hot, BTW :D
Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: hahah. Tom's a genius and I love him for it. but omg, i LOVE that he's so smart. I don't think he would've lasted long if he hadn't had the brains to actually go through these, tbh. and dudeeeeeee.....you'll definitely figure out out before I actually tell you guys because I release hints like woah (i can't keep a secret for shit lol)

and um...Tom's psychic, that's why he knows so much, but no, him knowing stuff is a secret (for now), so just wait and see LOL.

and LOL. i'm not a big fan of Jost and Bill and it WAS NOT a part of my master plan, SO when Tom decided to throw that i Bill's face, we were both like WTFWTFWTFEWWWWW, but we got used to the idea, and it stuck LOL

Reviewer: Fragile Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/09 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 5: Don't Touch My Things...

whoa.....this is good....in a creepy way. i've read fics where Tom is terribly screwed in the head (i seem to be attracted to twisted Toms) but nothing like this. this is just so eerie but good. i'm dying to know more about Tom's "god" figure. i love how this just keeps me guessing. cant wait for the next chapter. :)

Author's Response: YAY. I like good and creepy in the same line. and hmm, I haven't read one with a twisted Tom that I actually liked, which is PROBABLY why Tom really ISN'T twisted in this one. he's more of a mold for 'his god', his innocence buried underneath one person's teachings. next chapter shall be up on next week. am back to weekly updates for like everything, so I can actually get shit done LOL.

Reviewer: Tears_of_trees Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/09 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 5: Don't Touch My Things...

Ooo, I love how you say later chapters, because it means something is planned out! lol, love darlin', just he's so much fun. And I would be upset if you had watersport added, torture isn't watersport... I can't even think where you pulled up these ideas from, I only wish I could crack open your mind and look. XD hehe, you don't actually fail at life, life just seems to fail for you, because you're so awesome, it just kind of gets screwed up trying to keep up with the awesomeness n_n

I actually am a little concerned how Bill could come with the idea of what Tom had done, I actually figured slightly the whole idea would have to do with urine, but just the way Bill was able to connect it, just insane. And this God, hell, he's creeping me out. But I love it too n_n I think this is one thing I'm going to read over on Halloween, with spooky music playing the background, and see how scared I'd get. XD Hehehehe! But how Tom connected everything damn... Do you have some explanation to that, because, idk, Tom figured it out, so you must know how he did it :)

*cackles* I love how Teddy fit into here. Just, it’s Teddy, I love Teddy, and now I’m so mad at the guy, and for some reason, I’m not really too mad at Tom for hurting the guy, and he seemed so innocent when he told the story too, at least in the beginning about Teddy. Maybe that was only my feeling, but he did, like just this little lost boy. I’m wondering if God is his father? Or, something…

Tom looked up at him, his eyes widening in shock as if he had just noticed that Bill had been sitting there.

That actually scared me a little more than Tom actually saying what he did, just because there is this kind of unstable part of him, that isn’t cool and calculating, which I kind of do understand, it’s kind of spooky… I love it XD

Author's Response: EVERYTHING I have is planned out. either life or my other fics or writer's block stops me from actually getting shit done *makes a sad face* ANYWAYS, I love that you like Tom, he's awesome LOL. and yea, i don't like watersport. I spent nearly a day making sure it wasn't that because I didn't want the warning near me at all. but dude, you don't wanna see inside my head. it's like scary, although, I came up with this specific idea while reading my medical textbook. I saw catheter and went I KNOW WHAT I WANT. lol.

and WELL (this is me trying not to spill the rest of the story) Part of it is because of his obnoxiously high IQ, and the other part is that he just made himself enter Tom's mind. All the information that he's recorded in his mind about Tom/Tom's personality made him sit back and try to see things from the eyes of a serial killer like Tom. as for Tom connecting that...that'll be explained in the next chapter, actually.

and YAY Teddy. Yea, Teddy was awesome until the man defiled him, and according to Tom's logic, don't touch what isn't yours. and....Tom is innocent. you'll see why as the story progresses, actually, starting in the next chapter, and nah, God isn't his father. as least not in the sense that the world thinks of that word

and HAHAHA, i love that, that part scared you. it's something that I myself do i RL when I'm lost in thought, and people are constantly unnerved by it, and i'm like...dude, i just visited a world where twincest was legal. let me space.

Reviewer: huntstx2006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/09 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 5: Don't Touch My Things...

Tom is such a badass. I love this story. Glad you updated. I ain't trippin about the wait..after reading this chap...the wait wasn't in vain ^_^

Author's Response: <333333

Reviewer: leahq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/02/09 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 5: Don't Touch My Things...

Dayum... Seriously... this is INSANE... but i really love psychological thrillers and this is a fantastic one! I really can't wait to read more, you've got me on the edge of my seat every time I read this and Man, you have no idea how much I love it! Great job!!!!

Author's Response: lol. hahah YAY for INSANE. I love that this is up to your standard, and that you're eager for more AND that it has you on the edge of your seat, it makes me wanna write more ^_^

Reviewer: Extacccyyyfreak Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/09 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 3: Smile For Me Beautiful...

haha are u sure ur feeling ok, because based on your complex way of writing it tells me that you definatelly have something wrong with you xDD No but jokes a side this story is brilliant, and so chilling. It's an amazing piece of work, well done.

Author's Response: LOL. hahaha. I actually do have a SERIES of things wrong with me, and if it wasn't for the fact that my conscious makes me the type of person that couldn't hurt a fly, I probably would be a sociopath. no, seriously, my shrink (i see her for depression and anxiety) told me and we laughed over coffee about it, because i hate pain, giving it or taking it, BUT I have the high IQ and metal capacity to sit down and think exactly like a sociopath would. it's weird, but it's the reason she wants me to go into psychology (i'm a history major). my FAVORITE obsessions have to be serial killers and cults because how bent the human psychosis is within those two holes, and yea, i'm just rambling LOL.

but anyways, ignoring the facetious person that I can be when talking about my near 'insanity' as my mum likes it call it, I guess with this story, I'm just trying to (ignoring all plot twists here) give you guys a look into a doctor's eyes as their dealing with one of the most disturbing patients that they've ever met. Like my shrink says, we all have to be a little crazy to understand the natural crazy LOL.