Date: 05/29/10 11:41 am Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
Oh God, Tom just fucking confused me to no end XP
Author's Response: LOL. Yep. He does that. xD
Date: 05/21/10 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
Oh, you got me! I thought Bill is bad, but not Tomīs "god". This was really trilling. Though the ending was a bit disappointing, but I like it!
Author's Response: I'm sorry that you feel like the ending is a bit disappointing. I only wrote it as I saw fit, and everyone else seems to like it, so I'm happy with it, as is. Am still happy that you liked it.
Date: 05/07/10 09:29 am Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
oooooh its soooo goood!
Date: 04/29/10 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
Yikes, this story was creepy. I had no idea that Bill was Tom's God until the second to last chapter. And when that Freddy song was being said, that just gave me shivers. Great story.
Date: 04/25/10 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
ItotallySAWthatcomingbutstill GREAT JOB !!!
Aww... isn't their love for each other beautiful ?
Date: 04/18/10 09:48 am Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
When David and Benjamin was killed the thought crossed my mind, but I was far from sure. The fact that we read about Bills thoughts really make me think that he didn't knew anything at first. Then the theory of him purposely loosing his memory hit me, but then how did he regain them? I guess I didn't miss completely, but i was still pretty surprised :) It was so exiting to read about the mind of a killer. I've been locked to the screen since i started reading, so I guess it's nice to finally get a break... But I'm still very sad that it's over already. Not that i think that it should have been longer, it's just the feeling u always get when something good is over. I've already thanked u a lot for making this, but then again, I have a bad habit of repeating myself xD THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04/18/10 09:26 am Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
I don't want to know, but i want to know, even though i know i don't want to know!!! Damn it all, next chapter here i come!
Date: 04/18/10 09:13 am Title: Chapter 9: Hate to Say That I Told You So, But I Told You So...
yay I missed Tom ^^ But I would have liked to be without his "Death God" -.- That guy annoys the crap outta me! To make someone his toy that way is, well, creepy beyond normal! Even psycho-normal, if there is such a thing...
Date: 04/18/10 08:57 am Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
I think a got a theory... but I'm not sure enough to say it out loud :) Guess I'll just go read the answer in the next chap... hopefully.
Date: 04/18/10 08:48 am Title: Chapter 6: You Know You Do, You Kill Me Well...
I've been paying nothing but attention! I'm just gonna skip right to the chapter, but before that I wanted to, once again, praise u shamelessly for your writing abilities xD U rock girl!
Date: 04/18/10 08:36 am Title: Chapter 5: Don't Touch My Things...
Kay, Tom may be psycho and all, but i like him... I mean, he's interesting and always surprise me (both in pleasant and unpleasant ways). But that so-called "god" of his, scares the crap out of me o_o Someone who can control someone like Tom, is without doubt terrifying. At first i thought that his "god" was just something he made up, and therefore it was just another part of his insanity-stuff. But to know that it might (probably) be a human being gives me the creeps. I think that Tom might be quite small a problem compared to "that".
Date: 04/18/10 08:20 am Title: Chapter 4: Are You Afraid of The Dark?
Waaaaaaaaaa that was so, so... damn i can't find any words to describe how my heart suddenly got stuck in my throat! Damn I'm gonna have a heart attack before I finnish reading this fic, but I'm gonna die with a smile of joy and excitement on my face! xD
Date: 04/18/10 08:10 am Title: Chapter 3: Smile For Me Beautiful...
I'm kinda surprised. I thought I would be creeped out by this chapter but instead, I'm curious. One thing is for sure though, and that is that I'm completely drawn into this fic, so much that it scares me a bit xD it's like I can hear Tom's voice as i read. It's truthfully amazing. Thank u so much for writing this!
Date: 04/18/10 07:59 am Title: Chapter 2: You Are Down On Your Knees, Begging Me For More...
I LOVED IT! :D especially Tom. I really enjoy his playfully, yet frightening character :) But I'm kinda disappointed that Bill is dating such an idiot (no offense Lily) :( Hope he dumps her soon, I really can't take her type...
Date: 04/18/10 07:47 am Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
Wow, your amazing writing and unique characters has taken me aback once again xD I can't help but to like Tom, though he's supposed to be scary. His confidence and mysterious personality has completely lured me in... I suppose i would be an easy victim :s Hope that Bill won't have to hard a time with him... No, that's a lie, I hope he has a really hard time with him ;P Anyway, I'm gonna continue to next chapter, be ready for a lot of reviews ;)
Date: 04/08/10 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
Wow! Creepy, scary, disturbing. :D
Date: 03/30/10 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
OMG YOU ARE MY LIFE. I CRIED. I WAS TURNED ON. I WAS EVEN HAPPY BEING SCARED SHITLESS READING THIS. all in all, im glad i read this.
Date: 03/30/10 01:54 am Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
Ahh, I loved this. It wasn't until the chapter before this one that I thought it could be Bill, but I'm happy to know I was right, lol. =P I have a weird fascination with asylums, and people who are a little different in the head. I actually work at an organization with brain-injured people, and though it's not really the same thing, it's all dealing with the mind and I love it. Anyways....my point is, I love these kinds of fics and you pulled everything off perfectly! So great job. =)
Date: 03/20/10 03:59 am Title: Chapter 11: Steadily Emerging With Grace
oh... holyshit.
That was just AMAZING. I wouldn't have guessed it was Bill, who was Tom's god. I would have guessed it was Tom who was Bill's god. (Only because people write stuff where Bill's the "weaker" and Tom's the dominant twin. x]
Ah, anyways. I enjoyed the whole story, and was actually pretty sad when I saw the chapter notes. "and give you guys the ending that you deserve". It was like you have read a wonderful book, and then you come to the end. And just want to start over again.
I'm going to have dreams about this forever. And that's not a bad thing. hehe. :- D
Date: 03/10/10 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
Yay for Insane Asylums!! I personally like reading and writing about them. ^ ^ Please don't tell my husband about that! ;) ~Gabi Tailorson