Date: 12/18/09 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
omfg that was amazing!!!!
Author's Response: *grins* yay!
Date: 12/18/09 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
Whoa.
He's BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK! ^^
Tom will be pleased and his heart will skip a beat now.
Author's Response: hahaha. yep yep.
and Tom's heart totally will. he's a sick one, that tomi xD
Date: 12/18/09 10:43 am Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
Ummmmmm. Wow. I just threw up a little in my mouth... Dx
Author's Response: LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL. that is all. xD
Date: 12/18/09 09:26 am Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
Death=Bill.
So I guess my question is, is this in the past or present? I would say past, though I'm not sure if Tom's been caught before. if it's present, I'm not sure if Bill's aware, exactly, of what's going on with his own body (if it is Bill, I mean).
So yeah. I honestly think your writing is good, and I couldn't even find a grammatical mistake ANYWHERE in this chappie ^_^ You're definitely up to par.
Author's Response: maybe. just maybeeee. xD
and it's present hun. all present. ^^
Date: 12/18/09 08:51 am Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
Mhhh... The nurse? Can't be too sure. But I'm pretty sure it's someone from the asylum. Am I right? xD
Author's Response: lololol. maybeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. xD keep thinking ^^
Date: 12/18/09 07:51 am Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
can't.. think.. head.. hurts.. this is too much for my brain..
but what I know is.. I want more.
Author's Response: *pats your brain* there's more xD
Date: 12/18/09 06:18 am Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
hmm at the moment i think i might be Bill...
Bill could be Tom's 'God', like in Hide and Seek, except he has a split personality and doesn't know about it xD
Author's Response: maybe, maybeeeeee. keep thinking. And GOD I love Hide and Seek. That movie is BALLS! in the good way xD haha
Date: 12/18/09 05:00 am Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
Ohmygott. Billa is like, seriously insane! It's hot though. But did he HAVE to kiss that bitch? And, so nice of you to spare the children. Or, well, make them angels. At least Billa was somewhat nice to them ...
Author's Response: lolol, maybe. maybe not. xD and yes, Death had to kiss her. Death is omnipotent ^^
Date: 12/18/09 04:28 am Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
OH my i dont know if i will be able to sleep now that shit was crazy... like i dont think i have ever felt my stomach not like it did for the last two chapters... ( i read in reverse because i completely forgot about the other one xD) its never happened before not even while watching horror movies. its more like walking through The Scrap Yard Massacre/haunted house... that bad. But I cant wait for the next chapter.
The Gods... Grisha Raduga... >D hed make a sexy god.
No its uh. Someone really creepy like and loves to be crazy?
is he Bubu-bubu-bu or Henry the VIII or or damn i lost it it was right there on the tip of my tounge... oh and you need some smiles and cookies cause this story is giving me the heebie Jeebies.
so Smiles.
=O o.o :0 -_-;; >D >O
Author's Response: lollololol. babe, Grisha is hot. I'm writing Bill/Grisha story for Steinsgrrl. Yea. HOT. xD I'm glad you liked this so much though. I'm so ecstatic ^^
Date: 12/18/09 02:22 am Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
Omgggg. You had me hunched over the computer, reading and reading!!! And looking out for clues in the chapters XD Heheh. This is just awesome, I really really really like it. It's like, we - the readers - are trying to solve the mystery or something together ;D Haha.
Well, hoping to see more soon! :) I think it's great. Chapter 7 was creepy, though. (Is the woman Tom's mother? And Death his dad or something?)
Author's Response: really? WOAH, am glad then xD I like making it into a bit of a mystery/suspense thriller, since those are some of my favorite types of movies. ^_^
Date: 12/17/09 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
I might be in the wrong but ...maybe...just maybe Bill is Tom's god or something....and bill has like personnalities disorder or something.
goshh I dont know ...but I am so hooked on this story like I NEED to know whats going to happen gosh,. your amazing...really :D xooxxo
Author's Response: maybeeeeeeeeeeee. xD think, just thinkkkk. xD I'm liking your theories though.
And I'm glad you're soo hooked, I love knowing that this had fans ^_^
Date: 12/17/09 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
Omg. I... I.... Um... *closes mouth* aaaaand I;m sorry. I hsve no theories. All I want is what you write next. I'm sorry I'm not helpful at all~ :(
My god this chapter hurts, like, painful xD
Author's Response: LOL. *pats your back* It's alright, and now you can have what I wrote next, cause it's up. xD and um, sorry for the pain? xDDD
Date: 12/17/09 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
Mm... interesting.
Is that... Simone? Custody issues?
Author's Response: LOL, nahhhh. It's not Simone.
Date: 12/17/09 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
It's Bushido. And he's a siiiiiiiiick fuck! Ick! you made me squirm you crazy lady!
Author's Response: LOLOLOL. maybe. LMFAO. thought I doubt it xDDDDDD I'm glad I could make you squirm though xD
Date: 12/17/09 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
I don't know how you did it, but you made the scene of Death torturing that woman sensual and kinda sexy. And I think the woman is perhaps one of the nurses at the asylum?...This is so exciting!
Author's Response: LOLOL. it's cause I'm insane. LOLOL. I'm glad that you liked it though, cause I want to showcase the different ways Death can kill his victims *nods seriously* And maybeeeeeeeeee. you'll find out soon-ish xD
Date: 12/17/09 07:17 am Title: Chapter 6: You Know You Do, You Kill Me Well...
Say that you are going to continue this series. SAY IT! Please please please?
Great writing and the characters are so fun. Deranged stories make me happy lolz.
Author's Response: this fic? yea. idk if there will be a series for it though. and I'm glad you like it so much. there's a new chapter up now <333
Date: 12/09/09 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 6: You Know You Do, You Kill Me Well...
OMDZ plz do not tell me girl that you are gonna make me wait for the next chapter for who knows how long again *grumblegrumble* I'M completely and utterly addicted to this one of a kind story, its like i devour the words and i keep wanting more. PLEEEEEEAAAAAASEEEEEE WRITE MORE SOON :D
Author's Response: lol. nahhhhhhhh, you guys get a new chapter soon. as in TODAY. xD and awww, I'm sorry i always take forever, but I'm crazy busy, and I hate rushing this story. It has to be precise or it'll go the wrong way. but anyways, you can rest assured, there's a new chapter up now.
Date: 12/09/09 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 6: You Know You Do, You Kill Me Well...
OMDZ plz do not tell me girl that you are gonna make me wait for the next chapter for who knows how long again *grumblegrumble* I'M completely and utterly addicted to this one of a kind story, its like i devour the words and i keep wanting more. PLEEEEEEAAAAAASEEEEEE WRITE MORE SOON :D
Author's Response: <3333
Date: 12/09/09 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 6: You Know You Do, You Kill Me Well...
OMDZ plz do not tell me girl that you are gonna make me wait for the next chapter for who knows how long again *grumblegrumble* I'M completely and utterly addicted to this one of a kind story, its like i devour the words and i keep wanting more. PLEEEEEEAAAAAASEEEEEE WRITE MORE SOON :D
Author's Response: <33
Date: 12/08/09 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 6: You Know You Do, You Kill Me Well...
God damn, are you a fantastic writer lol
Author's Response: *blushes* awww, thank you. there's a new chapter up now <333