Date: 01/08/10 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 8: Murder II
Wow. WOW. I read all of this in one sitting, and I've got to say, you are absolutely brilliant! Seriously, the plotline is so dark and twisted and on top of that, it's one huge mystery on top of another. (And I have HUGE amounts of respect for anyone who can write a good mystery.) This fic is one of the best I've read, and I usually don't go for dark fics like this, but I love this and cannot wait for more!
My guess is that the killer in Murder and MurderII was Tom's god... and I'm thinking that in this chapter, the god killed Jost?
Author's Response: O.O wow. xD I didn't think anyone would be able to SIT through this mindfuckfest as a whole. xD But I'm glad that you did, and that you like it. I'm having fun with it, which seems to be working for you. xD
Date: 01/08/10 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 8: Murder II
Although I'm sorely tempted to be: OMG DON'T KILL BILL! and all from this chapter, I'm still gong with Death=Bill and Doctor=Jost xDD
Author's Response: lol. keep searching for clues xD
Date: 01/08/10 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 8: Murder II
I think Bill's either dreaming or Tom's god got to him someway.
I wish you'd update more often because is really difficult to keep up with this story for its plotline is so intrincate and smart gennius
Author's Response: Lol, can't tell you if you're right or not......you'll just have to see. xD
and I apologize for the long updating spaces, but honestly, I've got a life outside of this fandom that I can only give up periodic hours of, in order to write, and I can't make this my one and only priority. I've got other fics I'm trying to work on as well, and I tend to write based on what my muses feel like working on.
Date: 01/08/10 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 8: Murder II
you are a crazy ass mother fucker. keep writing though, im kinda sick that way. love/ disguted by it! does that even make sense? Anyway, i don't know if anyone else was turned on by tom's attitude, but i sure as hell was. :)
Author's Response: lolol, i've been told that many times over, but I'm glad that you love it and yet are kinda disgusted by it xD and pshhhhh everyone is ALWAYS turned on by Tom, but....Tom isn't the killer in this scene xD
Date: 01/08/10 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 8: Murder II
OMFG I feel so retarted because I havn't figured it out yet ;_; Usually I'm good at this but you've got me stumped... granted, I'm enjoying the suspense... this is brilliant and the wait was worth while, I can't wait for more
Author's Response: lololol, don't feel retarded. the clues aren't that easy to pick up on. But I'm glad that you like it ^_^
Date: 01/08/10 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
tom totally reminds me of the joker. why so serious?
Author's Response: lol YAY the Joker is one of my favorite psychopaths (even if he's a comic book character xD)
Date: 01/08/10 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 8: Murder II
OMG MINDFUCK
as much as I tried to pay attention, I really for the life of me haven't figured out who the hell he's killing... D:
Author's Response: LOL. TOTAL MINDFUCK. xD And hahaha, you'll be fine. it'll come to light.
Date: 01/08/10 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 8: Murder II
Hmmm...I think I might know who this victim is. God this is like a badass version of Clue! I just love how creepy the killer is and how you convey that so chillingly. Loved this chapter *_*
Author's Response: Lololol, you might, you might. And HAHAHAH I'm glad you think so. I love writing it so much xD
Date: 12/29/09 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
OMG...I LOVE TOM!!!!!!!!!UR GREAT...I LUV THIS STORY....TOTALLY!!!!!
Author's Response: Awww, everyone seems to love Tom in this, it's amusingly weird. xD But I'm glad you love it ^_^
Author's Response: Awww, everyone seems to love Tom in this, it's amusingly weird. xD But I'm glad you love it ^_^
Date: 12/23/09 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
aaaargh god i dnt have a clue, i cnt seem to rememba anithing that wud help me to kno who the victim is (i'v read all the chapters so long ago, it frustrates me that i dnt have a slightest idea ¬¬) Fantastic chapter like always :D
Author's Response: Hahaha, you'll be fine. You'll get it towards the end, I promise. Am glad that you think it's fantastic though ^_^
Date: 12/22/09 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
i really love this, boocakes.
Author's Response: Lol, I'm glad you do ^_^
Date: 12/20/09 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
Lala, we're not going to be makign guesses. XD Let's just read and be amazed XD
lol, this was an interesting chapter, the way you had it written and everything, plus just the idea behind it. Great fun XD
He wasn't religious in the sense, but knowing how religious she was, he wanted to antagonize her even more.
Favorite line here. It just, idk, it sent shivers up my spine, and love it XD Amazing job yet again, haha n_n
Author's Response: Lol. Alright, that's fine with me, as long as you enjoyed it. xD AM really happy for your review, and that you liked that line. It was one of my favorites to put in there, and it have him a sense of personality, albeit a sick sense of one.
Date: 12/19/09 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
O.O I know I'm probably going to feel stupid when you let us all in on all of your secrets but I swear I can't figure it out... This is brilliant and terrifying and omfg... I can't wait to read more
Author's Response: I promise you won't. It'll come together in the next couple of chapters, and you'll start to figure it out on your own, I promise ^^ am glad you enjoy it
Date: 12/19/09 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
god damn..
just... god damn lol
Author's Response: lol. that's a lot. kinda. xD
Date: 12/19/09 11:52 am Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
Woah. WTF.
I know the murderer is Tom's god. At least i think so....
and im too stupid to figure out who the victim is. Guess i got to re-read it.
Author's Response: LOL. Well yea, that's right, but go, think harder. it's there ^^
Date: 12/19/09 02:37 am Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
This is such a disturbing fic... lol... yet oddly entertaining... I think something is wrong with me haha.
I'm very interested in your next update :)
Author's Response: LOL, nah nothing's wrong with you. I think that as long as it's interesting (and doesn't hurt anyone in real life) there's no problem with liking it. ^^
Date: 12/19/09 01:47 am Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
o.0 rlly good...
Author's Response: ^_^ thanks.
Date: 12/18/09 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 6: You Know You Do, You Kill Me Well...
Isn't she that woman who works callin the doctors from reception or whatever is called? I can't think of another woman, and I hate that Bill was right about the existence of a second killer
Author's Response: maybe. keep reading and you'll find out. xD
and Bill's good at his job. he knew Tom wasn't talking about something intangible. xD
Date: 12/18/09 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
No,I REFUSE to let you know my theories, because I suck in them and it makes me look like an idiot if I reveal my amusing guesses. You just have to live wi8thout them, sorry :D
Sick, twisted and you know it. The God, well, well, well, who are you exactly?
Does it make it look horrible that I actually felt little sympathy for him for loving his precious Tom so much? I think it was cute and beautiful in a sick, confusing way. He just loves him. It's sick how these kind of things satart to feel like actual love at some point.
Anyways, I enjoyed as always. :)
Author's Response: LOL. there aren't such things as sucky theories, unless you're telling them to Death LOLOL.
And I'm glad you're calling it sick and twisted. It was what I was going for, OF COURSE. xD And he he he, you'll have to wonder about who he is until he's ready to show himself xD
and nahhh, it's not horrible, they're both terribly screwed up individuals, and he honestly does love (or believes he loves) Tomi, so as sick and confusing as it is, it's still...beautiful, in a way. Am honestly glad that you enjoyed ^^
Date: 12/18/09 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
I want to say it's Rachel, maybe maybe not. Just need to tell you that I am creeped out by this chapter. Scared to find out who Tom's God is...but really excited to read more.
Author's Response: maybeeeeeeeee. xD And yay, I like creeped out, especially when it comes to this fic xD