Date: 01/17/10 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 8: Murder II
Jeezs, I'm still lost. Hints please???
I guess I'm not reading this carefully enough. D:
Emily Dickinson= Boo Boo Bananas
Author's Response: Lol, everything is coming to light soon. and HAHAH I like Em.D a lot, but my AP teacher back in highschool hated her, so i put her thoughts into this xD
Date: 01/15/10 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 8: Murder II
alright so i re-read the whole story and came up with this theories:
First murder are Anna's parents, the second one is Jost and Bill is Death...
I might be wrong on the first one though...but the twist is really excellent if it is Bill kind of makes me want to write to my psycho story XD
Author's Response: lol, keep looking hun, just keep looking for the clues ^_^
Date: 01/15/10 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 8: Murder II
omg omg omg i think i know who this one is but im going to wait to see if im right XD loved it very much so!!!
Author's Response: hahahaha okies ^_^ I'm glad you loved it ^_^
Date: 01/15/10 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
mmmm i'm wondering if it is who i think it is...
Author's Response: who do you think it is? xD
Date: 01/15/10 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 6: You Know You Do, You Kill Me Well...
i think i love you seriously when Bill started talking about the difference between sociopaths and psychopaths i was drooling and sighing such a smart smart cookie and talking about serial killers reminds me of Dr. Reed from Criminal Minds so much
*sighs*
Author's Response: hahahahaha, awww, that was one of my favorite scenes ever. I enjoy telling ppl the difference between the two. LOL. and hahaha I actually started this fic before I heard of Criminal Minds, but over the last 2-3 months I watched every episode out, and I ADORE Dr. Reid as well. SO MUCH IN FACT, that once this story is finished, I'll be posting my TH version OF Criminal Minds xD
Date: 01/15/10 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 5: Don't Touch My Things...
omg! ive been trying to catch up to all the stories that have been updated in my absence and omg! loved it loved it loved it!
XD now on to the next chapter!
Author's Response: hahaha i'm glad you still loved it ^^
Date: 01/10/10 01:28 am Title: Chapter 8: Murder II
Lovely chappy. so much fucking detail. ahah
Author's Response: YAY ^_^ glad you do. <333
Date: 01/09/10 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 8: Murder II
I was RIGHT I am sure I am RIGHT
it is Bill.
Because of the car crash, it's selective amnesia. He doesnt rememeber ever killing his parents because, of course he did. and then his really HIGH IQ is why he never get caught! and this sentence really enlighten me : ''breathing labored and staring into the mirror as if it possessed all of his demons''. He has personalities desorders or ...just selective amnesia, like the guy in the movie HIDE AND SEEK.
and then this sentence : He shook his head, trying to free himself of the screams from ''that night'' ( like we don't know WHICH night it is, because Bill doesnt remember the car crash ) also in the last chapter Tom's god says that DEATH comes to you slowly and choose the best way to kill you and watches you until the right moment comes and then Bill says : he had an obnoxiously large amount of patience when it came to just sitting and watching people. ( it's something that I connected with DEATH ) and then Tom and Bill can watch eachother for hours because they are the same and work together. and Then this sentence : he took one look at Tom's face and knew that they wouldn't talk for a while. ( makes me realise that Bill knows Tom from before and that he is Tom's god ) . Also I believe that Bill has amnesia and does not remember things he did but sometimes acts like he does : Tom nodded, his fingers sliding over the cool surface, as Bill's did the same, in an almost reflective manner. ....The first victim might be Rachel...or someone at Bill's work. and the second murder I think that it is Jost because he used to fuck Bill or something like that :) xoxox yup hahaha I know it's a long long long comment but I had to give you my theory :) I can't wait to read some more, because I might totally be in the wrong :)
Author's Response: LOL. Really? You think so? *quirks eyebrow* I won't tell you whether you're right or not, because that would spoil the ending, perhaps, but I will tell you that you must look harder for the clues if you're going to see who it is. The things you listed, while it parallels the two of them, they're mearly tools of Bill's profession. Mimicing your patient, learning to tell if they're actually going to talk to you that day, all of that comes with the territory of working with people. Psychologists/Psychiatrists are like Profilers, in the sense that they have to be able to read people in order to truly delve under their skin.
anyways, I do hope that you continue to read this ^^
Date: 01/09/10 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 8: Murder II
IS THAT BILL??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!
Author's Response: who, what, where, when, and how? xD
Date: 01/09/10 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 5: Don't Touch My Things...
woww...
Author's Response: thanks?
Date: 01/09/10 08:02 am Title: Chapter 8: Murder II
You say that some people on "on the right track", but damn. I have NO idea what's going ooooon! DX I'm loooooost! I have no idea who the bad guy is! Or who exactly he's been killing in these last two chapters! omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg O.O
Author's Response: Lololol, you'll figure it out soon, I promise <3333
Date: 01/09/10 07:45 am Title: Chapter 8: Murder II
Sick, isn't it? :). No, you are not getting any theories, because I haven't decided yet, which one I trust the most. Sorry :).
I find this whole story very interesting, because this really goes deep into a human mind. Many of the serial killer/mental institute fics are eventually pretty simple, but in here, you write many interesting levels at the same time, so I'm interested to read the rest of this too.
I'm curious to see, how the institute reacts on these murders and I can't wait to see Tom again. So, pretty please??
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA you shouldn't hide your theories from me, love!
But I'm glad you think that this isn't just another serial killer/mental institute fic. I'm an author that has to gather as much background information on my subject, promarily so that I can write so in depth, and it just happens, that I enjoy psychology and crimenology A LOT.
Date: 01/09/10 05:25 am Title: Chapter 8: Murder II
Holy shit this is amazing!!!
I LOVE PSYCHO TOM... this might make me seem really creepy but Tom being all crazy makes me want to.... EAT COOKIES!!!
No really crazy Tom is HOTT!!!
Soooo... here's what paying attention has got me.
Ugh.. *clears throat und sifts through papers* ok... Bill is definitely Tom's god... Jost is definitely "The Doctor"... hmmm? The reason is the whole burning flesh ordeal.
:D
UPDATE SOON!!!
*Holds up a fresh batch of Serial Killer Bill cookies*
Go on take one.
Author's Response: LOL. Everyone thinks Psycho!Tom is hot. it's quite amusing to be honest. xD And keep working on you're theories love ^_^
Date: 01/09/10 04:59 am Title: Chapter 8: Murder II
*holds breath*
-20minuteslater-
*Releases Breath*
Chilling, Thrilling, Suspenseful. thats the words that sums it up.
The doctors gonna die and Death will get closer to whats his.
Author's Response: *pats your head and smiles* I'm glad you think so, I really really really am happy that you're liking this
Date: 01/09/10 02:56 am Title: Chapter 8: Murder II
I am so confused :O but I loved it :)
Author's Response: lololol thanks for reading though xD
Date: 01/09/10 12:33 am Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
Really love how dark and mysterious this story is. Tom is psycho and i definitely would not want to meet him in real life, but i'm waiting to see how you pull it together. Amazing... Dont keep up guessing for too long.
Author's Response: *grins* I'm glad you do, cause I do too LOL. but I'd love to meet him in real life, so I could pick his brain and play games with him. xD I'm weird xD
Date: 01/09/10 12:33 am Title: Chapter 8: Murder II
You. Are. Siiick. Yet awesome. I was eating lasgna before I had to stop. XC but ur sickening me is almost fun....ombg I'm Tom huh?
Author's Response: LOL. i know, i know. xD and HAHAHA sorry for ruining your food xD
Date: 01/09/10 12:27 am Title: Chapter 8: Murder II
DDDDD:
That's not Bill, right?
Oh god... that is one twisted fic. But I love it.
Author's Response: can't tell youuuuuuuuu. go read the next chapter xD
Date: 01/08/10 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
I'm back from snooping! And it has done nothing but add Samy Deluxe to my killer list...damn, I thought it would work...I'm so effing excited!!!
Author's Response: HAHAHAH. Samy isn't even a character in this LOL. <3333
Date: 01/08/10 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
mindfuck= headdesk...My brain is saying that the victim is either a detective or jost and OMG my whole body is screaming Bushido!!! I'm gonna go snoop around for clues!
Author's Response: LOL. *pats your head* you'll be fine. just keep reading xD
