Date: 02/06/10 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 9: Hate to Say That I Told You So, But I Told You So...
ooooohhhhh love
Author's Response: am glad you do ^_^
Date: 02/05/10 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 9: Hate to Say That I Told You So, But I Told You So...
oooh does Bill has a split personality that is doing all the murdering?? 0_o?
Author's Response: dundundun. you'll see if you're right or wrong soon enough ^^
Date: 02/04/10 09:44 am Title: Chapter 9: Hate to Say That I Told You So, But I Told You So...
Oh yes, Bill & Tom interaction makes up everything, because I loved, loved, loved their interaction. I've been wanting to read of them meeting again and this was really worth it. Nice :).
Especially I enjoyed the way you bought Tom's past, character and his god here. Also the rapid movements on his temper were interesting and reflected nicely his fragiled inner self. Well, as you know me, you know already that I love him like that.
I'm always curious to read the most twisted forms of love and other, basically positive emotions. The confusing mess of sick and twisted ways to feel is both interesting and kind of hot, I admit it. I hope to read more and more of describtion of those emotions to find out how confused can human mind be. I personally enjoy the most of this kind of interaction and illustrating the mental profile than just plain action and/or descioribing what has happened. But that's just my personal opinion...
Anyways, this made up the weaiting for sure :). Abd you are always so cruel to Jost, poor thing :D
Author's Response: Lol, I'm glad it did, I missed them. A story always feel incomplete if I don't have them both, it's weird. xD. But I'm glad that you liked this chapter. It was complicated to write, I had so much to say, but with stories like this, I know that I have to save it all until the very end, so that it makes THAT much more of an impact.
and Jost always deserves what i give him, that creeper xD
Date: 02/03/10 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 9: Hate to Say That I Told You So, But I Told You So...
W-O-W! Is all I can say. You made me CRAVE to know what was going to happen next..I LOVED it and I really hope that you continue with the story.
Author's Response: Lol. *grins* your review makes me all giggling, cause I LOVE having my readers NEED to know what happens next. anyways, new chapter up now ^_^
Date: 02/03/10 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 9: Hate to Say That I Told You So, But I Told You So...
oh my god.. -gasps- want.. more please?? -kitty eyes-
Wonderful.. so fucking wonderful!! -bows down-
Author's Response: Lol, there's more now bb, I promise <333
Date: 02/03/10 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 9: Hate to Say That I Told You So, But I Told You So...
I love the interaction between Tom and Bill! It's always so creepy but still sexy. And finally we learn more about Tom's past and his god...and I'm starting to get an idea who it might be. >.>
Author's Response: YAY I'm glad you do. I love writing them together when someone isn't always 100% on top of their emotions. xD and we'll see if you've got it right xD
Date: 02/03/10 09:54 am Title: Chapter 9: Hate to Say That I Told You So, But I Told You So...
I get it !! Tom is a mind reader xDDD doh, this tom is incredible, and I've got no clue who this god could be..
I feel that bill's accident could somehow be linked to this but I don't know how this could be... Amazing story, it seems one of the crime novel I usually read, I mean the ones from professional writers. You could easily pass for some jeffery deaver, patricia cornwell and so on. You're such a brilliant writer! I hope we'll get an update soon!!
Author's Response: LOLOL, i love you for that one. Just wait and see *grins* It'll be an amazing ending (i hope) xD And awwww, I love crime novels like woah, so it makes me happy, you saying that.
Date: 02/03/10 01:36 am Title: Chapter 8: Murder II
hey hey hey.. =D you mentioned "personal" and the fact that tom revealed that jost used bill before...
*grinning I'd like to think that i know already who is tom's god.. but i still want to wait for the final chapter of this master piece.... ^.~
your so good at this hun...
Author's Response: lololol, keep reading ^^ and I'm glad you think so. serial killers are one of my major interests xD
Date: 02/03/10 01:25 am Title: Chapter 7: Murder I
BILL?!
ok bill and Tom's god shared the "lifting eyebrow" thingy...
lol i need to re-read it again after reading your notes that theirs a "CLUE" in this chapter..
this story makes my mind wonder so deep... i like it!!
Author's Response: Lol, well most people I know can lift their eyebrow. except for like...me and one of my cousins. xD I use the eyebrow thingy because everyone I know uses it on me LOL. xD
Date: 02/02/10 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 9: Hate to Say That I Told You So, But I Told You So...
tom is wicked!!!! glad about more bill and tom interaction
Author's Response: lol, yesh he is xD
Date: 02/02/10 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 9: Hate to Say That I Told You So, But I Told You So...
:D I wanna know who's Tom's God if it ain't Bushi!
Author's Response: Lol, you'll see bb, you'll see xD
Date: 02/02/10 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 9: Hate to Say That I Told You So, But I Told You So...
He's coming soon, I can feel it. He's sniffing around, just waiting to strike.
I get shivers just thinking about it, because I bet you Tom is waiting as patiently as he can for his God to come back for him and when those two join forces again, man, it's gonna be bad.
And I shouldn't like this idea so much. >_<
GUH, I loved this one!
Author's Response: lol mhmmmmmmmmm. you know you love it. you love it hard. xD
Date: 02/02/10 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 9: Hate to Say That I Told You So, But I Told You So...
ohhhhhhhhhhhh...........so disgustingly good :D
Author's Response: lol, thank you, thank you xD
Date: 02/02/10 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 9: Hate to Say That I Told You So, But I Told You So...
well then. :D
Author's Response: lol. exactly! xD
Date: 02/02/10 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 9: Hate to Say That I Told You So, But I Told You So...
i like this fic :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you do ^_^
Date: 02/02/10 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 9: Hate to Say That I Told You So, But I Told You So...
Oh damn *shivers* Tom is so cold, I freaking love it... I also love that we got the backstory on him
Author's Response: he's a softy, I swear it. in a weird way. xD and yea, I was looking for the perfect place to put it, and had to remember not to put TOO many details in xD
Date: 02/02/10 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 9: Hate to Say That I Told You So, But I Told You So...
This story has me on the edge of my seat!
Author's Response: lol, good then! i'm doing my job! xD
Date: 02/02/10 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 9: Hate to Say That I Told You So, But I Told You So...
I LOVE it. It's so intense. But just so you know, you posted the chapter twice in one chapter.
clues that your Detective Ferchichi, the one standing outside my door, will never be able to piece together until he wants him to."
On Tue, Feb 2, 2010 at 1:41 PM, parallelheartz@gmail.com wrote:
Loud banging on the wall startled Bill from the nightmare that had taken over his mind. He struggled to sit up in his bed, and ...
Just letting you know so that you can fix it. :)
Author's Response: thank hun, my friend just tweeted me about it, I was like oooooooooo, okay *fixes* lol. I'm glad you still liked it though ^_^
Date: 02/02/10 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 9: Hate to Say That I Told You So, But I Told You So...
Lun-a-cy! Lun-a-cy! *chants*
Thankfully, I didn't have to close my eyes for this one ^_^ I'm LMFAO, since you already told me so much.
Slightly wondering if Tom's God came in and told him this stuff, told him this stuff YEARS ago, or if he just figured it out for himself :/
Author's Response: Lol, I keep telling you, you don't have to close your eyes for these. they're getting tamer. xD And Tom's psychic. xD
Date: 02/02/10 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 9: Hate to Say That I Told You So, But I Told You So...
I love this :) I really hope your going to past sooooonnn!
Author's Response: I'm glad you do ^_^ And I just posted a new one today ^_^