Date: 02/13/10 09:51 am Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
Oh babe. I know I've been missing on this site for such a long time and that I've failed at reviewing, but... but...
Oh my God Shelly YOU'VE GOT TALENT. Seriously. It seems like the plot of a movie, I wouldn't be surprised to see it turned into a real film someday (with Bill and Tom? HA! I WISH!).
I was a little bored by fictions lately, I've read only some that caught my attention and Lunacy, not only does it capture my whole attention, it totally deserves it, I wonder why I haven't read this before. Stupid stupid me.
Okay, I admit I'm not too fond of the horror genre; and I should have read the warnings, I know, I know. It's just that those things won't let me sleep at night and I think this story will be no exception. xD.
What else is there to say? *-* I did not like these ten chapters, I TOTALLY loved them; I ate them (erhm... ever heard about it? EATING A STORY? Means that you were totally into it, you were so impatient to know the ending... No eh? xD I don't know, it may just be an italian saying after all).
Chapter 3 left me speechless, as well as what Tom did to Rebecca. Seriously, I'm frozen on my chair.
Chapter 4 was... hell it was sexy. I hate to repeat myself but I was still and my eyes glued on the screen and my mouth was open (even if I realised that it was only when the chapter was over xD).
And Tom, oh Tom terrifies me. I can totally understand why Bill has got troubles with him. This Tom's so sexy... so frightening and so devoted to his God... speechless babe, I'm just speechless...
Ohhhh you asked for some theories right? Well I suck at thinking. xD. But there are some things that make me think that this Death is Bill... who else? Especially this sentence:
"he placed his master down..."
Tom's body is slim, who else could be even slimmer and tinier than him? xD Who else could be THAT... AND a man/boy at the same time? I don't know. xD I just have my theory. We've just studied Edgar Allan Poe at school, and I learnt this definition, 'split personality', is that correct? Maybe Bill is like that...
Oh... right, just one chapter left. ONLY one? >.< Believe me, I'm going to remember forever this story, oh yes I will...
Any need to say I love the way it's written too? You know I adore your English.
I love it, seriously, I can't just WAIT to find out how it ends. >.
Author's Response: awwwwwwwwww girl, i missed you SO MUCH! you need to IM me!!! most definitely, I totally squealed and wrote about you on Livejournal SO SO SO HAPPY and then the nurses thought I was in pain cause I was so loud and I'm like NO I'M JUST HAPPY. LEAVE ME ALONE. xD
but your review made me giggle and blush and I know my response isn't going to be ANYWHERE in length near to yours, but that's cause i'm exhausted, still sick and my brain is DEAD from answering like 30 reviews xD I love your theories though, and that you love this so much ^_^
Date: 02/13/10 09:43 am Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
i can't wait and i'm so hoping i'm right
Author's Response: lol, we'll see xD last chapter is up now xD
Date: 02/13/10 07:24 am Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
what bill is dead?! NO WAY!!! it CAN'T be!!! is he?!
Author's Response: lol, you'll have to read and find out.
Date: 02/13/10 07:20 am Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
I CAN'T WAIT for the last chapter!!!!
Author's Response: lol, well wait no more. the next chapter is up now
Date: 02/13/10 03:11 am Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
damn... damn.. why do I have this weird idea that is making my head spin?? noo.. damn it that would be way hot if that was true.. okay.. I'll wait for it..
more!!!
Author's Response: LOL, you shoulda told me your idea dammit xD
Date: 02/13/10 02:55 am Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
I can't wait to for the next chapter and find out what is going on. For some reason I think that Tom's God might be Bill.
Author's Response: Lolol, next chapter is up ^_^
Date: 02/13/10 02:26 am Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
I can't help but feel that Bill has a split personality and he's Tom's God XD THAT would be an awesome twist.
Author's Response: lOl, keep readinggggggggg. you'll figure it out xD
Date: 02/13/10 01:30 am Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
This is such a great story, I really wanna no what happens! I'm so impatient XD Great Job
Author's Response: *grins* I'm glad you think so. I enjoy writing it for ya'll xD and there's a new chapter up now
Date: 02/13/10 01:04 am Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
How do I even begin to describe this?
I think stories like these makes me love torture. Oo can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Idk? xD I'm just happy you like it and LOL makes you love it? wow, hell when I write this I scare myself just a bit xD
Date: 02/12/10 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
i KNOM WHO IT IS!!! [no i dn't damn it... ICK YOU KILL WITH ALL THE BLOOD @.@
Author's Response: LMFAO. answers are in the chapter that i just uploaded xD and haha sorry?
Date: 02/12/10 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
I must have such a sick mind because the sex that was going on in this chap was HOT...and the killings only made it bettr *needs to seek help* :p
Author's Response: LOLOL, nah you don't have a sick mind xD you just appreciate....awesomeness? xD
Date: 02/12/10 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
YESSSSS.
They are vile.
They are horrible.
They are monsters.
But by fuck, they are HOT! XD
NNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH
*comes*
Author's Response: LOL, you'd totally let them fuck you and you know it *humps* xD
Date: 02/12/10 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
i still am not sure who it is maybe i'm a little slow..but i have always had a feeling it was bill... cuz of the hidden messages when they would speak to each other..
Author's Response: lol, *grins* keep reading. xD
Date: 02/12/10 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
Oh myyyyyy, I'm warning you , don't let bill be deaddd o.O even if this sentence really worries me "Not like that little black-haired tart over at the institution you guys locked Tomi in"... But at the same time, I re-checked the warnings and pairings, and
1- bill and tom are listed as a main pairing and till now, we haven't seen any clear interaction between them, so bill should be alive to fornicate with our tomi
2-there's only a minor character death warning. so considering that bill is a major character (isn't he?) he couldn't have possibly died ,right? xDD
Author's Response: Lolol, what will you do to me if he IS dead? xD and haha stop worrying, just read love xD
Date: 02/12/10 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
ehm ehm... you know what we're thinking? well well.. could you let me know what I'm thinking cuz I've got no clue about nothing xd Who's the pet, who's god?? and wait what? there will be just one more chapter to this amazing fic?
Author's Response: Lol YES I DO. I CAN READ MINDS. xD and hahaha just keep reading it'll make sense
Date: 02/12/10 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
omg omg omg! i almost died at the ending. x.x
and that some interesting sex-scene o.O
update soon~ ^^
Author's Response: lol, yay then? xD and hahaha it's the roughest sex scene I've written that wasn't a rape, to be honest xD
Date: 02/12/10 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning to the End...
I still say that Bill is Death. ^_^
Author's Response: and I still say that Bill is dead. xD
Date: 02/12/10 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
God what an intense and sexy chapter. I'm just blown away by Tom's interaction with his god...it's so creepy and awesome! And evil cliffie is EVILLL! :O
Author's Response: haha YAY I mad emy goal then xD And I'm glad you like the interaction xD and if I hadn't stopped there it probably would've been all weird xD
Date: 02/12/10 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
Shame i already know the ending.
Still I read like a devoted fan.
Author's Response: lol, well, seeing as the ending has had like 542043078 changes, don't be too sure? xD
Date: 02/12/10 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 10: Murder Finit (All The Right Things)
Did Tom escape? i.e. Bill let him out xDD
Author's Response: maybe? and who said Bill was alive to let anyone out? xD