Date: 09/04/09 01:23 am Title: To Be Repaid In Blood
well you two are genius, that's obvious enough. please continue this, i'm disturbingly addicted. especially since i knew a boy like this once.
*claps heartily* anyway well done!
Date: 08/26/09 12:51 pm Title: To Be Repaid In Blood
New chapter maybe? ^.^?
Date: 08/24/09 03:24 pm Title: To Be Repaid In Blood
HOLY SHEISSE!!
i dont think i spelt that right...
anyway...DAMN!!
i am like scared shitless for Grace!!
i wanna like cry in fear for her!!
=/
awesome story!
Date: 08/23/09 10:34 pm Title: To Be Repaid In Blood
I like this because the OFC is being treated like shit.
But for some reason I'm feeling... sorry for Grace?
Damn.
Date: 08/23/09 06:55 pm Title: To Be Repaid In Blood
Alice - lol OMG so funny! OMG I love that she hits on Bill!
I can't wait to see what Bill has in store for our little supid main character!
Date: 08/23/09 06:39 pm Title: Morning, Sunshine
lol I love Bill's duality the sticky sweetness and the harsh cruelty. *grins* lovely just lovely!
Date: 08/23/09 06:14 pm Title: Dessert
It was good het sex...I'm still not super into it...I can kind of tell that you weren't into it much either. Maybe it was that Bill wasn't into it. But it was just kind of rote rather then hot. I'm not a fan of Grace. Maybe I'll like her more when she's all submissive. I like Bill a lot but I can tell he's still bored.
Date: 08/23/09 05:51 pm Title: Genesis
*flutter claps* I love this it is a great start!
I love that you're writing het, there is NOT enough good het on this site. I'm still so dissapointed that there isn't!
Date: 08/23/09 10:38 am Title: To Be Repaid In Blood
(As Denkou)
Wow. You guys are amazing. I love this story, I love it to death!!!
Date: 08/23/09 01:27 am Title: To Be Repaid In Blood
This story is just awesome! So many interesting parts. I love how you kept Tom and his relationship in it. It adds another whole layer that may add to Grace's wierd feelings towards him if she finds out. Well 2:30 am, better jet :)
Date: 08/22/09 09:22 pm Title: Dessert
god bill is a fucking prick
Date: 08/22/09 07:31 pm Title: Genesis
The story was pretty good. But it kinda made it less interesting when this is a het fic. I would had wanted to see a Tom/Bill pairing, but with this kind of storyline.
Author's Response: Misa: God, isn't it the truth? Once this is done, I don't think I'll ever write het again. XD It's hell, I wish Grace were Tom. ;_;
Date: 08/22/09 06:49 pm Title: To Be Repaid In Blood
this story gets better and better. Mrs. Andrews wants a piece of Bill but who really could blame her. can't wait to see what happens when he comes back
Date: 08/22/09 04:19 pm Title: To Be Repaid In Blood
I loved this chapter..
Psycho Bill scares me but its all good :D
Date: 08/22/09 03:43 pm Title: To Be Repaid In Blood
O.O oh my word, that is inaine XD I loved it. But yeah what is Bill gonna do? I wanna know kinda. but yeah UPDATE SOON so I can find out.
Date: 08/22/09 03:36 pm Title: To Be Repaid In Blood
rrr... love it! Awesome!
Date: 08/22/09 03:12 pm Title: To Be Repaid In Blood
hes os scary D: id have to smother him in his sleep but he'd probably figure it out and kill me first lol
but i really like this keep up the good work
Date: 08/20/09 03:06 pm Title: Morning, Sunshine
This story seems to be interesting... go on ;]
Date: 08/20/09 01:19 am Title: Morning, Sunshine
wow!!! awesome story!!! can't wait to read a new chapter!
Date: 08/19/09 12:35 pm Title: Morning, Sunshine
loved it
update soon please :D