Date: 04/23/12 02:36 am Title: in the caress of the burn in a bottle of discomfort
Absolutely beautiful, but so sad. I know Bill was staying for Simone, but I think his state of limbo was worse for her than if he had followed Tom.
After my father died I had dreams where he would tell me things or I would catch him up on what I was doing and my life. That's what this felt like, Tom giving him the strength he needed to go on.
It was really beautiful and moving. Now I'm going to get a tissue and wipe my tear streaked face.
Author's Response: That's definitely what it was supposed to feel like, so I'm really glad you got that from it, hopefully in a more subtle way. I'm so sorry I made you cry, but thank you so much for reading it. <333
Author's Response: That's definitely what it was supposed to feel like, so I'm really glad you got that from it, hopefully in a more subtle way. I'm so sorry I made you cry, but thank you so much for reading it. <333
Date: 08/03/09 06:39 pm Title: in the caress of the burn in a bottle of discomfort
I almost never read death fic. But it's you, so. I knew it would, and it did, and I bawled. You make me speechless.
Author's Response: Awwwww. I love you so much.
Date: 08/03/09 02:59 pm Title: in the caress of the burn in a bottle of discomfort
Oh, so sad :(. Very well written, beautiful words, lines... images. The collection of moments passing by and I find the sadness and comfort in that at the same time. Guess I just needed to read once again about death of one or both of the twins. Damn, why do I even do this to myself? Always makes me feel like shit.
But yes, very beautiful, painful and emotional. I loved your way to express so much in so short episodes.
Author's Response: I generally don't like reading about the death of one of them either. It's always so sad. I'm gald you read it and enjoyed it, though. Thank you so much.
Date: 08/03/09 01:12 pm Title: in the caress of the burn in a bottle of discomfort
Damn, girl, made me cry :( This was so lovely, and so wonderfully written. Loved every part.
Author's Response: So sorry. I cried, too. Thanks, for reading it, though.
Date: 08/03/09 01:11 pm Title: in the caress of the burn in a bottle of discomfort
This is so sad. I swear, I'm almost crying. And I don't normally cry for fics. So, kudos. I really like it.
Author's Response: Thank you very much.
Date: 08/03/09 11:52 am Title: in the caress of the burn in a bottle of discomfort
Ugh. I cried so hard. All of your fics freaking make me cry and I love it! :(
*Favorites.*
Author's Response: I'm so sorry. I didn't mean to make you cry. I cried a little while writing it, though. =(
Date: 08/03/09 11:18 am Title: in the caress of the burn in a bottle of discomfort
Aww :) I like that, I really do. Even though it hurts so much, he's able to carry on, somehow :) If it had been written like a full oneshot (not saying this isn't a oneshot but like a continuous piece) I don't think it would've had the same impact :) yea to sticky notes :D
Bill climbs to the floor to hold her. He doesn’t know what else to do.
I love that line n_n
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I rather liked the idea of if feeling disjointed and such. Yay to sticky notes!